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Merry Christmas to you too!
Never thought I would see the word diddling used so hilariously.
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That is all...
Yer portrayal of Luna in this and the rest of the chapters is nothing short of fantastic.
Aw you lost your chance, you should add one little part to make the point across like:
"Luna, I will make it more than clear to you 2, something goes in my eyes, I will show you how human grude last and you will lost your human friend forever, I'm serious I will never going to forgive you, you will gain my eternal fury and hate, are we clear?"
Just to clarify, Is this scene cannon? It would obviously be down the line since he seems to be doing better.
I would be okay with this being cannon
“We will diddle that backside eventually, we will wear thee down; we swear it.” Pppfffftttt....
i'm like "are celetia and luna gonna be pregnant...hmmm *close eyes and cross fingers and plz plz*" XD i hope he stays with the 3 princesses
*twitch...twitch* Thou....you don't use thee for you, you use thou at the beginning of a sentence and thee when it's at the end of the sentence.
example:
"Art thou aware?"
"Have at thee!"
Latin's a pain in the ass, but hey....
Awesome story! I enjoyed it immensely! (not, not in that way).
Merry Christmas!
Okay, item one, this is a very funny fic and I'm glad I read it.
Item two, I really hate being this guy
Item three: If I'm not mistaken EVERY TIME Luna uses the word "thee", it should be "thou" instead.
This has been your archaic grammar nazi announcemnt for today
3676627 'Tis the season for some diddling...
Merry fuckin' Christmas!
Come on, Ares, let Luna in your ass. You'll like it, trust me.
3676855 From what I recall, that isn't Latin, but the informal form of you (you and your were the formal, which is the opposite of the modern where thee and thy are used to show a particular character is old-fashioned or medieval royalty). Other than that, your statement seems correct.
Please note this is from either early Modern English or late Middle English that carried over into the modern language.
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this was nice is there going to be more clop?
New Year Special: Luna and Celestia get knocked-up.
Shining blows a gasket because an alien knocked up two Princesses on the first attempt, while he can't impregnate his wife after ramming her for over a year
Luna and Celestia with mood-swings. Oh, God help him.
My day is now complete!
Luna be like:
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Should be "Art thou tired".
I don't know enough to tell you a hard rule for when to use 'thou' or 'thee', but this just doesn't sound right.
This should help though: http://alt-usage-english.org/pronoun_paradigms.html
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Exactly what I thought of upon reading the chapter title
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Unfortunately that's still wrong.
Thou = "you" when "you" is the subject of the sentence. "What would you do?" becomes "What would thou do?" because "you" is the one being talked about.
Thee = "you" when "you" is the object of the sentence. "I love you." becomes "I love thee." because "I" is the one being talked about.
Thy/thine = "your" in ALL cases. NEVER thee or thou. "Thy" when the next word begins with a consonant (thy table); "thine" when the next word begins with a vowel (thine apple).
3679360 Well, I'm glad someone could set it right. I knew I was somewhat close...meh, live and learn.
Good Lord! I love having a great imagination! Please let their diddling continue.
Of all the times for Queen's Good Ol' Fashioned Lover Boy to pop up on my shuffled music, coming up while I was reading this story has got to be among the most hilarious.
Even if this was non-canon, Ares and all three of the princesses are still a thing, right?
Right?
I'd like that
Say good bye to your prostate Ares!
Hot damn this is a good fic, there aren't that many fics that are HumanXCadence that are that good but you really write the characters in an amusing way. Also this chapter in particular just made me more excited for future Ares and Cadence 'diddling'.
Hey everybody! Here is something to kill your boners! 3.bp.blogspot.com/-FwYTwDmbbBQ/URltMPC3AKI/AAAAAAAAKFg/-3AgbvW3ST0/s1600/fap-to-this.gif
You're welcome... ;D
well that was a great christmas present
Ppppffffttt...! All them errors aside, Great little sneak peek to what the sex scenes will be like in the future. Also, Run Ares save your butt! If Luna or even celetia catches you off guard...
I almost forgot this was rated mature and sex
I leave for christmas vacation with my family and what do I find when I get back? Epic happy fun chapter! I got my wish, Luna hath ended her 'drought'!!! Tia got in on that too!
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Unless the author says no, I am gunna assume this is part of the story and not some fake what-if/omake whatever. I'd be sad if it was though...
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Let's pray for Ares because that is Luna's deliciously sinister plan!
There was so much YYYYYYEEEEEESSSSS!!!!! in this chapter that I was laughing like a villain. Mwahahahaaa!!
EDIT: You know what? After rereading this chapter, I loved it so much I decided to 'Like' it. Have a Like and a happy New Year!
What are your usual update scheduled?
So it's NOT canon to the story?! BOOOO!! >:(
Seriously. Boo. Hiss.
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soooo.... let me get this straight. this chapter isn't canon and in the story never happened. you just used the same characters why didn't you just made that a alt side story? cause now I can't look at it without thinking it happened there and its just some secret the three are keeping.
why didn't you make it an alt clop story anyway?
So many pronoun mistakes. For future reference:
I am/He is/You are/We are/They are/Thou art a writer.
I got this present for me/him/you/us/them/thee.
The chefs seem to enjoy my/his/your/our/their/thy recipe.
This gift is not mine/his/yours/ours/theirs/thine to give away.
One particular passage that caught my attention:
It should be:
That last part scares me... No man should have to go through that. That is, unless you're into that sort of thing. He better watch his ass, literally.
Honestly, this kind of disappointed me. The only time we're going to see what might have happened if he was with both Luna and Celestia (and possibly Cadence as well), and you decide to turn the entire thing into a joke by going so far with their characterization that you turned both of them into their meme versions.
Couldn't you have at least let one version be with the way you've written Celestia up to this point (as in, you know, not an idiotic meme) and another pure joke version? Oh well, at least we got something.
4097182 To be fair, most good clopfics with Celestia make her a super seductive, smooth but quiet lover. This is a bit of a different take, anmd I like how it was done.
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They're ponies, he's a human.
A primate cannot impregnate an equine, that is utterly impossible.
Besides, what would their babies come out looking like?
4177053 I'm thinking an abomination like a Satyr.
3707627 But dude! Clop! If there's clop, fuck canons! No, not cannons. Definitely don't fuck cannons. Cannons are awesome, and if you tried to fuck one it would be very, VERY bad for you. Especially artillery cannons, cus they have giant muzzle brakes. *shudder*
But anyway, any shits that I give about the canon go out the window if there's clop. Call me a pervert or something, but to quote a guy who commented on another story I read, I "came for the clop, stayed for the everything"
Only thing I could think of was this!
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That can't be it, I want to see the anal!
he gave him a peck on the forehead.
She
And is HAS been a long time since you’ve…
it
the human added, Luna looking him at him, eyes narrowing.
Delete the first Him
(I hope that this helps... I love the story thus far and the chapters are all fun! This one is pretty amazing if I do say so myself. Luna is so adorable!)
Trust me, after a night with Aphrodite, you will never be the same.
Well...don't really have anything to say about this. So...
Oh, maybe next time he can get with all four princesses!
And on the first day of Christmas the princesses gave to me, all the sex
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I don't care if I'm late to the party, or if someone covered this already, but it needs to be shown!