For You

She always traveled alone from village to village, performing to gain enough money for food and other necessities.

Until she met a certain foal.

Will she be able to protect him, the one pony who always stayed by her side, or will all her efforts be in vain?

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Mayhew Cullen

Mayhew Cullen #1 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

Wow... that was heavy... I kind of expected one of them to survive... Now I'm freaking sad. Nicely done.

contodaslasganas

contodaslasganas #2 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

3993927 I was thinking that too, but I felt that Trixie was a fighter, so the only way she would accede to death would be to have the one thing she fought for to die in front of her.
Believe me, it made me plenty sad just writing it.

Mayhew Cullen

Mayhew Cullen #3 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

3993950 Oh I believe you.

N3rdyGir1Squar3d

N3rdyGir1Squar3d #4 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

Once again you have earned a like, your only 2 sad fics are the only 2 stories ive ever hit the like button for

contodaslasganas

contodaslasganas #5 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

3994607 Thanks! I only recently decided to make sad fics, and I think the following story was the inspiration for it, especially for The Sacrifice.

Dearest Fluttershy by Terrasora

N3rdyGir1Squar3d

N3rdyGir1Squar3d #6 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

3994634 ive read it, actually after reading the sacrafice i read sad discord fluttershy fanfics for the rest of the day

contodaslasganas

contodaslasganas #7 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

3994664 Wow. That must have been a day full of feels. After writing these sad fics, I'm debating over whether to integrate large parts of sad chapters to my other incomplete stories...
I guess I'll just have to see where the stories take me.

Twi-Fi

Twi-Fi #8 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

The feels. Positively bawling. *Sniffle*

Well written. I like how you tied the past and present together seamlessly.

contodaslasganas

contodaslasganas #9 · Feb 24th, 2014 · 1 · ·

3996953 Thanks!
I used this story also as kind of an experiment in stringing together memories and present events, and I was trying to figure out how to have both without derailing the continuity of the story. I guess, for the most part, it worked!
But yeah, I almost cried when I did my last read-through. This is, in my opinion, probably the one story I invested the most effort and emotion into, so I'm glad you liked it.

Maromar

Maromar #10 · May 16th, 2014 · · ·

Pretty well written. I could have asked for more vivid descriptions and a less "rushed" feel, but considering this fic's overall length, they would be moot points at the most.

I felt emotion while reading this. I believe that is the most important aspect to get right when drafting a fic of this kind.

Excellent work, author.

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