Well then here's how it happened for the last year or so I've been working on an outfit in my spare time with my spare change and it was the sexiest stainless and silk tux in this world and by gum I was going to show it off at the local theaters annual talent show.
and I did.
For I was "Mercury the Magnificent!!! Magician Extraordinaire!" and my act was going absolutely brilliantly until the band of scarves I dropped in the hat from my sleeves snagged on the multidimensional worm hole in the bottom.
Now with my introduction to Equestria occurring within a High security area and no explanation for how I got there followed by a string of wacky mishaps and shenanigans.
Well to put it simply I didn't think my first time stoned would be quite so literal.
AN: lets see where the bandwagon takes me cover art would be nice.
not going to be turned to stone
Dude, get an editor.
There's a good fic that's struggling under the weight of poor punctuation and spelling.
Where do I get editors at? i know I'm bad at spelling and punctuation I'm dyslexic and all I own is a Bork as fork netbook and a Samsung Mega add in fimfiction's weird upload style and I really need an editor.
his song would be Ken Ashcorp's Supernatural
4005575
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/202107/league-of-humans-acting-villainous/thread/95025/listen-to-this
4012280 Thanks I had turned off group notifications I'll go find an editor then
that and i say it needs a little more emotion from the speakers that you have in this
4012805 Noted thanks for the feedback
4012847 yup. i actually think its a good basis . so keep it up and just try your best
4004709 Agreed. Go onto the forums and post for an editor.
4026856 I did post to three of the editing groups linked to from the LoHAV group that
4012280 directed me to. all I got was some (impolite term for an individual synonymous with male genitalia) telling me and I quote "You don't need an editor you just need to learn to not write (impolite term for feces) stories." the another one linked me to an online group for learning how to write better which mostly just confused me and I got no reply on the third.
and then the fimfiction ads directed me to the webcomic Girl Genius and two days disappeared that said I am about 2k words in to chaper two unfortunately there are only three periods at the moment.
so whuke you wait feel free to go read a much better story about adventure, romance and MAD SCIENCE! apologies for the delay.
4032124
Wow. I've personally never looked at those sites, but that's awful. Those groups were meant to help authors write better, those groups should be some of the nicer ones. Okay, let's try this again.
Perhaps you can go onto the LoHAV group and check to see if there is a pre-existing group thread specifically for asking for pre-readers. If there isn't, go to one of the other main threads (I recommend trying the General Discussion thread) or try to make your own (least recommended option). Also, on one of the sites not filled with (impolite term for an individual synonymous with male genitalia) if there is a place where it says "rules". The place/way you asked may not conform with their rules, so they just ignored you. I personally have never typed a story on here, so none of this advice is from previous experience. Hopefully round two of advice might help.
4034124 actually Looking for Editors was the one who directed me to the writers workshop so it wasn't to bad don't remember the other two and like I said I was off of fimfiction for two days after I got distracted.
Ethics story is amazing plz make more
A good, if somewhat messy, story struggling with punctuation and stylistic errors. Still, if one manages to make way through this, one will see an interesting version of that old "Human in Equestria" idea, full of potential.
Sadly the author seems to have dropped it. A good editor could help a lot, making this rough gem truly shine.
I'm getting serious deadpool vibes from this
Please continue this story I need to see what happens next please???¿¿¿