(a sequel to the "Reflections" arc of the MLP comic book series; set shortly after the Season 5 opener): While on the run, the Erroneus Equines (the small-time criminal counterparts to the Mane Six and Spike) end up discovering long-lost magic talismans that grant them near-unlimited power, even to the point of gaining a new "Dark Rainbow Power". The newly super-charged former small time criminals end up going on a rampage that is too much for even the combined might of Captain Goodguy (Discord's Mirrorverse counterpart) and Chrysalis. Fortunately, they ARE able to bring help in the form of the Equestria Prime versions of the Mane Six and Spike. But can even the Mane Six's OWN Rainbow Power allow them to fight their criminal counterparts on equal footing?
Woah, this is good....
Tracking, Faving, and adding to my Cool bookshelf.
Is all the Children of Harmony appearing in this story?
This is intense.
There's some grammar hiccups here and there, but other than that, it's good.
thank you for the fnaf reference
I dunno why you added the VAs for the cast, but okay...
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Adding voice actors is something I'd done in the early days of my fan-fiction career. And I'm often continue that tradition in some of my other work.
The voice is Sunset Shimmer isn’t it?
Lol nice breaking the fourth wall gosh darn it Pinkie Pie
Oh wow very convenient
Again that's probably how she would look like if she ever been reformed in the original timeline
Well this is a pretty interesting story to say the least so apparently the alternate universe of the mean six wreaking havoc and apparently Captain good guy and Chrysalis are really having a hard time trying to keep them at Bay especially with Celestia Luna trying to know how to be good so he was going to call reinforcements which darebee the Mane 6 and Spike to help out the situation and with a snap of his finger he teleport Twilight and the others here to the alternate universe and he explained to them about this whole situation how they Other Self will use these talismans for their evil ways so Twilight accept to save their world but the element of surprise is ruined because of the alternate universe of the Cutie Mark Crusaders saw them and now they're warning the other self so now this makes it much harder hopefully they can get to them before them and yeah it is very weird that Chrysalis and Shining Armor are in love but hey this is an alternate universe so cool
Nyx so this is the past sins story timeline but with the original timeline okay cool
That is a hard one to deal with especially if somebody sees it in the future what you're doing they will prepare for that
But that means they are neutral and it still doesn't make anything better
Oh shoot we forgot about that 😱
Oh wow things are really getting intense right now so far the darker versions of the Mane 6 got some of the talismans and the becoming too much for the Mane 6 even with the help of Chrysalis Shining Armor and Discord they're still too overpowered Chrysalis talks about how dangerous is one of each they are and yeah it is really bad right now because how the heck do you supposed to stop somebody like that but apparently they found the hidden talisman's from The Diamond Dogs they need to stop them but once again they got overpowered I want makes things worse the evil versions of the Cutie Mark Crusaders showed up to slow down the progress at least they stopped them even though they forgot that if we hurt them the other once in the Otherworld will get hurt oops but now things have really gotten really worse they finally got all the talisman and they all transform much worse it looks like they're going to use their evil power to destroy this world now how in the world are they going to stop this
Nice reference to the movie pixel which I kind of like the movie
Wait a minute where did she get the dress from
Lol Five Nights at Freddy's nice
Wow that was pretty intense Battle here so the battle rages on between the main 6 and the darker version of The Mane 6 i mean things were getting very bad meanwhile nyx and her family are still looking for Twilight and the others not knowing that they're in the other world but anyway it looks like Spike was a huge help when he asked for help which some unknown character granting them a power which is the same power as the rainbow power when they face off Tirek and with the power they have and after all the intense battle they finally went over the darker version and plus they turn the Cutie Mark Crusaders into good now and was that the victory goes to Twilight and her friends
Well that was a pretty interesting story here and I got to say I've always liked that comic of the reflection there was so many possible ways in the alternate universe how ponies and creatures can go so it looks like the Mane 6 and Spike finally stopped the darker version of them self but they will wonder what's going to happen to them what Chrysalis and good guy told them that they are going to the same position as Celestia and Luna so that's good and was that they return to their universe and once they did it was an interesting crash landing but they are home and they explained to Twilight's family about this whole situation and whoever is this mysterious unknown Pony or creature he looks like he knows what's going to happen next but I guess that's another story again this was pretty awesome keep up the good work