A simple fan who is trying his best! Fair warning my stories tend to focus on everypony's favorite dragon!
Spike, the draconequus son of Discord and Celestia, is called on by his father for an epic quest! That or his father just doesn't care enough to clean up his own messes. He is sent to the cracked planet below to find the elements of harmony and fix the world, running into friends and enemies alike.
A more comedic story than the description would imply. Multi race Mane Six ahead! Also thanks to my editor Adamastos!
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This is cool can’t wait to read more
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Thanks! Oh I wanted to say that your story is pretty nice itself! I love the idea of the symbiote falling on characters since the slime can be bad but have its good moments but that depends on the character that it grabs.
*hums the katamari damaci theme song*
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YESSSS Thank you! I had just bought the game and that inspired this prologue
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don't let spike go for the alternate ending....luna would be pissed.
I liked the story
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Thanks!
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Ahh well she'd find some way to blame Discord heh.
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I never heard of katanari what is it
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Well, a Katamari is a ball of stuff if I'm being really simple. It can be anything really as long as it's a ball.
This seems like a promising story, although I myself would’ve prefer to be surprised by which creatures the main 6 are which I must say is a very original and neat idea. I won’t say much since this is just the first chapter and probably the second most critical part of the story so I wish you the best of luck.
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Oh sorry I guess I should have left that as surprises... I am glad you enjoyed the prologue. This new Spike will soon have to face mortals for the first time so this will be run hopefully! This was a bit inspired by a game but I only took the very basics of it. Discord being Spike's dad always seemed like a funny idea that not many stories use.
Looks nice. The pacing a bit fast but I can’t really judge. Keep up the good work 👍
Hmm I see what you mean, the next few chapters will take it a bit slower.