Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?
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It's Nyx's birthday and her parents and their friends want to throw the most special party for the little alicorn. Ben also goes looking for a gift for his daughter as well.
The cover art is a fanart courtesy of sgtgarand. http://sgtgarand.deviantart.com/art/Nyx-s-Birthday-257308809
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Pen Stroke would be glad to see this, no doubt!
Anyway, what did Angel find? Could it be something Nyx might like?
Keep going!
i like it and who is Ben
3472372 Read Curse of the demon pony to find out.
3472413 ok
Ben.... That name sound famil..... Wait...,,you don't mean Ben Mare? ABANDON STORY
BAD OC ALERT
Also nyx requires a nm tag
This story got dislikes faster than I can take a shit.
Jesus...
New History of Nyx.
Good! Very Good
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No wonder. The writing is really bad. Tense-skipping, some unexplained OC insert (who is Twilight's BF, obviously)...
I mean, read this paragraph:
If you can thumb this up, you have some really low standards.
3472913
Good thing I never read it.
can who ever dislike my comment that say i like it and who is Ben stop that and JusSonic please make more chapters for this story and complete it no matter many dislike this story gets
3472913 i don't have some really low standard just because i like it
3473159 sorry about that i men't to say that to a different person and ok
Give Jus a chance. He's just a beginner here. I don't care if you hate him or me or not for that, but please...be considerate and reasonable. If not, then I understand. That's your right.
Yes indeed, the party is getting good! But what in the world is that creature in the cage?
Please continue!
i like it
and yay chapter 2
in my fair and unbiaed judgement i can tell that you rewrote some parts, that is good and the story is better now
still some errors and some holes in detail but a good concept nonetheless
Who in Equestria is the newcomer?
As if I didn't know, since I read it from fanfiction.net. Keep going!
No matter how many dislikes this gets, it will still be a good story.
Any story that has Nyx *cough* BESTOCEVER *cough* is a good story.
(As long as it's not clop)
Excellent story! I love it!
Happy birthday, Nyx!
Cool story bro
thou besmirched Nyx with <yay> self-insert fic!?!
HEATHEN!!
HA, granny Celestia.
C0NFu$ED!!! ABANDON SHIP!
wait a minute..
if it was done on the aniversiry of past sins
then that means on every yearly anaversery of past sinns is nyx's birth day!!!
also thers a trollestia icon!!!
cool story
I absolutely loved it, one thing you could have fixed is the "tense" of the story. This story was in present tense most of the time but sometimes slipped into past tense. I for one think that the story would have been a smoother read if it was all in past tense. Also, there were a few spelling and grammatical errors that could be fixed i.e. "most best". Other than that I really enjoyed the story.
I have to say I liked the story, I readed some of the sequels before this (Like the clone main six and Equestria remake) but I liked this more, this is only a oppinion, but the "battle scenes" bored me a little
Most Nyx stories are sad glad this one is happy
Could that be nyx's wish come true?
Do it!
I'm sure nyx will love him.
Aw!
Happy birthday nyx.
This is a great story. Good grammar and easy to follow. My only concern would be to bring in a backstory behind Ben and Twilight. If you're going to add an OC to the story, then you got to make it believable that that OC should be there.
so is there a sequel to this story? What happens to Phobos and Lorcan?
6828945 Ben was introduced in the authors previous story, Curse of the Demon Pony.
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3472913 I know this is necro, but it was explained in Curse of the Demon pony who Ben is
I hope a sequel comes for this if theres not 1 yet
Lilo and Stitich Refrance. I love it