Spike and Rainbow Dash are best friends. Over the years they've grown quite close to each other, and Spike wants to take it to the next level. Only problem is... He has no idea how to do that.
Flowers are a safe bet...right?
"Late night, come home. Work sucks! I know!"
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Yes. Just, yes! I've read plenty of Rainbow romance fics, and this has got to be my favorite.
I like the improvements you made! The way you worded this ending was much better then the last! Kudos! Get ready from some fun spike
This was very sweet
Short, sweet, cute.
Love it.
....I approve. Have a fave, buddy!
3946802 yea, i thought you might
it sucks
NOT!!! This is actually a very good story so far keep it up!
3946835 why thanks. I admit it's not perfect, but I'm trying!
Another great story. It was very romantic to me. Happy Hearts and Hooves Day.
umm....why is it in the Romance&Clop section?
3946885 kuz of the romance tag
3946876 why thank you! It was fun writing it.
3946894 Dat makes sense.
this was pretty sweet even tho t fic was a shorty ; heh, who knew that all spike's choices on flowers made up a rainbow
3947097 im making a much longer SpikeDash fic in the near future. this was just a quicky to get it started. Thanks for reading!
3947183
heh, ur totally welcome n' awesome can't wait
Good story man. Although, it's a bit rushed and fast paced, and I know you would be able to add a lot more emotion to it. I highly recommend going back and re-writing it. Perhaps adding just a little bit more so it's more fleshed out and believable. But it's your call.
3947476 I'll probably do that. thanks for telling me
Since when does Twilight gives love advice to Spike?
you have no clue, no clue, how badly that quote made me laugh.
gotta say, even though the pacing was a bit too fast, it didn't really take away from the overall reading experience. the first part set the base, the second part gave subtle insight on what could happen, and the final part was brilliant. kudos, my dear gent. kudos to you.
3947787 since this story I guess
3947860 thanks! it seems pacin. is biggest issue in all my stories
I hope I'm not the only one that's noticed the nice rainbow bouquet he's got.
Also, Twilight didn't just jump the gun, she nearly jumped the freaking armory!
SpikeDash FTW
(Great stuff! A dose of SpikeDash was just what I needed!)
Aww, I liked it, to bad it had to endo so fast.
Very sweet. I'm sad it ended so fast I'd love to read more on your take of the ship. Seriously a sequal would be awesome.
Sequel? Perfect ending!
3949560 I do have a sequel planned. it'll be a lot longer though
Interesting, I don't think I've ever read a SpikeDash story-this was pretty good.
3950640 why thank you! it's a reltively uncommon ship still.
Woo! A Day to Remember! I'm liking the story so far bud. The only thing that keeps sticking out to me is "yea" instead of "yeah", but it's negligible.
3951618 i love A Day To Remember thanks for reading!
It was a cute read that matched her speed, 'nuff said.
Cool story.
3953999 why thank you. keep it real
3949581 Sequel? Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! SEQUEL!
sequel......
3955037 I take it u want a sequel? sure I'll write one. a much longer story for sure
3955236
"Here" should be "hear", but that's the only error I saw. Great story!
3947906
Aw man, you stole my joke!
3958255 ugh, grammar check failed me! Thanks for reading though
Excellent! You just made my night bro.
This was really nice read, and the song at the end is really happy. This is exactly what I needed to read right now.
There were plenty of spelling and narration issues to be found, but honestly I don't really care at this moment in time; I just wanted to read something that would make me smile and feel a little better, and this fic did exactly that.
Thank you for writing this.
3966393 well, I'm glad it did maybe someday I'll figure out how to do better narration
3966422
Well just Google "Third-person limited versus third-person omniscient" and read a few of the entries on that. They should help.
that was fast!
Oh...
I like this. This pleases Pinkie, yes!
This...This is so in character for Twilight, it hurts. She's always jumping to conclusions like this!
Also...A Day To Remember.