Hello, my name is ANearPerfectStudent. I am an amateur writer, mostly writing in my scraps of time between work and my growing addiction to gaming. Feel free to PM or chat with me if you ever want to.
Twilight grew up a loving mare. To wake up on the moon as a new pony was something unexpected... But how she got there is going to be even more unexpected... As she begins to regain her memory, her questions only get harder to answer... She longs for the good days with Celestia and her friends... But somethings the past is a dangerous place to go...
And it definitely isn't going to be fun...
(Rated gore for safety in future chapters)
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plz write more
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Thanks, I plan to write the entire story over 5 or so chapters (maybe more
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Interesting introduction. Nightmare Twilight? I'll definitely follow this.
Also: Does Twilight like bananas?
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Only at parties in the TARDIS
I... am horribly curious; you got me. I'll be really looking forward to more. :)
Pretty good, but you might want to find an editor. There are a few grammatical errors here and there.
cant wait to see where you go with this
... This needs editing. Its got some flow problems. The scene jumps are jarring and the lack of real set up in the flashbacks is confusing. Need more details in them and a little less focus on the framing device.
Also... Coma, not comatose, unless you meant for it to be comatose state.
Not subconscious, unconscious... That is all.
all i can say is MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2688549 So, still waiting for more chapters
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-Techy
Another!
Shame this story is dead
MMMOOAAAARRRR!!!!!