Spike's side of the story, told as if everypony were human. Kinda actiony, kinda spyish, I mostly wanted Spike to have his own story and this is what happened.
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Love the story.
This is interesting.
Amazing story.
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Only five sirs this time?
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This story is freaken good
please read my fanfic!
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Honey, I hate to point out that you don't have one...
2911705>>2911712 oh, i forgot, i didn't post it yet. well nevermind :/
WAIT LAST ONE!!!!!
NOOOOOOOO BUT THIS HAS SOOO MUCH POTENCHAL
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Dear one, while these may be the last chapters, this is definitely not the last we've heard from Spike
First Chapter down, and i cant stop reading.
LOVE the writing style, and ill be following the story carefully, but I must voice one annoyance: You have two people speaking in the same paragraph. Example:
“Where…” I tried to start, and then coughed when nothing but smoke came out. “Don’t try to talk yet,” said the princess. “I’ll have to teach you…” “Where is she?” I asked haltingly, pushing out smoke but still making words. The princess’ eyes widened, and then she smiled and pointed behind me. I tried to turn around, but I wasn’t very stable yet and just ended up falling on the ground. I heard four feet step back, and four feet run to me. The smaller ones reached me first, and as she helped me up I turned to look at Twilight Sparkle.
Should be more like:
“Where…” I tried to start, and then coughed when nothing but smoke came out.
“Don’t try to talk yet,” said the princess. “I’ll have to teach you…”
“Where is she?” I asked haltingly, pushing out smoke but still making words. The princess’ eyes widened, and then she smiled and pointed behind me. I tried to turn around, but I wasn’t very stable yet and just ended up falling on the ground. I heard four feet step back, and four feet run to me. The smaller ones reached me first, and as she helped me up I turned to look at Twilight Sparkle.
Just a suggestion!
Over all, 9/10!
I am and great chapter. I would think that Spike would at least borrow some armor and/or get a cool sword or something.
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Spike got his own cool sword way back in chapter 4, remember XD He keeps it shrunk on his wrist.
5261685 Oh right, but he'll probably need armor for the trip though.
Oooooooh twilight
Straight foword is she
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Well, yes. Because Pinkie Pie
I love this story
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I'm sorry
5626766 why?
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Mostly because I'm purposefully ignoring this thing. The last few times I've tried to write on it it's pissed me off enough to break something. I'm working on a HiE story that's going well though.
5626788 as in a human shows up in Equestria?
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Yes, that exactly.