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I expect a original story not nyx
So far so good
3711348 I assure you, this is NOT a Nyx story.
3711390 3711473 There more on the way.
why everyone make nightmare moon fillies before me?
3714903 Don't know, it just happens I guess.
3719226 I'm glad your liking the story so far. The next chapter may take me a while as it's a very long chapter to get done and published.
this is very VERY eerile similar to a story i read and follow
A large portion of this chapter is almost word for word the same as ( Mothers, by KnightMysterio ). To the point of looking like a cut and paste with name changes. Anything to say about that?
Interesting. I see a lot of similarities to a story that I've written.
Including some direct rips.
You've changed a few details, but the latter part of this story is essentially Mothers. Which I wrote.
Any comments?
i am glad that Scootaloo has a family now and i got a question who Scootaloo second caretaker since Rainbow Dash is her Mother now
Haiku fu review:
Her spirit renew
Rising to the heaven’s view
Kiss the sun’s bright bloom
♥♥♥♀♀♀♀♀♀♀♥♥♥
☺
I would delete this chapter and rewrite it compleatly. This is basically word for word a story I've read. I thing this story is good so I won't report you today, but if you have not changed it by tomarrow I will.
I can't see the new chapter :(
3728525 same here
What happened? What story?
i forgive you and ok
3767512 There was an issue with Ch. 6. I'm trying hard to correct that now.
Has it been said that if one put enough chimpanzees in front of typewriters, they would reproduce the works of Shakespeare? I figure a few ways things happen. Pure serendipity is one, then there is reading a piece and then forgetting it except in the unconscious where it bubbles up under the guise of original thought. Both of these are somewhat innocent of malice and should receive tolerant badinage with a dose of "meh". ☺ Then there are the baldfaced thieves and plagiarizers who deserve punishment. The great question is, how to tell the difference.
☺☺☺☺☺☺Well. Your text leads me to think that it was unintentional and I say "Go ahead and rewrite, but, keep writing and "Damn the torpedoes"". ☺☺☺☺☺☺
i like this story, but i do find it hard to believe you wrote it all on your own. It was, i would estimate 95% word for word from the story "mothers" the plot, the wording, even the sequence of events.
3768222 I am trying to rewrite the story as best I can and sadly, I have no torpedoes to damn.
I did however have typewriting monkeys but Fluttershy took them away. Something about needing a good talking to.
3768349
Okay ouch, 95%, that's a bit harsh but... insightful. As i stated before I am working on a rewrite of this chapter and hope it to be better than the chapter it was.
3768328 3767560 Thank you both for forgiving me, it greatly renewed my spirits to know there are good people out there that can be as kind as Fluttershy in the world. This chapter will be rewritten and reposed along with another chapter once I am done.
3773957 Your welcome
and ok
3773957 I may be willing to edit this story, as I am not related to you as a friend (just yet) I can give a pretty good Nazi insight... But I am writing a fimfic of my own, as well and I have yet to enjoy the pleasure of reading this story. I will read this tomorrow and message you my decision if that is ok.
3783401 That's perfectly fine. Thank you and good luck on your story.
3783521 and I say that because im in need of an editor as well tehehe
3783543
Finding editors does seem to be a problem... sometimes.
was that a reference to friendship is witchcraft i saw?
The daily trots sounds like diarrhoea
3786487
Where?
I really hate to do this but the Rarity/Fluttershy section is copied word for word from another story I have read. I think its called Green. You should fix this
3786887
After a few tense moments Fluttershy finally sipped her tea, nervously, but it was a good sign, she hoped. “Well… yes, I… I am, I’m part dragon. My…my father is a dragon.
watch from 8:40
”
3786979 I'll double check this. I don't believe so but if so I will correct this immediately.
Edit: Okay I can see similarities, but I can assure you that no they are not word for word from the story Green. However I will have my editors double check this for me.
3787117 O....kay....
3787239 just thought id let you know before someone else did
3787297 Thank you. I've got my editors on this.
3787381 It's getting taken care of.
Well that escalated quickly...
3809751 you confuse me i think i must read to understand you
Im still confused but i guess it is some messed up stuff but you gotta admit it explains why dashies main is the same color as celestiqas only much much richer and darker
i didn't expect twi would get pregnant with moon. i thought she'd just find a foal moon on a return visit to the castle or just laying on her bed when she got home from the summer sun party
I'm surprised no one else has commented on this chapter yet
i liked this. i was well paced in my opinion and twilight's not understanding was rather humorous.
the fact that the other five of the mane six were involved in her being pregnant was a surprise though. i knew Luna sort of had a role because of nightmare moon, but the others took me by surprise.
i liked this a lot, though the sudden turn into mac's past threw me off a little. i assume it had a really important purpose.
that was nice and very well done... but those last few words worry me
i love that luna and celestia and the other parents.
and i love how everypony's worrying about what race the foal will be born as, when we all know it'll be an alicorn because of nightmare moon.
and, i know it's late but, HAPPY NEW YEAR!! or should i say HAPPY WINTER WRAP UP?
man this chapter went for a long time, though that could just be how i feel because i didn't sleep last night, thus spent most of it reading fimfics.
this is very good. i like how moon has learned how much the night is loved.
i look forward to reading the next chapter.
Now that is finally read I can post this. I actually started reading this last night, but was stopped when my iPad went dead and since I was at work all day I didn't get till about 10:30 to continue reading from where I'd left off, that being after rarity found scoots in the church.
Now that I've finished reading I can say I loved this. Finally scoots brasher family.
though I will admit, I NEVER expected celestia to be rainbows mum. That was a. Total shocker
Really looking forward to the next chapter now.
It's almost midnight now, so I'll finished this comment, then I'm off to bed.
Just want to say, I'm really happy for scoots again. Not only does she now have three mothers and an uncle in spike, but she's got twilights parents as her grandparents and celestia as rainbows mother. That means she has a princess for a mother and an aunt and grandmother. What a combination!
3711774 well darn, because I happen to like nyx. That's fine though... I'll have to read the story now then don't I?
3726768 what is it eerily similar to ?