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If I do not see red blood from Blueblood, I will write several comments wherein I state my disappointment, while proofreading the chapter. Consider yourself warned.
You know when you never see Luna except for a few minutes in every episode that she is in, not really much C to go OOC on.
Fantastic chapter! I always can't wait for more. I was all "Fuck they better not succeed in bringing humans to Equestria" but you played it off so well I was glad I was along for the ride!
Nice on the 8k words too! Keep it up!
I hope they discover the magic of genetic engineering, transgenics, IVF, splicing etc so they can get cadence preggers :)
Dear God why?
Luna hasn't had enough on-screen time, for me at least, to judge character. I mean, one full episode and a couple bits in others? It's hard to make sure she isn't OOC with that little bit if you ask me.
Please make more!
I got 10 bits say Ares gives Blueblood a black eye and some missing teeth.
It may just be me but I'm getting a bit of a starfire from the teen titans cartoon vibe from luna.
Please, please don't go that route. Not with someone himself as irritating as Ares here. If your heart is dead set on that, have Ares suffer as well.
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Oh don't worry. Ares is a gardener, not a murderer. I can pretty much guarantee that he will make Blueblood miserable though. And he'll likely have help from Luna.
Ouch, I hope Celestia hears this story. Maybe then she won't be so eager to make Twi into an Alicorn if it means spending your life unable to have children...
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Ironically, I've seen it put into a lot of fan fics that the various alicorns of Equestria are perfectly capable of having children, and yet they go out of their way to make sure it never happens. Having children is all well and good, but having them knowing that you'll eventually have to watch them die, along with your grandchildren, great grandchildren, and every other descendant along the line.....it kind of dulls the enjoyment of the situation a bit. Not to get all dark and mopey, or make it seem like the whole immortality thing is some sort of cliche "curse" or whatever, but it definitely puts things into perspective.
It might be different in Cadance's case since the line of descendants would give her a living, physical connection to Shining even after he's gone, but Twilight doesn't really have that issue yet.
Did Luna just wish Celestia would step on a Lego?
That's fucking cruel...
Another lovely chapter :) . Very well done.
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Only marginally better, I'm afraid. It's hard to root for a character I don't like making a character I do like miserable.
This was my favorite scene in the chapter, because I also wanted to punch Ash in the face.
Everything is lining up perfectly, Ares and Flash are friends again, Luna and Celestia just found an even gayer version of the Volleyball scene from Top Gun, seriously, I was expecting to hear Kenny Loggins "Playin' with the Boys", Ares did something both stupid and heroic, Shining is losing his damn mind and the doctor wants cuddles.
I think what makes Ares work as an OC is that he isn't built up to be an ultra nice, gallant, mary-sue hero or a violent sociopath, he's a florist that says whatever the fuck he wants and keeps it real.
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Well, if you actually like Blueblood somehow, then there's not much I can say to help you. I'm rooting for Ares and Luna.
Welp, I was half-right: Doc did wind up hopping in Ares' bed, but not after Twilight got her turn. Ahwell, I suppose she'd be next then~
Fuck everything and everybody:
Ares x Flash is the only OTP acceptable
...
Man , i have to stop watching Yaoi , is fucking with my mind.
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And I understand that. However, I can't. Not if almost every scene with Ares makes me want to slap him upside the head^^
To each their own, my friend!
No matter where you run, no matter where you hide, you cannot escape...
Lego...
WHY MUST THIS HAPPEN TO BEST EMPRESS! {She's an Empress, Faust curse it. Or she would be, if Hasbro didn't go down the princess route.}
I mean, the goddess of Love unable to have children of her own? Now that's just depressing. It was still nice to see Ares comfort her.
WHOA! Calm down Luna.
Hey, some stuff I noticed/had questions about.
So is Ares a lady now or is that just a typo?
I think tests should be plural there, unless the word test is now the plural version of itself.
That is a very interesting way to phrase a what if question, that or its another typo.
This one I'm going to chalk up to good spell-check and bad grammar-check.
I have to ask, D4 or Lego? (D4 hurts more. I mean seriously, just look at them! There like nerdy caltrops!)
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Okay. A few things:
1 - I think lord of cuddles is too base. I think his title should be Huglord, his first name should be Cuddle-Monkey and end in "von Ares", with a follow-up title of "the Snuggle Master" thusly he shall be henceforth known as Huglord Cuddle-Monkey von Ares, the Snuggle Master: Skilled tactician in the arts of glomping, petting, and scritching.
2 - Let Luna fuck Ares' brains out before other ponies claim him please.
3 - Art of ponies in kimonos please.
4 - Blueblood's severed bloody head please.
5 - Thank you so very much for another wonderful chapter!
I have a feeling Candy will give birth to her own child, and it WON'T be Shining's
wow 50 pairs, even a human couldnt get an alicorn preggers.
wait then how the crap do alicorns become!? do all of them go thru what twilight does? Then who was the first!?
Aliens.....
Only criticism ill give is something you already mentioned in your notes. Luna is ridiculously OOC in this fic.
That said the whole story has been a load of fun. I do hope we get more clop in the fic, but we certainly wont be bored waiting for it.
The world could definitely benefit from more of this story's Luna.
Ermm *giggle* I think *snerk* you mean *pffft* solace hahahaha.
No but seriously good story dude, I like Ares, he's kind of a smartass, but he's also a kind smartass.
3746188 i second all points. WHOS WITH US?!!
Ares gets all the ladies.
Pervy Luna is Best Luna.
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Also damn man, those feels. Not even gonna pretend to know what thats like.
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The odd speech and energetic mannerisms? Whatever could you mean?
3746641 both with big spoon full of perv mixed in.
For the love of god....PLEASE LET HIM PUNCH ASH IN THE FACE.
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The Ladies all get him too..
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...But a D4 isn't a cube. It's a tetrahedron!
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Dammit...
(Is a mathmatics major, should know this suff)
*Sigh*
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Just a thought...
What if instead of Ares and Blueblood being at each others throats...
They actually get along quite well? And the fact he can do so with the Prince gets on Shiny's nerves like nothing else?
"Friends? With who? Oh, I knew he was a good for nothing!"
I love this.
This is one helluva funny story!
But...but...Pokemon! ;(
Let me guess, humans are compatible with Alicorns because they have 46 chromosomes just like us? Either that or ponification (Which I hope doesn't happen) would make humans compatible with Alicorns.
ALL OF THE FUCKING ABOVE!
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3747248 I can forsee a Omake/Gaiden Chapter that serves as the 'What if' Of him getting that Pikachu
That's just a natural thing.
Looking back, the earlier Ash was good, the later Ash....Let the man do it.
3747299 Thus making a satyr.
HAhahah!! Sweet Faust, Luna's so fuckin' hilarious!!
Really contrasts with the deep and sad content of this chapter...