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DARKPHANTOM13


A phantom of shadows and darkness that wander this site in search of Spike fanfics. May the darkness be with you.

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There is a force that is controlling the Heartless and is out to consume all the worlds in darkness. After their world was consumed by darkness, their friend, Spike, fell into the void of his own will, and ended up in another world. Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Pinkie learned they weilders of the Keyblade, the ulitmate weapon against the Heartless, and has found a master to train them. After years of training they are ready to set out to other worlds and to find both Spike and a way to bring back their world and all the others that fell into darkness.

Humanized/A.U./While containing elements and some of the worlds this story is separate of the games.

Inspired by Kingdom Hearts F.I.M Rise of the Elements

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 41 )

What sick madness have I spawned.
The funny part was that I had just began typing up two new chapters for RoTE when I got this notification. :derpytongue2:
Also, Literary Sins Incoming! (Cinemasins parody for fanfics)

4726105 What can I say, I've been wanting to write a KH crossover for a long while now. Your fic inspired me to get off my lazy butt and write it.

4726119 yup now if only I could get off my lazy butt and draw up a comic for it.

Comment posted by Spirit Shift deleted Jul 21st, 2014

Literary Sins: EVERYTHING WRONG WITH
Kingdom Hearts: The Elements of Light and the Warrior of Darkness By, DARKPHANTOM13
Spoilers Inbound!

Twilight’s P.O.V.

Oh this is gonna be one of THOSE stories. Ding!

"You hit your head when those disgusting things attacked us and knocked you out, dear."

Did she hit her head or did she get knocked out? Did one cause the other or did each one individually only half knock her unconscious. Ding!

"I don’t trust this fella,"

Either that or suicide.Ding!

The figure yell as he stood on his knees only to be cut off by Spike slamming into him. Sending them both to the endless abyss below.

This version of Spike is less badass than mine, but he has the moral high ground. Ding!

Her cyan, short-sleeved shirt, black, tight, track shirts, blue sneakers, and dark blue, fingerless gloves showed off her figure perfectly.

Either she's wearing two shirts and no pants or it's a typo for the word skirt. Either way, that's a sin. Ding!

It’ll take more than a little fall to make him kick the bucket.

If a romance between her and spike becomes glaring, I'm officially deeming this a fanfiction of a fanfiction. not a sin, just pointing that out.

I would like to thank Brotaku D Blade for letting me use some of his ideas and keyblade designs.

User does not exist. Ding! Has this been in the works that long?

Current Sin count: 6

I am happy to see this finally coming to life. I have been eager to read this story and see where it goes.:moustache::rainbowkiss:

4726310 Oh, thanks for pointing out that last one. This one had been in storage for a while.

I have to say Mr. Phantom that I love you and hate you at the same time. You make a lot of stories that I love to read but because you have so many you have to focus on all of them and that means I have to wait for updates. Why do you torture me so? But other than that keep up the good work.

That's a very a good story can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy: but i have a question : was spike lost even before they ( the mane 6 ) went to other worlds ?

4728964 Well you'll just have to wait and see.

4728101 Good to see people enjoy my work.


4726337 Me too and I have a lot of idea for this in mind.

Well I can see that this would lead to strange but funny turns when the six meets the Disney charaters. though I do hope these a Spike pov in see what he's doing. All an all :heart: this story!

4726310 NO!! YOU BEAT ME TO IT!!! DANGIT!! Still gonna do one!!

Fictionsins: EVERYTHING WRONG WITH!!
Kingdom Hearts: The Elements of Light and the Warrior of Darkness
By, DARKPHANTOM13

1)

Twilight’s P.O.V.

I'm not a female. Haha, nice try.

2) Wait, so is the beginning the first time they meet the darkness or what? Did they just happen to know who they were?

I, myself, had my magic ready in one hand while I held my family spell book tightly in the other.

3) I thought Twilight already knew magic. Da fudge does she need a family spell book for? And I call massive bull is one chapter that book saves her life.

Pinkie was behind us with some needles in her hands; her normally poofy hair was straight with a serious look on her face.

4) That's not Pinkie. That's Pinkamena.

The screams of other people being burned alive or being attacked had died out.

5) Wait, so who started the fire? Was it Spike?

Darkness.

Nothing but soul crushing darkness.

6) I thought it was Heart-theft?

""No matter what happens, you all protect and help each other. You’ll stick together no matter what and try to be happy. Okay?"

"Why yes, of course darling, we promise."

7) Bull. Twilight would be saying that. Their is no way, from the messages from God themselves, that Spike would ever say that. He's just in Twilight's human shoes.

8) That makes no sense. The mysterious person could've easily taken another, other than Spike. So why chose him out of the Mane Six? When you steal one of the Main Six, their screwed. So why steal Dragon boy, when you can pretty much let them get away with at least one and telling your boss you caught one? Wouldn't that make sense? I understand saying that Twilight owned him by using bits of magic. But couldn't he deflect it? And why not finish her then and now? Didn't he say that he think they didn't have to be alive? Just bring her over? Thinking he's powerful, OWN HER FLANK ALREADY DUMMY!!

Masters Celestia and Luna for like, eight years now.

9) And where the fudge did they come from? And where are they now?! Ponyville? Destiny Island? I'm lost!! HELP!!! I NEED A MAP!!

"Today is the day that we can finally go to other worlds for the first time since...that day, and I want to be prepared."

10) Want, or am? You trained for eight years, Twilight. EIGHT YEARS!!! The f*ck have you been doing during that time?!

"Don’t worry Twilight, we’ll find him. We all Pinkie promised that after we finished Celestia and Luna’s training that you, me, Shy, AJ, Rarity, and Pinkie would find him together...

11) Where's A.J.? Where's Applejack?! WHAT DID YOU TO HER?!?!

...nothing will tear us apart ever again."

Just like the Author tore my heart apart for only including Applejack in the beginning.

BONUS ROUND: How many clichés are in here?

12) Horrible Dream that haunts me cliché.

13) Mysterious Man Appears cliché.

14) Protect your friends/yourself no matter what cliché.

15) The 3 Nightmare Name Calling cliché.

16) Sleeping somewhere stupid w/ or w/out drooling cliché.

17) It's the day we... cliché.

18) We will find you no matter what cliché.

19) Trainee Masters cliché.

20) We will never be tore apart ever/again cliché.

Total Sins: 20
Statement: Mysterious Man. ("He feels about as trustworthy as a scorpion with an attitude problem.")

4731963 haha first. You should come do mine. I do it to everyone else. I would love it done to me

I forgot to say this, well reading this for some odd reason my head was playing "Night of Fate" though I can't remember which one. If you're wonder what I mean by which one if there was only one. Well there's one from KH 1, KH chain of memories, KH re:coded, and KH 1.5.

4726310 This story has had it's sins pointed out. Congrats! I humbly ask that you, DarkPhantom, please add this story to this group Literary/Fiction Sins

4731963 I would also like for you to become an admin, you look like you've got what it takes :pinkiehappy:

4729037 Sweet I just reread this.... again and there are so many things that can happen with this one. I have alot of hope for your Spike from your other visions of him that you have brought to life so far and this one I feel won't disappoint ether. It will be epic when we get to see what the girls and Spike can do now. I wonder how many of those ideas we thought of before will make it into the story lol.

I do enjoy the Kingdom Hearts series. I'll be sure to keep my on this.

TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH!!! K lets re-read this thing.

I have the feeling Torch is going to be my favorite. :yay:

5826465 He's basically the GHOSTs from destiny if they had more personality and were more funny.

5827119 And trust me, he has a very important role other than someone for Spike to play off. As for what let me ask you a question, has there been any high tech or futuristic worlds? (and the Tron ones don't count)

5827140 Do you mean are their any hih tec worlds in the actual games or in the worlds I'm planning? The answer to both either way is yes.

5827162 I was talking about the games. And are you sure? The closest thing I could think of for the games are the Grids and the Deep Space spaceship.

5827200 I was talking about Deep Space, there might be one in KH3 but otherwise idk

Nice to see this story is still going. I was wondering when it would update. I can't wait to see how the girls handle when they run into Spike again. I think they all might go anime heart eyes when they see the man he grew in to lol. I wonder what worlds they will visit. It would be funny if they go to Pixar worlds on top of Marvel/Disney/Starwars/Final Fantasy worlds. I would love to see him meet Wall-e and Hiccup lol.

5828838 Well Rarity and maybe Rainbow will. For Rarity until he starts busting heads like a hardcore street brawler.:rainbowlaugh:

5828838 Lol it'll definitely be different from how I did it. Shocked faces and beat downs galore on my side

Your stories almost always put a smile on my face but then i reach the of the story.

Another promising story left to die, such a shame:ajsleepy:

Cool, I thought this story was dead

Thanks for coming back to writing. Now all you have to do is release chapters on a semi-regular basis. Seems simple....it's never that simple. *sigh* But whatever, I just want you to release chapters whenever you're ready. No use getting a half finished chapter. Good luck with your writing.

What happens next please tell!

Dang this was updated in March, how did I not notice!!

to the teeth that were shaped like a piece of cake. The chain at the end of the handle ended in three small balloons

*Holds head in hands and groans while chuckling hysterically*

That's right you're using my old designs... lol Don't get me wrong they're still good but it only serves to remind me that at some point I have to go back and re-write those first 10 or so chapters with the new character and Keyblade designs from the comic in mind.

Otherwise i'm getting a strong sense of Deja vu with this chapter? Hm I wonder why :trollestia:

7324118 Who knows.:applejackunsure::trollestia: Anyway, I would like to get your opinion on Torch as a character so far.

7324932 lol The only thing i can say is that in the last chapter it took me a second to realize you used a Destiny Ghost, despite the fact I was playing Destiny before reading it. But I enjoyed him in this chapter. Spike needs a snarky companion to bounce of off.

Will this story ever continue?

I wonder if this story will continue?

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