A thirteen-year-old pegasister that's using MLP to stabilize her aggression.
What is life? Discord wants to know. In attempt to find out the answer, he goes to Fluttershy's. But when Fluttershy asks him "What is love?" Discord has a lot put on his mind... until he receives a gift from Fluttershy, leaving him shocked, but more open-minded.
Page generated in 0.122 seconds
Total duration
1,030 users online
1,585,434 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I'm gonna say it, because someone is going to say it at some point: "Lady don't hurt me, don't hurt me. No more."
5517426
Haha!
I forgot about that song!!!!
LOL! 
5517426 I was thinking that!
I liked it.
5517744
Thank you!
And I'm glad you did!
This was my second story I wrote, but first to successfully submitted!
5518007
LOL
Loved the dialogue!
5518013
Thank you!
I thought it might be cute if Discord got a pet!
Baby don't hurt me... I'll get to reading the story now and come back.
Post-reading comment: You really seemed to rush into things, I mean there was no tension leading up to the kiss or anything, it's a cute scene, but there was no build up to it or anything to really make it significant. It's a nice little story, but doesn't hit me as great. I'll still give you a thumbs up though.
5517489 Bullshit, you did not forget that song
5518873
But I DID!!!
Shrek. To both.
5520545
Shrek??
Much as this could've done with a little more development it was worth reading for the interaction between Discord and Mix-Up.
May have to adapt that concept (with your permission) to my own work when and if the plot allows.
5521551
Wait... You want to use Mix-Up and Discord for your own stories?
I'm sorry, but I don't really understand your message, that's all!
This story could've been fleshed out a bit more. The story in the description only comes in the end, and it's too quick and doesn't really get me to feel anything. It seems promising, but doesn't give us much to experience.
5522570
Sorry... I'm quite a rusher and well... I write what I think!
I hoped you would have named the chapters " baby don't hurt me " and " no more "
Okay, I'm back.
Ummm, yeah, that needed to be longer. Like WAY longer.
Note how I didn't say that it needed fixing, the premise, grammar and depth is there, it's just...too short. Rushed is a better word.
5613934
Eh heh heh...
Yeah, um, I'm a bit of a rusher...
"
She could actually be a good politician with the whole answering questions with another question thing.
I'm sure I don't have to tell you that the story would have been better if things didn't go by so fast, since a lot of people have already pointed that out.
I totally understand how hard it is to have a perfectly paced story, because if you already write down what you want to happen and it still feels rushed, then what else can you do besides add pointless filler? 
You're not alone in this problem, buddy....*sigh*
Still, I give this story an upvote for all the things I did like and the bold subject it was trying to take on.
Definitely better than anything I've written anyway...
I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.
5880227
Glad you enjoyed it, and yeah, I will not deny it: I have an awful habit of rushing.
Maybe second char wasn't as good as first, but still it was good.
5914380
What's a char?
5914471 I mean chapter.
Cute!!!!!!!!!!
6037171
Glad you like!
Ehhhh this felt rather rushed to me. Fluttershy's kiss and Discord's question to begin with seem to come out of nowhere.
6077089
First approved story. I've gotten better (I think).
This story went by fast.
6092817
First submitted story. I was new at this. I rushed. I've gotten better.
Discord having a pet platypus is BRILLIANT!!
Awesome proposal!
6660750
Yeah it is.
Baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me no more.