• Member Since 23rd Dec, 2018
  • offline last seen Feb 10th, 2019

TerribleTy27


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Twilight's an alicorn.

Spike is confused. And stressed. Suffice to say, he's in a pretty bad place. Not to worry. Rather then surrender to the incoming emo wave, he decides to take a quick vacation. Get his head straight and all. Oh. He forgot to tell anyone about it.

Well, he left a note, so that's good, right?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

9407767
Thank you very much! Is there any spots in particular that you think need improvement?

Hilarious I agree with Com-Gorgen but I wander why twilights so upset at him instead of worried?

9407772
Towards when spike gets to the pawn shop I doesn’t make as much sense in my opinion

9407776
She isn't so much pissed at spike as she is just generally annoyed that everything is going to hell. It'll be made clearer over the course of the next few chapters

9407779
I'll edit it real quick

I like it! Keep going!:moustache:

I love it please keep going

I need MOAARRR!!!

Please do more this is awaesome!

*eating some popcorn* this is good hope more chapters come out

Hah! I like the cut of this stories Jib, can't wait to see more.
*Last Seen Feb 2019*
Well feck.

The story hooked me then set me loose. I hate it when nothing ever goes past the first chapter

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