Ditzy doo is crooked. And when a strange creature follows her because of it, she befriends a most unusual pony. (In this story, the Doctor and Ditzy had never met)
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forevertheDoctor
wassap everypony? my names Avalon. i love writing and i hope to entertain you with my fics *winks*
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Finally joined fimfiction. I really need some sleep...im starting to go insane
Suicide, I think.
I'd rather suffer the short amount of fear that came before, and enjoy the exhilaration of falling, than be brutally and painfully murdered and possibly become like this creature.
It's good, and I'm assuming that this is your first fic. more detail maybe, like why else was her life a living hell? and from what perspective is this story being told from, like is ditzy dying and reliving the best time of her life? just thoughts, hope this helps.
I don't think I would want to be. It would be like driving a school bus, in my opinion. And I should know. My mom drives one.
What exactly do you mean by 'crooked?'
You'd better believe that he's gorgeous. Well-written so far, I look forward to how this turns out.
She'd better exclaim how it's bigger on the inside. That's all I'm saying.
Thank you very much on your insight. What i was going for was for this to be like an episode of doctor who and make the beginning something for the reader to ponder, and clear everything up at the end. This is indeed my first fic and i probably failed at this
Derpy will indeed be surprised, i'll tell you that
your technically not supposed to know what crooked means til the end. You know, spoilers...
thanks again for your comments, andim going to start the next chapter 
I would jump off the cliff and hope that the TARDIS is there
Well... if i looked up and saw that miss pond... i'd i'd be fingerling like ca-RAY-zy and finally pull myself togather and say "docta, take may with you!!!":pinkie gasp: :twilight blush:
Mailstallion
I'm a guy so no but he is awesome
Dude my answer to that question as i always say "heck to the yeah!!!" and P.s. No DUH stars glimmer when they explode! look out the window tonight and look in the sky! do you see all of those beautiful glimmering objects almost like lanterns?
all of those are no longer in space, by the time their light reaches the earth they've all exploded! 
Woah...what the heck? I turn my backaway for two seconds and then Bam! Like 5 more comments!!!
thanks guys! I hope you like my dumb little story
so when are you gonna write ur next one t here are amazing!!
3623321 oh! I knew it was you, peachie
im writing the next chapter. Im glad you like it. 
im writing chapter 6
ha ha... lol... took u a while!! hey wait... if your forever the doctor... who is the one that posted that random txt u were talking about
oh yeah its TARDIS king 64!!!
hey u there? !
when r u gonna be done wit chapter six... i'm BORED-duh
3623895 oh my god, do you know how long it takes to write these things??
lol k!!! *cough* Grell!!! *cough*
hey u still there!!! if so, i tried to write part of a fanfic and since i'm new here... i don't really know if it came up or not... do mind checking for me?!
lol best one yet!!!
3624253 wait, where is it i cant find it whats it called...braquelle
3624282 no it didnt come up
btw, im as new as you are!! I signed up yesterday!! 
r u even there any more!?
3624385 yes, and you need to publish that fic again so i can read it. Oh and im gonna wake up in a raft? Lol not if you wake up in a gas chamber
oh and my mom said no to catching fire
wait what???!!!! We had EVERY THING planned out perfectly why'd she do that to me?!
hello? if ur not there anymore or not feeling like talking to me anymore... just message me at um... 9:30 in the morning tomorrow.
3624525 hey um, maybe instead of having a fullblown conversation on a site made for discussing fanfics why dont you find your phone. Im kinda too busy writing to look at my cooments every five minutes
3624525 oh and i might be doing someones cover art for a story
k call me @ 12;00
3625959 i cant use the phone today
heey you there?!
we have some talking to do!!!
dude if you're like Ditzy in anyway in her doubts.... you had BETTER trust the doctor no matter what!!!
3627800 i trust the following people with my life: you, the doctor, grell and sebastian... so i trust a nutcase,
a liar
a demon
and a murderer
im screwed
lol don't be alone look at how many views you have on each story!!! thats allot for only being here for what 3 days?!
3631361 lol i know what i was trying to get at was what a giant nerd i am
If I looked up and saw that, I'd get out of the way, and then sneak in when he's not looking.
Because you can't not have a companion say that.
*cough cough donna cough cough*
So much awesome
OH SNAP WE GOTTA INFESTATION
wonder what the creature actually is tho
*cough btw cough*
im writing a doctor who crossover too... called "A Fragment of Harmony"
And i totally support you in any derpy x doctor shipping
Poor Ditzy
I know that a certain Captain can tell her jus how much it sucks to be OUTSIDE the TARDIS when in motion ;)
Poor Ditzy
I know that a certain Captain can tell her jus how much it sucks to be OUTSIDE the TARDIS when in motion ;)