A Wonderbolt's first solo mission is sure to be memorable, but Rainbow Dash has no idea what she is in for when Spitfire sends her to stop a threat that could cause untold devastation to anything in its path.
When familiar faces complicate what should have been a straightforward mission, Rainbow Dash must face dangers unlike anything she has ever seen to save everyone.
Yeah, I still suck at writing descriptions. Sorry about that.
Anyways, this was written for EQD's Writers Training Ground challenge #6. The prompt, based on Pinkie Pride, was this:
Author, Equestria is in peril! Assemble a team of one Mane Cast member and their foil with attitude!
Hopefully it complies properly with said prompt, and hopefully it is better than my crappy description.
Wonderful story I enjoyed it ever so much
Cool story, terribly underrated IMO.
I liked what you did with the characters and thought they worked well together. Absolutely loved the setup and the monster, that was fantastic. The biggest flaw was the pacing, that needed work. There should have been more of them going through the factory, build some atmosphere and dread, especially with the baddies you had running around there. Still, a good read, I really liked it.