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Yosh-E-O
I am aspiring author who enjoys writing various works of fantasy in which have a cutesy touch
Yosh-E-O
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3406467
What!?!
Who are you calling Insane and possibly dangerous!
*Pulls out his muffin axe*
How dare you call me......
*Looks at the story*
Oh....
err ehem..
*Tosses his muffin axe behind a bush*
Heh heh heh.....
What the fuck is this shit?
Seriously, what was that? While the last story was passable, this is downright creepy and terrible. I mean Spike acting like a baby and getting off on that? Rarity doing all this humiliating stuff to him? This isn't romantic or intimate, this is downright creepy and shows Rarity's gone insane. As for the whole "To be continued?" at the end, I implore that you please do not continue this. Just delete this story and never speak of this story again.
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A dilemma indeed.
Thanks for reading.
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Your thoughts are appreciated and certainly worth taking into consideration.
Everyone will see and feel something different upon reading a story. In this case, it wasn't one you saw in the way I had meant to present it. This is fine as, honestly, I knew I was still taking some risks in writing it.
The last part, if I get to writing it, is not going to be anything like this. This story is simply meant as a potential bridge to a greater goal.
Again, I thank you for your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
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Apparently something you did not enjoy.
This was a tale meant to try and create a different tone and feel than I did with "The Cutest, Little, Chubby Cheeks" I wanted to make something more innocent and cutesy.
I'm sorry you didn't like it.
Though, I do appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
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Thanks for your time and thoughts. It would appear that this experiment has... failed.
Writing is a tricky thing. A concept can be "Hit" or "Miss". It would seem I missed with this one. Though, there is always next time.
Have a good day!
3406508
Is that axe edible? Whether it is, or not, what flavor is it?
Thanks for your time in reading. Can't become a better writer unless you are willing to take chances.
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Dont mind the haters,
Haters gana hate,
muffins gana..... muffinate?
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Oh, no worries. Honestly, one cannot grow in ability without taking chances. And, as I wrote this, I knew I was taking a chance.
In writing these, I've actually thought of a clever way to make it so Spike and Rarity could actually be together. And, if I can get to writing the finale, it will be a bit on the risky side, too. With any luck, it'll be less "Creepy", too.
And, since Derpy, I can't hear the word "Muffin" without thinking about her. The fandom has forever embedded Muffins and Ponies into my head!
Stay pony, my friend.
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Err ehem,
Well this is akward...
See im not actually.....a pony...
Im really a master of disguise changeling.
*Takes off his "Amazing" fake mustache disguise*
I hope we can still be friends
Only a matter of time until Spike returns the favor.
3407320
Generosity is a wonderful thing.
Though, honestly, doesn't Spike exemplify the element more than Rarity?
Thanks for your time in reading this tale. May you have a great day!
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I'm a duck-dragon, so we certainly make for quite the pair of pals.
Isn't it great to be different?
Again, I thank you for your time, thoughtfulness, and the chance to know you a little more. I do delight much in conversation and sharing stories.
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*Puts on a monocle and top hat*
Indeed t'was a fine conversation,
You are most welcome good sir.
If that photos will go to ponyville people...
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That would certainly make for a wonderful "Gabby Gums" gossip column.
Thanks for your time in reading and commenting on the story. Stay pony, my friend!
3406720 I wouldn't say it was that creepy. It's just that Rarity has a baby fetish ... Something that should take place between two consenting adults.
3406855 It was impossible from the get-go to make this innocent and cutesy with the fetishism being such a strong factor.
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In this story, it wasn't meant to appear that Rarity had that particular fetish. Rather, it was meant that she could use the excuse of babying Spike so she could seem more natural in wanting to kiss, cuddle, and do other things that would allow her to love up Spike without directly saying, "I love you." Kind of a "Work-Around" if you will.
When / If I get to completing the full concept, this activity will NOT be a part of it. Rather, just like in "The Cutest, Little, Chubby Cheeks" it is another launching point to bring Rarity to realize how Spike does compliment her and how she would like to find a way to make such a relationship work.
Dat grammar...
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And then you directly said how a character feels.
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I think you need a sex tag for the whole Spike rubbing him self bit
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Thank you for taking the time to read the story.
If I read your comments right, I believe you are referring to all the cutesy, colorful words perhaps?
If so, I did try my best to be descriptive, but not too descriptive as to ruin the individual take a reader may get from this work.
Your comment, and creative way of presenting your comment, is much appreciated.
Have an awesome day!
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Hmm. I wasn't sure about that. Though, if I hear more remarks on how this would help better portray the work, I'll definitely get right on it.
Thank you for your time and comment.
3413139 I was pleased that, unlike many other ABDL writers, you have, as far as I know, perfect grammar. It was your style I was less keen on, the first example being of when you said, "Twilight was confused." and that made me sad.
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My style is ever-evolving. My goal is to accomplish works that are able to quickly get to the point while still delivering a solid tale that has genuine substance to it.
My strong points are Children's and Tween fiction and fantasy. My forays into doing more Mature work is to simply see if I am capable and/or comfortable doing them. One does not want to ever become pigeon holed.
ulterior motives, but they are innocent enough. Spikey deserves it.
Hmm songs like a shipping fic but il give it a try
I take it all back this is awesome
Can't wait for next chapter. Also, is Spike your favorite? I read your other story "Celestia's Chosen" too.
3413214 First of all, never say directly to the reader how a character is feeling. Ever.
The only other major problems were a spelling error- "sppon" and the fact that the ratio of dialogue to action was a little too high for me.
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Yep! Rarity, at least from what I've come to understand of her, doesn't often do generous things unless there may be a little something in it for her. In this case, an excuse to see what feelings she may actually have for Spikey-Wikey.
Thanks for reading and for your comment. Stay pony!
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You inspired me to finally look up what the term "Shipping Fic" meant. Thank you, as I honestly never knew what it meant until just now.
Yep, as the title implies, sort of, it is meant to be a romantic work. Though, as a reader, it'll ultimately be up to you to decide if it meets said criteria well enough.
Have a great day!
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Whoopsie! I missed this follow-up before I replied to the original.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I tried to keep it cute and innocent while still being intimate. I cited a number of episodes in its creation, too, so that it would at least seem as if it could happen.
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Oh, yes! Spike is most definitely my favorite character.
I appreciate you reading "Celestia's Chosen". It's the story, of all I've shared here, in which I am most proud of. It relies entirely on character development to create a scenario where more than one gifted pony has a dragon assistant. Sadly, it is largely ignored compared to these experimental writings I've done as of late.
I have one more part for this series, but I need to flush out the idea before doing it. It's going to not be nearly as intimate as this tale, but I hope more meaningful.
Have a most wonderful day! And thanks again!
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Thanks for the advice. I'll keep that in mind as, honestly, I want to write so that I can use the least amount of words to create a scene, or series of scenes, without taking away from the reader's ability to paint his, or her, own picture.
The spelling mistake is entirely due to laziness.
I literally just sat down, wrote the story, gave it a quick check, and submitted. I could've avoided that error if I bothered to edit more. Editing, sadly, isn't my strongest point. 
I'll try applying your insights in my forthcoming works. Thanks kindly for your time.
3416610 No problem, glad to help.
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I've never wrote a story under Padded Ponies and Adult Foals, because I don't know how. Can you please tell me step-by-step? Please?
Never doubt yourself. You did good on both of your stories so far.!
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First off, what is it you need help with in particular?
Sure!
A: Posting a story to "Padded Ponies & Adult Foals"
OR
B: Writing a story suitable for "Padded Ponies & Adult Foals"?
Please let me know more of how I can be of help and I'll gladly share what I can to get you on your way.
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How to write the story and then posting it.
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If it's not too much, both.
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What you want to do is hover your mouse over your user name on the tab panel above. "There should be an arrow pointing (Down) beside your name".
Next, you want to select "Stories"
You'll notice a box when the screen refreshes that says, "+ New Story". Click it.
Fill out the information to create the "Overview" of your story.
Once you have done this, click on the story's name to bring up the "Overview" page for it. Above your image for the story, you should see an option to "Add Chapter". Select it.
Scroll down until you see an editable, text box. Click "Edit" and you should be able to start typing in the box.
When you are done, or ready to take a break, select "+ Publish" above the text box to save your work.
When you are ready to seek approval from the fine folks at FiM Fiction, you need only click the "Submit" button in the "Overview" region of your story. Scroll down once you do and confirm your story is ready for review.
Once you get approved, you will be ready for the next step.
(Some descriptions may not be 100% accurate, but I do hope they give you the basic idea of how to work the site)
If you have questions, let me know.
Have a pony night!
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Thanks!
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You're welcome. Again, if you have any other questions, please let me know and I'll try to answer as best I can.
I am scared people here actually post constructive coments... Where have u been all my life
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Were those the instructions for computer or phone? I'm doing this by phone.
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I know what you mean. Constructive, or even thoughtful, comments are certainly rare to come by. This is why, if someone leaves me a comment, I strive to reply as best I can. I feel this shows respect for your time while potentially seeing if more wisdom, or even a friendship, can be achieved.
May you have a great day! I'm always open to Notes if you ever wish to talk more about pony, writing, and/or anything else.
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Those were instructions for "Computer". I, sadly, have no clue on how to do it by phone.
If I can be of any further help, please let me know.
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Thanks anyway. Good luck on next chapter.
This is a blood fetish story, isn't it?
I can guess from the title alone.