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ANearPerfectStudent


Hello, my name is ANearPerfectStudent. I am an amateur writer, mostly writing in my scraps of time between work and my growing addiction to gaming. Feel free to PM or chat with me if you ever want to.

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Hello reader,

If you’ve managed to find this notebook and can actually read this text, I dare say I’ve either been saved or I’m dead at this point. Ignore the blood and ink blotches on the pages, I can’t say I’m writing this in my best condition right now. But I’m getting ahead of myself…

First, let me introduce myself… My name is Twilight Sparkle, protege to Equestria’s Princess Celestia, the Eternal Sun. The year is 1004 ANM... Sometime in the summer or spring back in Equestria if my companion is correct.

Well… I guess I’ll tell you a little bit of how I got here. It started with a spell from Star Swirl the Bearded, one of Equestria’s greatest magicians. I cast his spell to seemingly no effect, but when I woke the next day, I had found every one of my friend’s cuties marks to have swapped. It took so much work, but I… we managed to fix it all, leading us back to the spell once again, and fixing it. Then…

Forgive me, I’m starting to smudge the ink- this has just been so much for me. It hurts to recall all these memories.

We cast the spell once again, a fixed version, one that should have finished it's actually purpose. I was surrounded in a blinding light, glyphs appearing around me as it carried me up. I could recognize a handful of them, projection runes, location markings, just to name a few. Then… everything went white


This story features quite a number of dark or gruesome scences. While not enough to be marked as a straight dark fiction, it does have horrific moments.


Drifting Away is an alternate universe story taking place after the events of season 3, up to the point of Twilight's alicorn transformation. All events are canon up to that point.


I would like to thank my wonderful collaborator LonelyLullaby for their support and help in writing and improving this work. I couldn't have done half of this without them.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

Interesting and well written. I eagerly await the next chapter.

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Thank you! My editor and I are working hard on the next two!

interesting i asume this is some form of test to see if twilight will ascend when she returns if she returns

8204380 Perhaps! I wouldn't be spoiling anything just yet, though. Thanks for commenting! :twilightsmile:

Before I start reading this, I must know: What are the sex and gore tags for, and how bad does it get?

I ate meat. I devoured a living creature.

That's herbivochauvanism, Twilight! Shame on you. Plants are living creatures, too! :rainbowlaugh:

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Sex is for implied sexual scenes and stuff

Gore is for blood.

It's teen so none of the stuff is actually detailed, but it's going to be violent/jazzy at times

Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

this is really good. Especially the parts when you make the end parts a journal.

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Teen Gore isn't like Mature gore. There will be mentions of blood and other things but nothing to the deamtail that you'd find in mature fics.

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Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far!:twilightsheepish:

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We have plans for a lot more than 25k, but we’ll reach that when we get there

Intriguing to say the least.
I have a question, why did you use double double-quotes?

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Forgive the late response, I've been away for a few days. The double quotes is a bit of a stylistic choice on my editor and I's part. In the story, there are two languages being spoken, though both can be understood due to magic (exposition stuff. It'll be a lot more concrete in chapter 5), but just to keep it simple, "" "" implies the language is being translated, " " is Twilight's naturally understood language. For actual reasons why we chose this particular method, the translation runes work like two people speaking (Kind of like in documentaries where they are interviewing a person in another language, and there is someone dubbing overtop of their original words to help them understand.

I understand its a little confusing at the moment, but we should clear it up in the next few bits of the story... :twilightblush:

Your story has been accepted into the Good Grammar Directory.
 
Congratulations! :twilightsmile:

Will we ever read Celeatia and the other's thoughts and reaction to Twilight missing?
Sure Celestia be blaming herself greatly, and yeah it is her fault, miss Chess master grand plan backfired big time.

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Personally, I am not a fan of cutting away from the main story. I doubt there will be a true side chapter to Equestria, but there will be some time where those feelings are explored.

Hmm... not bad, not bad at all.

You're never going to update this again are you? :_(

At least she don't forget spike

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