Spike has eaten the book of Inspiration Manifestation. The next day he accidentally casts its dark spell on himself.
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Servant Phoenix
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AAAHH! THE CUTENESS! IT'S KILLING ME!
But anyway, this was just perfect! Wasn't rushed, wasn't OOC, and it seems like a great follow-up to the episode!
10 out of 10!
So basically, that spell is basically God Mode in Equestria? Makes sense.
Also, the fact that the spell takes away who you are as a consequence, makes even more sense.
4300440 I'm so happy you enjoyed it
4300450 Well, I guess there is a reason Cereal called Rarity omnipotent in the followup. But it really kinda was, I mean... she was just running around, making stuff appear without effort, then it took three alicorn princesses to exhaustion to revert it.
I liked it
Lovin' it!
great job. I loved it
Silly Spike.
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Indeed, but that's what makes him the best dragon.
Neat story, I loved it.
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Dat gif.
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Thanks, Captain!
THis was awesome!
yay!
This was awesome
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Thank you!
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She was giving her a smile, full of caring. him not her I believe.
It was cute, a bit short from I have the spell to conclusion, though Rarity having been under the effect does make it within reason. At times you used a lot of names or pronouns to start sentences/paragraphs in a row and that's a bit repetitive; however, there were other times where you were mixing it up nicely to get a good balance.
I do believe this is quite possibly my favourite Sparity story now.
Well, now Derpy is quite a bit richer, that could be hard to explain. Of course the huge crystal sculpture of Canterlot that's still in Rarity's front yard will be even harder to explain.
I would like to point out that in this story Rarity seems to remember what happened to her, but in the episode she didn't seem to recall anything after the event. However it is possible the memories came back to her later and it was just the initial shock of the dark magic leaving her that caused her temporary memory loss.
Simple, yet cute.
4300517 Eeyup.
Earlier I ask myself "What happen to the book that Spike have eaten?" and a story was made.
Yay Spike!
“Darling, your eyes flashed green when you said you could make the castle even bigger, the same color my magic was when I was under its spell. And this…”
Ironically, the show had her not remember a thing, which actually ticked me off. Which is ironic since her otherwise recognizing what happened with Spike makes perfect sense.
Good follow up.
I hope the book has completely dissolved in his stomach, otherwise he's going to have a VERY hard time the next day.
This was cute. I do wonder if the spell can really be destroyed
Aren't spikes eyes already green? How did she even catch that, then?
And didn't she forget when the spell canceled?
O.o
4300647 Fixed
And yeah, I still need to improve my sentence-start variation.
4300782 Wow, I never expected that to happen. I'm so happy you like it.
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I'm 100% sure ponies (and dragon) gave Rarity a bigger recap later. (I mean, Twilight exactly knew what the book was, and where Spike got it from. It implies that Spike told her, and Rarity must have been interested in the explanation too) Also, most probably Rarity got a bad word or two from the citizens of Ponyville for her doings.
4303096 Spike's eyes are green, but his eyes flashed in green. See the explanation for Rarity's memory above.
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Thank you all for your kind words.
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4301192 Exactly
4302856 Don't worry, he'll be fine.
(Hopefully 
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When he started talking about Canterlot, I thought he was going to manifest the entire city off the mountain and next-door to ponyville.
Adorable story!
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It's just Rarity not remember left a bad taste in my mouth.
4303662 Yeah, it's always annoying when a characters goes through some great adventure which develops his character, then at the end he forgets everything by some memory clearing effect. It makes the whole story pointless.
4303360 I guess it would have taken years for Twilight to undo that.
4301192 - Made more sense to me for the book to survive being eaten. Twilight probably made Spike cough it up later if she found out he had eaten it. Surely she would ask where the book went. Such artifacts of dark magic clearly are very hard to destroy, otherwise Celestia would have destroyed the book herself instead of just locking it up.
4310008 Are dragons immune to dark magic?
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Traditionally, dragons are magic resistant to harmful effects. Although, they're no stranger to absorbing them either.
4311075 It all depends on the source. In D&D mythology dragons just have a very high resistance to magic and can make saving throughs to nullify its effects. In Fairly Oddparents, dragons were completely immune to magic, so it all depends on the source material and what's connvinient for the writer.
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I like this part.
Oooow , awesomeeee
4300474 Yup, God Mode with a price.
4310985 - Their scales are at least resistant to magic, but a tough outside means a vulnerable inside. As ChaoticNote said, dragons can still absorb magic, and in Spike's case, its a whole book of dark magic.
The road to hell is paved with good intentions. I think if someone writes a fanfic about Spike eating that spellbook, there should be some consequences for our favorite little dragon. Anything could happen. Perhaps he might mutate into yet another form, this one triggered and infused with all that dark magic. If you want to challenge the Mane Six, have them face their own friend and be reluctant to potentially harm or kill him.
Awesome I gave it a nice 7.9/10
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Nice story. Not gonna fave, but it's definitely worthy of a comment and upvote.
4377279 Thank you. I'll try my best to get better in my later stories and earn your favorite.
This is goood!!!!!
4505317 Thank you, Crystal Lin.
You got into a delay with your first fimfic? Maybe need a proofreader?
Hey, > > ServantPheoenix I think I do need a editor. Post me A.S.A.P.. please???
"You? Your Mr. The Dragon? We're from the Ponyville planning commission, Where are your permits for. . . ."
This was a great follow up to the episode! I do have a series of follow up questions. After the spell gets broken, does the book stay in his stomach, or does it dissolve, or does it come out along with his next movement? If it stays in his stomach, can he cast it on himself again, or is it like a one use per creature type deal? If it dissolves, would that mean that he would become flooded with dark magic? And if it does, what then? As for the third option, I really don't have any follow up questions for that option as it is pretty self explanatory.
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The dark magic left his body after he got rejected. If anything is left from the book, it is non-magical and will leave Spike's body in the... conventional way.