Gamer,Brony, and Creapy Pasta reader (sort of).
Hi my name is Spike. With my two friends Twilight and Pinkie Pie, we will try to get back something that was stolen from me when I was I kid. Oh i all most forgot we are being chased by InterpolI's inspector Applejack who may or may not have a crush on me.
Page generated in 0.338 seconds
Total duration
929 users online
101,059 hits today, 2,139,894 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
An important note:
Not a good way to make a first impression. You should go find help regarding the rest of your grammar as well.
3814610 Point it out in and send me a PM ok?
3814648
By presenting your story to the masses, you agree to criticism that will be done publicly through the comments section. It's just the way things work.
Besides, anyone with the sense to see those issues is already thinking the same thing.
3814670 Just tell me where to edit i will will do it! and if you read my note I said I am BAD at grammar and spelling!
3814695
It's not just in certain parts; it's scattered all over. It's the job of an editor for this.
Also, for the record, I did not rate your story.
3814706 Oh. Do you want to be my editor?
3814710
Too busy to be an editor. You can go look for groups though that do it though.
3814716 Oh. But thank you for trying.
3814695 the frog can be blueblood and the Panda king can be NNM becuse of sly 3 when panda king joins the cooper gang or he can be Discord. also Ruby could be Trix becuse of the show boteing while zecora can be the guru from sly 3
3814733 I will think about it. and who is NNM?
3814766 Night mare moon
Not bad idea, spelling could use some work.
3814879 If want to help with the spelling you can become my editor.
SLY COOPER FTW!
3814968 Is that bad or good?
3814995 It means that I applaude just for using that video game. It's the best game ever. However, if you were to do a crossover for it, I would make Rainbow Dash as Sly, Twilight as Bently (Yeah, you got that right), and Applejack as Murray. As for Carmelita... I don't know. MLP X Sly Cooper really isn't that doable.
None the less, you're awesome for liking Sly Cooper
I'm going to say BOO YAH just for the fact you're attempting a Sly Cooper deal and because I fucking LOVE Sly Cooper...I'll do your editing.
3815218 Ok! PM all off my mistakes and I will also give you the password to look at my newest chapters.
3815296
alright, sure thing my man! I'll tell you what, I'll just copy and paste the one with all the mistakes corrected! That way, you only have to copy and paste!
I'll get on it right away then.
3814932 I'll be happy to help with the spelling but I'm not that good with grammar.
a SLY COOPER CROSSOVER AWESOME
Panda king = Fancy pants
Sir Ralegh = Blue blod
3816365 Do you know any good places for each of the fiendish five can be in? (any one can answer)
3814932 May I be your editor? I'm a fast typer and an amazing speller!
Also Sly Cooper FTW.
3817773 sorry I all ready have an editor but you can help me for locashions in the story
3817807 Are you sure?
You can have more than one editor.
I don't know about the locations.
3817852 Do you want to be my backup editor like when WhatMakesRainBows can't. Or you can do it together but you have to contact him if you want to work as one.
3817875 I suppose so.
3817381
Bulk biceps can be in Las Pegasus (las vegas)
zecora will be in Everfree forest
3817889 Well look on the bright side didn't say no.
3815008
If Rainbow was to be Sly, then Sorin should be Carmelita.
3820973 bwahaha YES!
Not bad, but the grammar is a little all over the place, for example Spike Copper, shouldn't it be Spike Cooper? Just saying that you have a crossover idea I haven't seen before, which is unique and pretty cool
5577771 I never noted that thanks! Do you wan't to be my new editor?
5579100 I'm sorry, I wish I could, but there are tests coming up at school and I need all the time I can get
5579104 well, not right now but later.
5579116 Sure then.
5579118 got it, can you PM me when you are ready?
5579197 alright.
What happens next?! When are you coming back?! Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We need more(maybe check first chapter to see if you want to update)