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forevertheDoctor


wassap everypony? my names Avalon. i love writing and i hope to entertain you with my fics *winks*

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Equestria is a land shrouded in mystery. The fogs of crime and murder have rolled in, and it's up to Pinkamena "Sherlock" Diane Pie, and Twilight "Watson" Sparkle to solve the crimes and catch the killers before it's too late. Twilight agrees to play along with Pinkie's insane fantasies, but has she been pulled into a game much bigger than she can fathom?

(Rated teen for mild language, poorly timed Sherlock quotes, and (spoiler alert) MURDER)

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Comments ( 42 )

Oh look, it's that story you mentioned on Pizza's blog post. *smirk*

4374375 hahahahahaahahah

Yeah it's terrible.

Congratulations, you are the second person on this site (with a Doctor Who related name) to create a Pinkie Pie is Sherlock and Twilight is Watson fanfic.

Seriously, it called Pinkamena Diane Pie: Consultant Detective by Time Pony Victorious

4374774 GODDANGIT! I SWEAR THIS IS ALL ORIGINAL!

4374841

Are you serious?! He even writes Doctor Whooves fics!

4374856 GODDAAAAAAANGIT!!!! WHYYY UNIVERSE WHY? Ok, that may be a teensy bit cliche.

Just a little.
But honestly, I was not aware of this user or his stories in any way shape or form. All my fics are absolutely 100% original.
WELL.
Except for crossovers. Those don't count. But these stories are all my ideas and mine alone, I cross my heart and hope to fly stick a cupcake in my eye!
WELL.
Except for the last part. I'm not going to blind myself.

4374880
Nah, this fic seems to be a silly piece, whereas the other's actually serious.

On a random note, who would win in a fight: Sherlock Holmes (Every incarnation put together) vs. James Bond (Who may or may not be a Time Lord)?

4374905 SHERLOCK.
Also, the story will get more serious. It just has a silly beginning. Although with Pinkie as Sherlock...
The whole series will be...
(Puts shades on)
A study in pink.
YEAAAAAAAAAH!

4374931
The other guy already did that. Sorry.:twilightsheepish:

4374983 OHHHH nope nope nope not gonna do that that's all Moffat's

4375013

You want to just revamp the story and add a twist? Or, change it around so it's more like Elementary (Basically American Sherlock TV series with a female Watson).?

Don't add Doctor Who. The other guy already added him into the story.

4375042 oh god WHAT? NononononoNO not doing THAT. Also, no. I hate Elementary.

4375087

Oh. Never mind then.

Quietly hides Elementary merchandise beneath bed... :twilightsheepish:

How about:
Psych
Bones
Monk
??

4375112 no. These are all going to be ORIGINAL but with a Sherlocky theme. Also, I'm not going to kill you because you like Elementary, despite the Sherlock fandom's reputation XD

4375123

Well then...
May the Deity of Deductive Reasoning be with you.

Also, fave'd. Gonna want to see how this turns out.

Man, I'm loving this story! I feed off of mystery. :twilightsmile:

One edit from your 'neigh'borhood Grammar Nazi:

"Fine. I'll be your 'Watson'" said Twilight.

Comma needed directly next to the 'n' in 'Watson.' Hope I could be of help! :pinkiehappy:


4374375 And hey, you mentioned me!

4377551 of course I did. Only reason I'm in that group. There better be some discussion threads. I get the episodes before most Americans because of XBMC.

4377569 I'm sure there will be. Just need to get it started.

Comment posted by Pyriel deleted May 12th, 2014
Comment posted by FlamingPizza deleted May 12th, 2014

It seems good so far, You got my attention :pinkiehappy:

4377551 I did. But there's two quotation marks right next to it so it looks like 'this'"

Or should I do 'this' "

4378423 :pinkiegasp: You haven't seen the season 3 finale yet? :raritydespair: I'm so sorry! :twilightsheepish:

4378429 No, No I haven't. I literally got into Sherlock last week :twilightoops: it's....it's ok...:ajsleepy: I'm just a little disappointed, that's all :fluttercry:

4378498 Trust me, it gets a lot better in season two!

4378858 no, I'm disappointed about the spoiler. I LOVED season one. Moriarity is just great XD

4379033 Oh, yeah.....the spoiler. :twilightsheepish: Sorry again. But yeah, I LOVE Moriarty.

Unnecessary human references and inclusion of Twilight's new "library"...
Also, you seem to have replicated a very common misuse of the word "dimension". "Parallel world" or "alternate reality" would be more appropriate in this case.

4383633 Well, I'm not so focused on the sci fi as I am on the mystery, and the library will be used in a finale chapter in which I do not want to spoil, SO if you want to discuss this do it on my user page, because I would like help with that chapter.

If you don't mind

This PMV is relevant to this story:

Love it so far! Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

Good work so far. When may we expect another chapter?

5232033 Just got back from a loooooooong hiatus. so all my stories should be updating soon. :pinkiehappy:

The game is afoot XD

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