The tickle monster is chasing Twily! What will she do?
Note- this takes place on Hearth's Warming, but that's not the main theme. Read it any time of year! Happy Hearth's Warming!
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Very cute
The ending feels a bit rushed, even for this kind of story. It just goes too fast.
Otherwise, the chapter has been a quick but real enjoyment, and I didn't notice any shocking grammar mistakes or anything, except a missing line space here:
So, well, I might as well upvote this. That was decent
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Thanks!
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I'll fix it. Thanks!
OH NO
NOT THE TICKLE MONSTER
ANYTHING BUT THAT SAVAGE!
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That definately put a smile on my face- what a heart-warming little story!
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Thanks!
Awwwww
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Thanks!
D'aww.
You win an upvote.
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Thanks!
I'd be terrified.
D'awww.
To think Twily couldn't levitate a bookshelf, now look at her.
cute.
most adorable thing ever
This is absolutely adorable!!
I'm upvoting, but it's not like I thought this was cute or anything...b-baka...
*Tries to type in comment about how adorable and fuzzy this fic is, but passes out due to heart attack from diabeetus*
Thank you for wiring a story that deserves its praise. Definitely great to cheer up.
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Thanks! And yeah, at least she can levitate a pillow!
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Thank you!
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Are you okay? I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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3621404 *Tries to type replay but is still passed out from heart attack*
I know everypony has said this already, but... This was adooorable!
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3621874 Can't, type, reply. The adorableness, is too strong!
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Nooooo! I'm allergic to adorable!!! -dies-
Awwww
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Thanks!
3623713 I will be in Canterlot Royal Hospital for the next 2 - 3 weeks due to Acute Adorableness Poisoning. I am expected to make a full recovery, provided I do not encounter more than 10 deci-cutes of concentrated adorable before release.
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3623781 Thanks. I will.
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“Shining’s totally not a tickle monster out to get me, and I totally didn’t just hit him with a book!”
Made me laugh out loud, nice.
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Yeah, I liked that part, too.
Thanks! 
First
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I thought Twilight didn't know about pillow fights until the episode Look Before You Sleep.
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If she had, maybe she'd forgotten.
This was meant just to be a short, funny story, and I hope that minor detail didn't keep you from enjoying it.
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I still enjoyed it.
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Good.
That was adorable!
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Thank you!
Not bad, not usually my type of story. I'm more into dark, sad stories (hence why I write them a lot), but it was fun and cute. It gets a like and a 3/5, and 5/5 on the cute metre.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
That fic was so sweet that it gave me diabetes.
Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed a Ruby by The Gem Hunters!
Overall it's a very cute little Slice of Life fic. The pacing was almost perfect. Only a few instance where it wasn't really clear who was speaking detracted from the experience. Good work!