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Stardust Speedster


Aloha, Folks! I am The Speedster. Lover of Art, Music, Writing, and all that other stuff. I'll write down anything in my spare time, then turn it to a story. I may seem shy, but I can surprise you.

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Equestria has undergone a new age of machinery and travel among the stars. Robotic helpers have vastly improved the lives of those living on the planet. Thanks to the genius of Dr. Oliver Starswirl, traveling among the far off worlds is now a reality. But there are dangers in that. Hostile beings began to destroy recon ships, killing innocent lives, and outraging the rulers of this utopian society. A new testing Initiative begins, codenamed "The D.R.A.G.O.N. Operatives". These beings are infused with the power to control machinery on a much stronger level than that of any normal person. The tests were successful, but it held...terrible side affects. After realizing that these hand made demons were a threat, the empire cast them out, sent to destroy any threats to Equestria. It works, and no more threats are seen. But years later, much after the testing of D.R.A.G.O.N operatives stopped, movement has occurred on a lone Spaceship.

As this happens, two new students join the Operative Initiative Academy, or O.I.A. U.N.I.C.O.R.N Operative Twilight Sparkle and young Operative in training Spike have finally made it. But what people will they meet, and what challenges will they face?

This was from a story idea by shade123226. I owe him for this idea, so thank him as well!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 39 )

pretty great, I like the earlier foreshadowing you gave us at the beginning, most successful, Yah?


but anyway, pace yourself and don't rush it.

Cool a Sci-fi story featuring Spike as one of the main characters. You have my attention and I hope this story is successful.

SSA

Ok, so I just read through the first chapter and I'm liking it so far, definitely want to see where you take it. I would review/critique it here but It's kinda long so if you want me to PM you with the full thing just say so. Otherwise good job and thanks for the shout out. I will, however, be with holding my mustaches until further work has been done.

Awesome chapter.
hope to see more of them and Btw how do the machines look like?

This is going to be good.

4190921 I'd sure appreciate that. Thanks for offering.

4190930 The machines vary. I will go into more detail of a few when they get the tour in the next chapter, though.

This seems like it will be very interesting, can't wait to see where it is going. Hmm I am split so far, I need to see alittle more about each girl and how they are in this story but I am liking Spike x Pinkie/or Shy. But its far to early to pair Spike off yet, need to get a feel for the girls first lol. I hope there is still alittle dragon in Spike lol.:moustache::trixieshiftright:

you got my attention. good start and all i will wait for the next one:twilightsmile:

4200558 Aw, go on, then. This is becoming one of my more popular stories!

I hope you do a crack shipping with Spike

4212497 With whom? My editor wants Spike to get with Dash, but I can't be sure till i get further in. I'd love to see what you had in mind! >;)

4212985
Well... I like it when it's new, like Spike x Zecora, Spike x Octavia, Spike x Photo Finish, Spike x Lightning Dust and so on.

I think Spike X Octavia should work because if you read love sic i will leave you like awwwwwww and some:fluttershysad: but if it where for me i will go with applejack.

4246797 Octavia's already taken in this story, but that's next chapter! Sorry it's taking awhile, I can't do much story typing until my proccesor gets fixed. -_- But AppleSpike, you say? Hmm... I like it!

He is awesome just totally epic

This was a interesting chapter. Twi will take some time to adjust but I think you put her with the perfect roommates to do just that. As for Spike I love how he has a thing for pancakes. I do wonder how this whole Rarity thing will play out. I do love it when Spike has a chance to get a girl (and to be honest as of right now I am split between her and Shy) But that is something I can't really say who I am hoping he ends up with till we see more of the characters personalities in your story. (might be funny tho to have all 3 girls in his dorm fall for him, that would make for a ton of laughs):moustache: I can't wait to see how they do in class, I can see Twi being great in class while Spike... not so much. But when it comes to combat practice he is a natural (if not beyond normal instincts) While Twi is a slow start but her break down of her opponents is second to non.

One question will each character have their own unique and personal weapon or gadget

Huh, I'm a bit surprised that you haven't made Spike a DRAGON or is that going to come in later. Either way I'm liking this story so far and can't wait to see more.

yaay another chap Im still with Applespike but good chapter here...
keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

4300318 Yeah, Each group will have diffrent types of weapons. But we'll get into that soon enough!:pinkiehappy:

4307412 Hmm I wonder what Spike's weapon will be, Going by personality I can see him with a broadsword to go with his dragon strength so he can cause crushing damage. Or a sword and shield with Spike personality he would want a style that can protect Twi and anyone else that might be relaying on him. My other idea for Spike's weapon is pure enhancements, something to make him more durable, stronger, and faster (something like the ultimate predator if you will lol :trixieshiftright:) Don't get me started on everyone, I can see like 5 or 6 weapons for each of them. (Even tho Spike is always my first thought lol) :moustache:

This is great. I am liking your Spike. You just gave me a idea of drawing Spike gorging on a mountain of pancakes. Or a sexy Shy with pancakes on her as Spike is drooling lol. Anyway I do like the idea of FlutterSpike like everyone else:yay:. It is just the way you wrote it and your Shy is sooo cute. I would love to see Spike flip into berserk state from someone messing with her:fluttercry::moustache:.I would love to see Shy and Spike end up being partners, Spike being almost pure offensive while Shy play the support role. She keep Spike healthy as he deals the heavy damage. I also think having those two together would be interesting since their roommate. would lead to some funny (and sexy) moment :trixieshiftright: I do want Gable to be Spike's first real opponent and he says something really messed up about Shy that really makes Spike flip earning him the title of Purple dragon. hmm that would be a interesting team The Purple Dragon and Yellow Angel. :moustache::yay: Anyway great work hope to see more from this really soon.

I went back and looked at some of the older comments. You seem to have shown interest in AppleSpike. I can't say if that would work or not right now since we haven't seen much of AJ yet. I have always like the pairing but it always depends on how AJ treated Spike. She could easily fall into a sisterly role with him. I do think that having him kinda spit between the two as the two (Shy and AJ) try to win him over and subdue in would create so many funny moments. That why you don't have to make up your mind right off the back who you want him too and leave you open to write funny/romantic moments with both pairings. (then you can decide if you want to pair them off are do a small harem them with the three.) I think having the two trying to win Spike's affection would be too funny to watch :ajsmug::heart::moustache::heart::yay:

Looks like Spike has made an enemy and gained a few fans. Though Twilight will have to learn how to make friends without Spike being there to support her.

4370062 I agree with him but still for me applespike :yay::twilightsmile: keep up the good work

4369994 oh, man. You like my story, when your's is WAY BETTER. Seriously, your Spike Fic is awesome :D. I would love to see you draw something like that, judging by your artwork I've seen!^_^ Yeah, a bit early for other characters, but we will develop them more during the next chapters of the first day.

4371866 Lol i don't think my story is better. Your will have a much easier time keeping people coming to it then mine. I think my fan base has started to dwindle a little now that I think about it. I do have the next 2 chapters already written and trust me they will be as funny as the other ones. I just think people don't like the whole Spike the dog thing even with me trying to make him into a interesting and loveable character again. I can see people really falling in love with your story.

4371900 Regardless, I think your story is great. And, if you ever decide to draw one of those pics, be sure to tell me.^_^

I think the link to the Spike pic is broke. Anyway, a bit short but sheds a little little on the enemies of sort in this story.

Nice, but short.
Keep it up bruh.

Spike the Brawler:moustache:

4438307 Oh, shoot. I'll fix that tonight. I'm planning on making the chapter longer, because this was pretty short. Thanks for pointing that out!

Comment posted by Frostbite4 deleted Nov 25th, 2017

Great chapter. Excellent story, my friend. Keep writing chapters, I want to see what happens next. :rainbowwild:

Comment posted by AppleDJack deleted Nov 19th, 2016

Is this story cancelled?

Spike is best pony

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