When Friendships End

When Gilda arrives at Rainbow Dash's house in the middle of the night, desperate for help, Rainbow Dash is eager to seize the chance at making amends. Gilda, however, might not be so forgiving.

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Infinite Carnage

Infinite Carnage #1 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · ·

Murder... well Gilda never was very good at keeping her cool.

Lastofakind

Lastofakind #2 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · ·

Gilda seem a bit over the top but this kinda dose seem like her on a worst case...

Awesome ending too, a good lesson.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #3 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · ·

Impressive, some errors here and there but not bad, it's realistic, some creatures just don't want forgiveness, honestly was a bit disappointed at how Lightning did not turn against her though but hey, it's your story, I personally like seeing both the old friends be enemies for Dash but that's just me. Good job

RenaissanceBrony

RenaissanceBrony #4 · Feb 7th, 2014 · · ·

3906327 Yeah, I was kinda thinkin' that we don't really know much about griffons or their way of life. Maybe they're more into murder than ponies. Who knows?

I'm glad you liked the ending! I didn't really know what it was going to be until I got to it.

RenaissanceBrony

RenaissanceBrony #5 · Feb 7th, 2014 · · ·

3907401 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

I didn't want Lightning Dust to turn on Rainbow Dash with the same murderous intent as Gilda because I just can't imagine any My Little Pony intentionally committing murder. Gilda, on the other hand, is a griffon, and we don't know much about griffons, so I thought it'd be more believable.

Oh, and If you could point out the errors, I'd be very grateful!

RenaissanceBrony