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Another day for Derpy, another day with more ponies yelling at her for some reason or another. She makes her way to her one safe haven in town, Sugarcube Corner, to find some solace in a certain treat. But after getting some crushing news, its up to a certain baby dragon to help her through the day.
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First post, and what an epic and sweet story it is... have a moustache
Derpy = insta-fave and insta-read. Dis gon b gud.
Cute story, but you badly need an editor.
(if this is a daily prompt kind of deal, don't worry about it)
Loved it. Only had 2 real problems with it. First, Blooocks of text, gets a little tiring on the eyes.
Second - It ended
Okay fine only one real problem but still
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it's a group prompt, yeah
So...adorable...
Came expecting a Derpy X Spike fic but instead got a Sparity.
Delightful light story!
All of my YES, dude. Every last one.
I enjoyed the affection Rarity was showing toward Spike in the end. The story was warm and sweet overall (no baking analogy there, I swear), but those last few paragraphs were the most fun to read, even if reassuring Derpy was the most important part.
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So what did you think!? Hopefully you liked it!
Thank you! Yeah, I wanted to end on a happier, more fun side then the whole Derpy/Spike thing. Also a good leeway just in case I ever wanted to do a sequel or not. Glad you enjoyed it though, I had way to much fun writing it.
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Yay!... I'll gladly take them for this story.
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Hehe yeah, wasn't sure how to label this one. I think I did the right labels, well haven't gotten yelled at yet.
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haha yeah, it made a few friends d'aww... and they aren't fans of the show.
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Yeah, sorry about that... sometimes I forget the enter key exists and go off on tangents.. But thanks for liking it! I would've wrote more but didn't want to go way past the word limit.
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Yeah, my usual editor/proofreader was mia and I just thought 'what the hay' and uploaded it.
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Thank you sir I accept your stache and offer one in return.
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Why would someone yell at you for it?
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I labeled a story wrong once and a few people yelled at me, saying I need to fix the tags...
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) along, Spike was pursuing Rarity romantically, and it was a slice of life story.
Well I don't think you have anything to worry about here.
You labeled everyone that moved the plot (teehee!
As for the guys that yelled at you on the previous story.
Eh, jerks happen. Try not to fret about them too much. *hug*
yep, i have to say it: amazing. just, amazing. seriously. i don't know how else to describe it. from what your author's notes said, something like this story coming out of an idea of a pony's favorite food, just, amazing. i wish i could do more than just favorite it and give it a thumbs up.
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Thank you so much! I don't know, just sorta happened... and I'm glad you liked it so much! 
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and thanks for the hug! 
Yay!
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No problem!
Here's another:
images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/31300000/Derpy-10-derpy-hooves-mlp-fim-31318292-1900-1916.png
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thanks!
fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/009/5/f/derpy_hooves___tease_by_jazy_kuun-d4lw3lk.gif
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Dat Derpy gif!
Your welcome!
HAHAHA!
It's better than Dash!
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It's so good! I nearly fell outta my chair when I found that. So funny!
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Its a rare thing when the imitator surpasses the original
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It is but when you do, spam the crap outta it.
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Damn right!
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good to see that i was able to make someone's day a bit better. guess i did good. still, i'd like to probe your mind. just to figure out how something like this could come out of that topic.
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And you don't wanna go in my mind, it's a very scary place...
You did great!
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trust me, it can't be as bad as mine. i'm serious, i sometimes think i'm the only rational person around and the most insane person i know. it's actually quite fun.
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I like being crazy, and rationality is too boring, unpredictability for the win! I swear, I'm becoming more Pinkie... and I'm ok with that... 
Haha Insanity is all in the perception of reality.
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and i'm sure that if you could meet her, you two would become fast friends.
not saying rationality and sanity aren't fun though. they do tend to help me think of some of my "crazier" or "impossible" ideas seem doable.
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That'd be a scary combo... me and Pinkie... And I say do your crazy ideas! If I can get therapical advice out of muffins... I'd love to read what you come up with
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actually, one of my stories is something i came up with during my bouts with boredom and sanity. "the grey: beginnings", though i'm not sure if i could continue it or not.
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Why not? Sounds interesting...
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don't get me wrong. i love the idea that i have for it. i also love the universe i set it in and my interpretations for luna and celestia and a few other characters. think is, it would require a lot of ocs. a lot. i don't think i have enough fingers and toes to even begin to count them.
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Oh... but ocs are easy to come up with... I mean, I got like 6 of them. Granted, it'd be hard to pass them all off... and remember them all and their story arcs...
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if anything, look at my only post i have made. it deals with some "issues" and "complications" that i need help with.
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Will do
I
this story. I liked the small bit with Rarity at the end but Spike helping Derpy was great. Spike I give you a moustache
and FlashKenshin77 I give you 5 out of 5... Derps!!!! 
Good work!
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Thank you kindly! I'm so glad you liked it. I had a great time writing it, might continue one day...
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... I know it's an over used line but it will never get old :D
That would like make you 20% Cooler!!!
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It never does! And 
it will be continued... sometime...
Cool, can't wait
Dat ending! Me Gusta!
Made me smile.
You filled me with good cheer!
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Haha Woo! Then I've done my job!
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I'm glad!
It's sooooooooooooooooo adorbs!!
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I tried...
haha
Your tried and you succeeded!! 100%!
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Damn, right
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haha
Your story I'm faving right now!!!