Nothing more than you're average writer who writes for a hobby ^_^
This is a story about a mare who was loved by many, she had friends who played and laughed with her. Never was her day dull when her friends were around but suddenly that all changed. Her friends that laughed and played with her, threatened her and scolded her with great anger. The kind mare at first tried to reason and find out what she did wrong but, now she's resorted to hiding. Will she be able to earn her friendship back or will she be forced to leave Ponyville...
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well I can say that we all have our moments where we think that no one likes us, but the truth is that it's just an emotion that gets out of control at times, it's like a type of hysteria that can be more or less be triggered by one simply joking about said individual but there is one thing I must point out, grammar, you must have rushed a little more than you think you did because I say some passages that were completely turned around and that confused me a bit so I would recommend finding an editor to look at this and let said editor help you fix this.
3463105 1. Awesome pic
I don't rush, I just type too fast to notice that sometimes. It's just I get into a good part and type fast and don't notice it until I check back later and i'm like "...whoa what am I saying?" I have my sister read it for me and sometimes she doesn't see them but does point them out. I do read them over like a million times and make sure they're making since. Thank you for pointing it out, i'll be sure to check it over AGAIN and thanks for the little lesson on feelings. /) 
2. Yeah I get that a lot lol.
3463186 I do that myself sometimes but I am always open to criticism where it is needed.
3463540 Same here as long as it isn't hatred or anything. Like if they say "Horrible" or "Why is he even making stories" then that would hurt my feelings. But I do my best anyway. I'll be sure to check out and see what's up. Thanks again
3464316 Anytime, if you ever need me to look something over I will be glad to help when I can.
3465668 I'll think about for the next story coming later on this month or early December. (depends when the whole story is posted for this)
Anytime I think of ponies being mean to derpy I just get
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I look forward to cerulean and fluttershy helping her find her place. Guessing dr. whooves will be the main thing that helps
Would've posted that last comment sooner, buthd to stop and go vote.
At least I don't have to for another 3 years now
6346406 Haha it's been a good while since I checked up on my stories, thanks for pointing out the error. At first I thought you were just highlighting a part you liked, well at least I hope that was part of your reason for posting the comment ^_^
Anyway, hope you enjoy the story so far