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Barbra's finally turning 18, and she struggles to confront Elusive about her true feelings towards him, thankfully she'll have a night with him to try and tell him. Unfortunately , she might be too nervous to tell him.
Cover art by Pia-sama
R63 humanized Sparity and my entry into Sparity oneshot contest
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So Kawaiiiii!~
Me Gusta. :)
Sparity is NOT my OTP but R63 it made it fun for me to read
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! So awesome, so romantic, so ahhhhhh(as you can tell I
this story)
yay!!!!! this was SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!
Hell... fucking... yes.
Well, thats one way to pop a cherry.
Impressive as always, a number of littler errors though.
damn why didn't you tell me you finished this? huh? also i could have gladly done a more proper cover for you!! whatever... gotta read!
Cuteness...it's...HNNGH!
[SQ4 Narrator: Maybe you should've taken some precautions before reading a great fanfiction worthy of giving even the healthiest of people a heart attack.]
Spike approves of this story.
And I, on the other hand luv it!
Heart attack eminent, critical failure in 3...2...1...
So close to tears my friend.
There aren't anywhere near enough fics involving Barbra and Elusive.
This was really cute, great job.
Essentially, Barbara's behaviour can be summarized as "I hope senpai will notice me"
I loved this story, and it being R63 made the content all the fresher! There seriously needs to be more fics centered around R63 Spike.
I love gushy squishy romances that make you feel all happy inside. Prefer them over the more adult variety any day. I am a huge sucker for cute and adorable, as I can never write it out myself. Fantastic work and thank you for the effort put into this, and have a wonderful day.
I really enjoyed this story. It is surprisingly hard for me to find quality fics of Barb and Elusive. I'm glad I found this one.
I think I like a tsundere-Barbra ^_^
Although, if I might be bold, you need a better editor.
For some reason, I'm more of a fan of BarbXElusive than SpikeXRarity.
This one kicked ass. Bow down bitches, bow down. No, not really. Keep up the good work, for I expect more of this.
3810419 yea for me sparity never work for me, but dis? dis i like, (personally i think aged up sweetiespike works alot better) keep up the good work man your a pioneer of this ship.
Neapolitan, not the frenchman of short stature
a great story and perfect for R63, i salute you
Awesome story. I got so caught up in it I had to literally stop and tell myself I wasn't in the story. :)
Awww...I loved it!
Multiple times I've read this story. Several times in each time I read it, I tense up and supress a squeal while shaking my arm really fast. I'm sure that tells you enough about what my thoughts on this story are