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Princess Twilicorndog


Sorry I've been dead for a while. I have had absolutely no motivation, and whenever I did the resulting work sucked. I promise I'll try to be more active.

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Twilight - The soft, diffused light from the sky when the sun is below the horizon, either from daybreak to sunrise or, more commonly, from sunset to nightfall.

Twilight Sparkle was the only pony who could see Luna in the darkness.
Luna wasn't saved by the Elements. She was saved by Celestia's personal protégé.


Inspired by http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rV_0n5gp1fE&list=PLJeC6bBkdlEzrvH0WTMgA7_Ejy-K6lqiW
[Slice Of Life] tag for two reasons: I wasn't sure of the category, and the story DOES happen in the show.

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Comments ( 9 )

I love that music video. It is one of my favorites.

[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=rV_0n5gp1fE]

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Mine too <3 Why do you think this fic exists? xD
If you look up "Best PMV" on Youtube, this video is the first xD
Magic? I think not! :twilightsmile:

It's very well written :twilightsmile:
It gives an ending, not exactly an alternate ending, that would make 100% sense when watching the real episode. :raritywink:
Now, have a mustache. :moustache:
:yay:

I always found it strange that Twilight didn't seem to know that Celestia and Luna were sisters, considering it was spelled out in the first half minute of the first episode.

One wonders how much she actually retains of what she reads. :twilightoops:

In the episode, all of the Mane 6 are surprised when Celestia reveals Luna is her sister.
So, yes. :twilightblush:

Time for a Bloodfin review.

The story starts out just as we all remember it from the second episode of season one, but the skill used in writing it manages to capture every feeling we saw in a manner that could deliver the same emotions to someone who's never seen it. The instance where Twilight is inside Nightmare's subconcious is, however, a new portion I hadn't seen before. This doesn't mean that it was bad, I actually loved that! I was nearly about to give up and pass by the rest of the story because it was so familiar and that part brought in a sense of mystery which drew me back into it. The idea wasn't very original for the most part and I would have loved to see it start off with the battle in the ruins, but end with Twilight learning the happenings between Luna and Celestia instead of retelling the story we already knew so I'll have to deduct points for that.
Overall it's a very good story with a wonderful style in the writing. A well earned favorite and thumbs up from me.
My score: 8 out of 10

DW Bloodfin:moustache:

loved this story would love if you made more. ^_^

More please! Sequel! *clap, clap, clap* Sequel! *clap, clap, clap* Sequel! *clap, clap, clap*

Instant Favorite!:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::pinkiehappy::fluttershyouch::ajsmug:

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