Nothing more than you're average writer who writes for a hobby ^_^
(HEADS UP, THIS WAS NOT REWORKED OR ANYTHING SO THIS WON'T MATCH UP WITH THE OTHER STORIES)
After Cerulean and Fluttershy learn a secret from Scootaloo it brings back something in Fluttershy's mind she has long forgotten. Ceurlean noticed it right away but Fluttershy wouldn't tell them why and soon enough, she suddenly disappears. Worrying none stop Cerulean does whatever he can do to find her, will he succeed or will he perish while looking for his beloved sister...
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You're right. I can see a couple grammar mistakes, nothing big.
It's ' I'm going to be ok.'
Just thought I'd help. I apologize if this is disrupting your life or upsetting you.
Love the story!
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Haha no you're fine ^_^ thanks for the help. If you see any more i'd be glad if you point it out. You don't have to if you don't want to. Thanks for the comment
Hope you'll like the other part
This make me start to cry.
...With happynesss.
Nice. Verry nice. And im guessing since this is thefirst of your stories ive read, that it is a great and secretive past.
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Soooo sappy, so happy, sooo sweet, sooo sad! Make me happy and make me fell the wind benith my shade wings.
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Ingor that last line. But it is one super chapter! And soo happy.
Sooooooooo ccuuuutttteeeee! Make moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar!
It a great -verse, make a nother chapter in it!
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Haha i'll think about it and thank you for your comments. It helped me out a lot and i'm glad you loved this story. I do hope you'll like my other stories but they still need work.
Anyway i'll think about it and see how it goes but again. Thank you for the support, really made me happy and still does
Brohoof my friend 
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Brohoof.
3984330 ive read your other work and it made this story sooooososososososososososoooooooo much better! And the backstory in the first and kindness in the secon make it soo much more better!
haven't read this yet, but i just thought you should know, you've got something here titled "Fina part" but the fic is labeled incomplete
was a little hesitant because of Cerulean. for a while, i couldn't figure out if he was fluttershy;s brother of her coltfriend or husband or what.
not really sure how I'll enjoy this fic, it's rather different than the scootaloo stuff I'm use to reading, but I'm gonna give it a good chance.
plus, i couldn't help realizing that flutteshy, despite being an adult, still sleeps with her big brother. if i were her big bro, I'd understand why she'd not want to sleep alone in her bed, but I'd also remind her that she's an adult and needs to toughen up at least a little.
i am enjoying it and how come I'm the only person/pony to have commented on this chapter?
it took a little time, but I've accepted Cerulean. he's a nice pony, so I'll be okay with this oc.
i do think i know why fluttershy is acting the way she is. if I'm right, I'll be annoyed that i figured it out from chapter 1, but I'm still liking the fic so far
i didn't cry, but i wasn;t because i realized fluttershy had to have heard what happened after he;d been out for almost a week.
She'd better own up next chapter. because she's been keeping it to herself her brother almost went into a coma of exhaustion
bad little sister. bad
okay. i don't think i saw a human tag before i entered this fic. is Cerulean a human?
either the next chapter better bloody explain this or there better be a sequel
Did you really just put RobCakeran, the writer of the fic that was the catalyst for my becoming a brony, in this fic?
I'm not saying that;s a bad thing, but, technically, Cakeran wasn't the one who... you know what? Thinking it over, he never gave dashie's dad a name, so i won't question it any further.
Would like to see the story where Cerulean met fluttershy in our world. which fic is that?
filly didn’t believe us and told his friends about us
couldn't help noticing that, sorry
anyway, enjoyed this more than i thought i would. it was different than how i thought it would go (i honestly thought fluttershy had given birth to scoots at a young age and had to give her up, a theory not helped in changing by that picture she showed in the hospital) but i still enjoyed it. though now i wanna read the fic saying how fluttershy and cerulean met. where is it? please tell me
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Well you already read my first story :P but anyway thanks again for the comments and notes
Was typing then I stopped, read over a few things and laughed at the realization of the missing Cakeran 
And to be honest, I literally forgot to add Cakeran in my story that's why he came at the end
Anyway thanks again for the comments, glad you've enjoyed my stories and hope my next one will be good too. Brohoof -walks off-
What huh wait ... huh what
Suddenly he is a human thats like me saying Ditzy is a demon from Tarturous
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What now...?
poor scootsy
is fluttershy having delusions?
ngh the feels!
eh?