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The Young and Free Dragon


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give spike some love.

Interesting, you could do a lot with Twilight trying to analyze everything. :twilightsmile:

YES, YES, YES!!!!!
more please.:moustache:

Very good! More is needed, Mah Boi!:moustache:

Aw my god :facehoof:

Ha ha, thank you guys the compliments and even the ones that could mean anything are appreciated. :rainbowkiss:

I'll be putting more effort into this story then, and we'll see how it goes. :scootangel:

WIIIINNNNNNNNNNNN:moustache::heart:

I demand you continue this right away

Clopping: What all true warriors strive for!
Very good chapter, Mah Boi! :moustache:

Clopping. The thing that can wait if the story got a good plot. for example read the story above.

I can't wait till the next chapter. Clopping. Good stuff.

I hope spike finds happiness :fluttercry: Tracked

I have a big problem with this Fan Fiction.
1: You only have 18 comments
and
2: You only have 18 likes.
You. Need. More.
I think it's a brilliant Fan Fiction, Mah Boi!
Well done.:moustache:

Wow, great read! I really like what you've got so far. Though I must admit, I wasn't expecting Spike x Rainbow Dash in this story. Way to pleasantly surprise us.

MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Five bits says the "poison" doesn't do anything, or at least anything negative.

It's about time that owl was taken care of! :rainbowlaugh:
Very good chapter, Mah Boi! I can't wait to read more. :moustache:

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5,000,000 bits say it all backfires and makes the damned owl better somehow
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:trixieshiftright:
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Deviousness

Alright, let's see where this goes!

I'm really liking this. Can't wait for more!

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Don't you mean 'OH GOD, YES!!' ?

so twilight still sees it as sex and spikes sees it as love. poor spike dudes going to get a heartbreck out of this

Spike be hitting that, and the like.
Very good chapter. :moustache:

390389 That or it works and Twilight ends up drinking it.

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An update is in the works, but it's been coming slow. :twilightangry2: I'm sorry, I'll get up eventually.

I really hope that bird just die.
Is Twilight evading having sex with Spike? Is she afraid of him or something, because the brother/sister like relationship they have?

Wait a fucking minute... Twilight took Owlicious to the pony hospital intead of taking him to Fluttershy? She has another pony who is in danger?
Are you telling me that Spike's potion turned Owlicious into a pony?! Are you trying to turn this into a trollfic or something?

Wow, he must have felt honoroed to have sex with Rainbow Dash, still....I'm hoping that he sleeps with Twilight soon, Rainbow Dash is still awesome as fuck though. Honestly hoping that you DO NOT but a 'rescearch' one with Rarity (I really dislike Spike being paired with her) maybe one with Fluttershy? That would be bad ass, I'm going to keep track of this awesome story and your doing perfect. :derpytongue2: Hell, maybe even one with Derpy? I like that.

Damn..fucked up how Twi thinks of this as somethnig other then lust or even love, but fuck I can't wait for more of this awesome story. Spikelight FOREVER!!!!! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

so where did his obsession for rarity go?

I like it but, the awkwardness prevents me from reading it...:twilightblush:

God darn it!! If I told you I had to stop reading this every five minutes I'd be lying, it was more along the lines of every twenty seconds(20s) would be more accurate. Just the awkwardness of the situation between Spike and Twilight had me cringing spasmodically, the section were Spike had the nightmare about Twilight and Owloysious I couldn't help but feel bad for Spike seeing the person(Mare) you love getting pleasured by someone else, especially one you hate, it hurts... bad. Spike was completely justified in his actions later, better down then out. Something that continues to disappoint me in this fic is that Twilight can't take a hint, nor the answer, I hope you delve deeper into why she can't see him that way; though I felt an infiority complex in there somewhere. Update soon. Chow Bennet out.

Spike, spike, spike. You should really see a doctor about that jealousy before ponies start calling you the green-eyed monster.

And, being a green-eyed Dragon in Ponyland, i fear you're not far off the mark.

Most excellent tale.

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