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the ninja king
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Not trying to be mean here, but if the story is written as poorly as the the description, I don't think I'll be able to read this
3893113 I am not the best righter.
So that why i need an editor.
Ill read because the description confuses me.
Ill like for the hell of it.
Will read when have time.
3893240 Is the description less confusing?
Got to say this is going to be a interesting story. Can't wait to see how badass Spike is. I want to see how Dash is going to be lol.
I hope the first time they meet they end up fighting. Anyway keep up the good work, can't wait to see your update.
3893529 want to be my co-auther?
I'm curious to see where this goes.
Please tell me you purposely made those grammatical errors in your story summary...
3893923 I am not a good speller. If you want to help me become my editor
3893966
I don't mind. I'll start off with you summary:
Spike is a monster hunter and one of the highest in the group he is a part of. However, his group is the only group in the world only dedicated to kill evil monsters. One day his mom gives him permission to go to bloodville. While he is there, he meets all sorts of monsters and soon comes across a non monster, Rainbow Dash, and she finds this dragon to be a perfect soul mate.
3893355 Misspelled but gives me a better picture.
3893212
Ok, now THAT'S a better description
But, it's still missing punctuation and seperation here and there
And, what's a "grope"?
3894398 you have to be kidding me! A grope is where two or more people work together to do stuff.
3894473
"Grope," or, the act of "groping" is according to the dictionary:
1. To search for something uncertainly with your hands.
2. To fondle someone for sexual pleasure (usually without their permission).
I think the word you are thinking of is "group," which means exactly what you described.
3895005 I am a bad speller and telling the diffrance from two simmalur words
3894002 I'll shot you PMs of chapters of my story when they are done
3897387
Sounds good. I'll keep them edited... I'll look over the first chapter as well.
3893966 I read it.
The fact that this is a spikedash story earns my attention, the plot earns my attention, iron will arouses my hate none, and bloodville is just weird.
10/10
3903772 once I post more chapters you will get the name Bloodvill.
Is Glinda an OC griffin?
Did you get my message. I corrected all the mistakes I saw on here too. Nothing was really changed.
3907665 no she is the one from the show
3907678 an edit is an edit no matter how small. If you don't want me to give you credit just say in the PM and I won't give you a lick of credit
3907736
What do you mean? I don't see any corrections of the edit that I sent you. When you sent it, I edited it and sent it back with corrected grammar. Did you get it?
Oh and her name is Gilda, not Glinda.
3909499 no. But it might come soon
3909549
I guess I could send it again.
The interactions between the characters feel... cheesy I guess. I mean both Rainbow Dash and Shining Armour attacked and tried to kill Spike then suddenly everything is okay and their friends?
I mean, it feels so... sudden. I don't mean to call you a bad author but well... the interactions between the characters could really, really really REALLY use some work. I would re-write those areas.
3929215 we'll they were attcked by other monsters and monster hunters.
3929215 and Shinning and Dash are being freadnly they are not freands with Spike yet.
3929507
well, not we'll. We'll is short for we will.
3929514
They wouldn't be friendly then! They just tried to kill each other. At the very minimum have some awkwardness or for Shining Armour's case have him be more apologetic for trying to kill the adopted son of the Sun Goddess. I want to say something about Spike being to easy going to be a badass monster hunter trained to fight and kill since birth but that just might be Spike and his eternal optimism.
3930629 ok I'll do that. And do you want to be my co-auther?
3930726 Sorry I can't. I am already writing one mlp fim fan fic and three non-mlp fanfics and don't have the time
. I could be a beta reader of sorts though.
3930745 Ok!
3930617 What where you trying to say?
3930859 You used a ' between we and ll, making it an abbreviation for we will. Making your sentence mean "We will they were attacked by other monsters and monster hunters".
Woah, it's back and alive!!!!
Awesome!!!
4912516 I am glad you are happy! Do you have any ideas for what monsters should repsent the resdnts of Bloodvill
would sweetie belle be a Vampire like her sister or would she be a siren?.
4913735 she will be a vampire.
What would Scootaloo be?
4920222 a harpy
Woooo yay! XD
Haha yes first comment, wo hoo
Everything is looking good so far. Keep it up..
4937909 thank you! What do you like about my story? Do you have any refashions for any monsters to be in my story at all?
You should have a robot in it like the terminator
4938141 do you wan't a specifc person to be a robot? Or just show that a robots are a type of monster?
4938219 yea just show a robot as a type of monster