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Silentpegasus


An aspiring writer that loves the fandom and it's works

Comments ( 31 )

Stunning, well written and hot.

I know u have another story but dude . . . . . . . . nice:pinkiehappy:

Hmmmm....:unsuresweetie:

I think I'm gonna give this....

:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::moustache:/ :eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

3539398 I second that comment. I LOVED this fic! Plus, I'm French, so that was even more interesting.

Absolutely amazing, you should do one shots more often, the characters you come up with blow my mind :pinkiecrazy:

Hmmm I dislike rarity...

But maybe one day I'll read this fic...

MAybe...

Also continue your cancelled fics from long ago... They're good!

I have failed... I could not come up with one "what does the fox say?" joke....

I like it ,continue
:-)
.

what does the fox say?
...
NOthing

Reminds me a lot of Apple Of The West. There needs to be more stories like this.

Come to think of it. Foxtrot is the NATO code for f.
Like A=Alpha
B= Bravo
Etc.
Just a fun fact

3776484 awesome. I'm actually going National Guard my sophomore year of college under military police. I also want to talk to my recruiter about designated marksman school.

4021915 You like to play Super Mario Sunshine, don't you?

Place the controller in the ground as flat as you can...

4021915 and it turns out, of I take ROTC and from as an officer, DM school is closed to me

One: Did sly cooper come in?
Two: SEQUEL SEQUEL.

Hey I was looking for this story!

Loved it and would love a sequel

...My god I'm in love with this. All the little details, the writing style, the pacing, that ending... awesomeness. I know you've said there'd be no sequal, but I can't help but want one!

THIS LEGIT NEEDS A SEQUEL.

Foxy indeed! This is a real nice story! :coolphoto::raritywink:

“Oh and just so you know, this is a one time thing.” Rarity felt her heart sink. “If I catch you again then you’re going to jail.”

“I understand.” She said in a sad tone.

“To make sure that doesn’t happen I’m going to transfer here so I can keep an eye on you.” Rarity looked up at the man and grinned. “It’ll take a bit of time, but since I brought back the gem, the chief will be understanding.”

“I’m planing another heist tomorrow at eight o’clock at the Grape Orchard Restaurant.”

“Oh I’ll be there watching you like-”

“A fox?” She giggled. "Oh and make sure you bring the handcuffs." She whispered as she gave him a small peck on the cheek. The thief giggled as the detective exited her shop with a grin on his face. The detective couldn't help but smile as he thought about the woman that had completely stolen his heart.

(Well, I had to do it! 😎🕵)

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