An infectious disease is spreading throughout Equestria, and it is bringing everyone to a panic trying to find out how to cure it, but when it becomes apparent that it can't be cured life continues on as normal, albeit with the inhabitants of the planet being quite a bit more cautious with their steps. But what happens when Twilight Sparkle becomes infected? What will happen to her and her friends once she's gone?
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no, but in all reality this is probably in the top five saddest chapters I have planned so far, all the rest of it will be filled with badassery and old villains who have turned somewhat good in the event of a world crisis.
All the feels
5013785 Cool! I'll be watching
Eep. Talk about feels. I thought the setup of this story was rather hasty, and you get confused with syntax in a few places, but that ending was perfect.
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I dunno why, I just felt like there was some element somewhere I left out. I may just be overanalyzing my own work but either way thanks for the comment (also, I would really appreciate it if you would point out the errors)
Really? I kind of felt like the ending was a bit lacking
It wasn't really anything specifically wrong, but I thought you could have fleshed out the idea more. As for syntax, the story's pretty clearly third person, but you slip into defining things with a nebulously defined 'we' once or twice.
Nah, the ending was great. Maybe a little more with the world speeding up around her, being unable to make sense of what her friends are saying anymore but still feeling comforted by their presence, but the end itself was excellent.
Eh, just get Discord to fix it