Cadence's view of love changes
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Well...that escalated quickly
ares is gonna tap that ass so hard
Shining is an idiot
Oh man. It's happening. Prepare for shiniing to give ares his in. Good chapter, I feel for Ares. You really can't help who you like.
in all honesty shinning is being a dick.
Y U NO Inform me it is time for proofreading?
4127986 Really? I mostly see super submissive Celestia in clopfics.
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This is what I imagined Shining Armor to be like when he opened the door
I really, really hope Shining doesn't do something foolish... I really pray he doesn't. I was liking the fact he and Ares were kinda buddies now.
Gosh, I so want you to PM me what your plan is for this story sooooo bad! I can't take the epicness of it all.
Thanks for the chapter.
I do not know if this question was asked, but if they so want a child, why do not they just use surrogacy?
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Agreed... but I quite honestly see where he's coming from. His reactions are extremely understandable, at least to me.
4128830 I know I would!
This Fic is good. Too good actually. Waiting for updates is torture
Love it, good chapter.
The group-bed scene was my favorite.
Oh yeeessssss, another possible conflict arises! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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thought
wiggle
space after the period
looking at me that like because I, a princess, should be able
narrowing his eyes
psychologist
it's
how he was looking or who was looking
Hooves'
The question caught the princess off guard, and her mind had
I just might take you up on that, Luna
were
It's
kitchens
his friends' houses
I had to bite my tongue hard to keep from laughing
Well Shining's gonna do something stupid(like we all knew he would eventually do)
However maybe things will work out all right for Cadence and Ares.............please!
Nah but can't wait for more!
Oh no...
Yeah, I can totally see Shining Armor doing one of three things. One is attempting to kill Ares and making it look like an accident much how woody tried to kill Buzz in Toy Story 1, but change the window from that scene to the balcony that Ares likes a lot. The other way he could handle this is running back to his mama. The last way involves nailing a waitress at the Equestria equivalent to The Waffle House.
Awww crap, now things will go straight to Tartarus!
Absolutely fantastic chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
4129290 PM this shit. Seriously. Crams up the entire comment section and makes you look like a douchebag.
Now to suck all warmth and heart warmingness from this chapter.
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Yes, doing what the writer himself asks makes me a douchebag.
I was like: "Yeah go away sleep you can wait till I'm done here!"
And thus I die and weep and wait and ration as I wait for the next chapter! O_o
Have they done tests on Ares at all? His human biology is MUCH different then that of a pony, maybe he can give Candy a foal?
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Fairly sure someone said the same thing in a earlier chapter, I myself think that is exactly what's gonna happen but we shall see when we get there!
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Be you damned
If you wouldn't say that, author would continue to write it that way! Now we gonna wait next chapter for FOREVER
Ahh... and everybody was keeping they mouths shut... until you spoiled it
I wanna know what love is...I WANT YOU TO SHOW ME!
AllllRIGHT, that was a fun-as-shit read
I'm a Huge fan of this sudden tone shift and Fuck, was I happy to see this updated
Poor Ares.... The feels of falling for someone that's already taken and you can't help what you feel for them, you think about them more and more to point where it's painful, and want to be together with them even though it's wrong to want that. You know it can't ever be but your damn heart won't accept reality and just get over those feels... You just have to completely break away from that person...
Excuse me for a sec...
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JEEZ JUST FUCK ALREADY.
CALLED IT
ARGH THE WAIT BEGINS AGAIN
Blood is going to run like a fucking broken damm now
Wambo bambo, shinings gonna go rambo.
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Shining Armor fatally hurts Ares, Ares hospitalized, Cadence yells at Shining, Cadence goes to Ares, long heartfelt conversation between Ares and Cadence, (I would say Ares would keep trying to save their marriage, but pretty sure he would stop caring if Shining beat him) At some point, a Doctor is amazed Cadences DNA and Ares DNA are close enough for children. (One of the vagina doctors works there and has two jobs.)
Those thoughts spawn ideas, those ideas spawn plans, and those plans cause things to start, and then they fuck!
Probably what my thoughts are like when I'm half asleep.
(That's-that's supposed to be there, r-right?)
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That picture is so freaking saved! Those feels gave me feels.
Shining is going to do something incredibly moronic isn't he... Shining seriously all you're doing is sending your marriage further down the tubes.
Well.... this is going to end well.
"I guess that sometimes all a couple needs is a common enemy to help bring them back together.”
Foreshadowing?
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Oh Lord, so intense!
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What I wish Ares would do about his guilt.
True despair does not exist without hope
Jesus Shining is an autistic bitch. I await the drama :)
It's a good chapter, you really get the feels across. I'm just worried that this story seems to be getting progressively emo when it started with so much comedy and light hearted stuff. The characters actions are perfectly understandable, I just hope the future chapters don't turn into everyone singing "how could this happen to me" in their heads.
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How so?
Found some things you may want to edit.
That should be "say".
And that should be "dragging".
Love the story, and the pacing. Excellent jokes and built up :) One question I had about this chapter, is when/why did ares temperature suddenly become warm to others?
I can just imagine this goin' through Ares's head...
"Oh, she watchin' him with those eyes and she's lovin' him with that body, I just know it and he's holdin' her in his hooves late-late at night...
Ya know, I wish that I had Shining's Girl!! I wish I had Shining's Girl!! Where can I find a mare like that?!"