After a dragon-pony war the dragon-blooded humans become slaves to the pony-bloods. A birthday present of a slave to the Master's daughter will only become trouble when he falls in love with her.
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Thumbed up and fav'd for the time being. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
intriguing but what the hell how can dovaken lose to ponykeen in my oppinu it would make more sense with the parties roles switched but still it interests me
How can there be both human and anthro tags?
So much potential.
You should divide the text in more paragraphs, its kinda hard to read this way. It looks looks like a wall of text.
Also, use the Enter button more.
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Because they have horns, tails, wings ect.
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XD Thanks for the tip I am still editing this chapter a bit so I'll fix this don't worry ^^ Im used to criticism thats how Ive gotten better at drawing (the cover for this story is done by me and you can also find me on DeviantART same username 15MadyCat)
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Well if you think about it Spike is Twilight's assistant which in some way some might be seen as a 'slave' type situation. And it must be by Celestia's magic or something. I based the slave idea off of early American Slavery. I came up with the idea for this story while learning about it in History.
2840509 fair enough but dragons are the strongest there are
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XD I can tell you think that by your name and dont get me wrong I love dragons but it just seems a bit more logical
2840562 read my story and I will prove you wrong
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After I finish with the "Twilight's Treatment Vol. 2" update
Okay
2840603 you read that as well a Spike fan as well ay
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Im not sure I understand your wording? Do you mean I read it as well as Sparity fanfiction?
2840892 no Twi's treatment volume 2 and I was trying to sound like a Canadian
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I noticed that XD but you said "as well a Spike fan as well" and I am a bit confused by it
2840922 Spike is the only reason I'm a brony period
interesting idea, I'd love to read more... but it kinda makes me wonder three things: why the dragon-people are the slaves in the first place, what his past is and how he became a slave, and why I feel like I've read stories with the same premise before, but can only think of "the prince and the pauper"
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XD ohmygosh are you serious? Thats good and bad in so many ways
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1. This is based after a pony vs dragon war. The ponies won and made the dragon people their slaves (I based this story off of American Slave History a tad bit) Also the idea of dragons being the slaves comes from the fact that Spike is Twilight's assistant which some may think is just a lighter version of slavery, but with more emotional bond and less punishment and more motherly attachment or sisterly however you see it.
2. He was taken from his home in the Dragon Kingdom and shipped to Equestria where he will serve as a slave for his life (I will add no spoilers in my story)
3. Im not sure about that one. I only got this idea from my American History class and I have never read any other stories like this one. Believe me this will be different. There is a very strong message in it which you will see later in the story.
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1) I get the idea, but I don't see much of how it ties to the american slave history (other than the fact that it included slaves)
2) I would've liked that to be the emotional backstory that he tells Rarity in detail when she asks about his life, and it's kept a secret until then, especially from the readers (you know what I mean)
3) I mean that I feel like I've read the story where the servant falls for his/her master and bla bla bla
This story's potential, I will read your work, so good luck. I liked the story base.
Okay, my interest is caught. I wanna see more.
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1. I dont think it really does I just got this idea from American Slave History
2. You have good hypothesis's shhhhh
3. Yeah I guess that the idea is kind of old school and done before
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3) but that doesn't mean people don't want to read it, especially with a good writer
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Yeah I need to get better dont I? XD
2843503 everyone could get a little better, even Einstein wanted to be better with mathematics and didn't even accept quantum physics because he couldn't understand anything about it
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Indeed, just need time and exp, like anybody in this site. Anyway, good luck making this fic-i sure need that in my fic-
mfw i can relate
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Is it wrong that I laughed pretty hard at this? I feel so bad XD
ps only hate spell check more
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Yeah spell check sucks XD
And Im sorry you'll find out later!!
well, this was depressing. I hope something good happens soon.
some one call in the 4 riders of the apocalypse on there pony asses
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Calm down it gets better I promise ^^
Damn
:HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO 
!!!
OKay, this made up for the depression of the last chapter.
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Yeah this story is very bipolar just a heads up ^^
Great chapter! though they are short, you make up with it with speed, though that speed can leave a few bummers
It's Eavesdrop
Lacking an i.
Undressed would be the correct form.
An interesting premise, though I do hope you will expand on the whole Dragon-Pony war thing later.
I think she likes him
2858931 I'm inclined to agree
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Thank you so much ^^ I really needed this (I have no idea why I am so happy about this correction XD)
The problems have been fixed :D
2840911 If you're trying to sound (or type) Canadian, take it from one, whenever we put Eh? down it's Eh? (hard A, without the Y sound) not Ay? (This would be pronounced with a soft A and Y sound.)
I happily wait to see where this story goes from here
The title peeked my interests, the description enticed me, but the story is what I fell in love with.
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Thank you so much~
Awww
3296944 You are welcome, can't wait for the next chapter. I am on the edge of my seat.
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it will be coming in time but Im a pretty slow writer and I dont have much time XD
But I promise there will be more