Cadence's view of love changes
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DAMMIT!!! I have shit to get done and you post a new chapter.......fuck.
Oops, missed that. Should be through.
Such DWAMAH!! I love it!!
Shining and Ares talking things out huh? I like it, now the only thing that's missing is that Cadance marries Ares as well and then she have two awsome husbands!!!
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Seriously, well bloody done.
I was a little concerned how this will play out after the last chapter with Shining seeing Ares with Cadence but you've done it fantastically. I really like the fact you've taken this route with not just Shining but Twilight's and Shining's mother.
This story just keeps getting better and better and is and always will be one of my all time faves on the site.
Edit: As I forgot to mention, I've liked a few of your stories, but this is the one that is making me admire you as one of the best authors on the site more and more.
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Well, if we're comparing love to plants how about a cactus? It can be pretty, it's painful, it lives in a hostile environment, some bare fruit that leave sharp burs in your skin and a cactus will live even if you ignore it. It's sorta like the relationship my grandparents have.
Also the bigger question is what will Shining do now that he's gone? Will he actually come back? When will Ares make his move? Will Flash and Twilight stop being so adorable?
Tune in same bat time, same bat channel.
and then begins the romance!
Quite a few interesting turn of events in this chapter.
Aaaaand cue the Twilight x Shining ships.
I love it! This new update is definitely a welcome sight!
ruefully?
This looks like an editing fragment - I think you mean: "How about while you're watching her you get that stick out of your flank and stop being mopey all the time?"
Misplaced italics tags. I think you mean:
I smiled. You don't know how much that means to me, Ares, I thought,
The princess is going to marry a cake?!
Well, I can kinda see that...
We need more love
I still feel bad for Shining. Hopefully this won't end with him shipped off to pony siberia.
Funny how Disfunction Junctions work. Everyone's a broken mess in it, and despite all of the attrition and bile, it still works out. Sure, it bends every other way like the foundation is about to snap, and we all know it eventually WILL, but that fragile balance is still impressive.
Right now, the only two that can consider themselves happy are Flashie and Twi. They're so damn lucky...
4198649 Nah, that's probably correct!
Funny thing about rubber...
It'll break if you put too much pressure on it too.
I think you accidentally a word here.
You should drop the Y, makes more sense.
Again, missing a word here.
Oops. Should be say.
Should be in italics.
is secretly hoping that ares helps shining and cadence get back together and takes luna up on her offer
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Surprised you didn't go for the Casablanca style joke on the gambling. It's a classic for a reason. :)
Sometimes i wish Congress would just break into a fight, now that'd be funny.
Coincidentally, i'm too sleep deprived atm to think of anything serious or witty to ssay other than i like this chapter a lot. its time for sleepies now.
This isn't a complaint, only an observation, but do people really care about their ability to have kids that much or is it just a pony thing you are adding to their species?
I suppose I could just be someone who never cared about that, seeing as how I got a vasectomy on the week of my 18th birthday, but it seems like it is really pronounced. As if the world around them, their marriage and their love for each other is just shattering because of this one little thing. I dunno, maybe I just don't get it.
I never had rude thoughts about Velvet. Like I said before, she's a mom; all moms are the same. They want their babies to stay dependent on them forever, and feel betrayed when they try to make a life for themselves. Velvet is only strange in that she didn't get over it as quickly as some others.
Thank Fuck! Really thought I wasn't gonna get through it in time
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant
Now that shining is out of the picture it's time for the seeds of love to grow in cadences heart for ares
Things I loved about this chapter:
1. Ares and Shining's Bro Chats.
2. Equestrian Political Fight Club
3. Velvet isn't a complete cunt anymore
I can't help wonder where Shining is going, and if things will really be the same when he gets back!
Keep up the great work!
YES! Velvet's good and apologized...BUT DEAR STARS ABOVE! This is just sad...I'm literally watching Shining and Cadance grow further and further apart and neither know how to fix it...Though, sometimes it's best to let someone go on friendly terms. This maybe one of those times where the love they shared won't make it, but at least they tried.
And while Ares is conflicted about this, I do hope he does get with Cadance...but that doesn't mean I hate Shining. Far from it. I feel bad for the guy.
Can't wait to see more.
It will be wrong if ares stay with candance but I want that to happen
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I sense an upcoming Ares/Cadance/Shining/Twi/Flash/Luna/Celestia/Cake orgy.
I'm probably wrong, but I don't care.
You didn't keep Twilight Velvet a mindless, raving looney.
You didn't have Shining go off the deep end and do something irrevocably stupid in spite of the last chapter.
You have a whole lot of the characters actually working to better the situation when it worsens.
I have so much respect for you right now. Just when I thought this story was going to use the same old plot developments with each character pretty much fitting one role, you throw in a twist with character development. Now I don't know what to expect from the rest of the story.
It's glorious.
4199347 I think it's that piled upon so many other things. It all started with Shining's clandestine letter to the princesses. From there it just snowballed out of proportion with Shining's continued hate for Ares, Ares growing closer to Cadence, and the whole Velvet thing where he just stood there and didn't challenge his mother while Ares did. And it's not so much for not being compatible with just Shining either, it's not being compatible with the entire male population of Equestria.
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Yeah I understand that it is only a factor among many, but it seems like the most blown out of proportion factor of them all. Like everybody and their grandma is comforting these two because of the fact that she won't be able to have kids. As if it is the most earth shattering horrible event to ever happen to anybody.
4200607 They could be blowing it out of proportion or just a pony thing. But it was also the only real public event in question. All the other factors were mostly internal, within the marriage itself. Everyone probably thought "Oh it's just a marriage tiff, it'll go away in time." When it didn't and they began to notice the signs of drifting away, everyone began to converge on the center of the sadness who also happened to be the recipient: Cadence. Unfortunately, Ares's attempt to fix the problem by distancing himself from her also worsened the problem, extending the whole 'child thing' well beyond it's welcome stay.
The sex is cummming!
Weird, for a moment (a very brief moment) I thought that Shining was gay
The marriage between Shining and Cadance...
With Shining moving away, I don't really see a future for them anymore...
Now I wonder what role Ares will play in this circumstance.
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CSPAN Rage in the Cage!!! That I'd pay money to see.
You know, this is one of the most balanced romance stories I've ever seen? Yeah, the basic plot about Shining and Cadence going splitsville is obvious, but at the same time... No one is getting bashed or made to look like an inconsiderate ass. We don't see Shining cheating on his wife. We don't see Cadence being a bitch to drive Shining off. We don't see spousal abuse so the "Noble human can swoop in and save the day." Nope, every single action undertaken is understandable within the characters's frameworks and motivations. Shining is getting mad because his wife and him are having a rough spot and she's hanging with another guy that he doesn't really like all that much? Totally understandable. You could make everyone here a human and you wouldn't have to change a thing (other than magic or wings, but you get my drift). Cadence falling out of love due to a roller coaster of emotions and events? Again, very understandable and relatable.
I gotta know what that incest thing was! Please tell me its a side story
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Clearly it's Prince Blueballs.
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At this point you might want to keep your eye on Candy if you're watching for the first move. Ares strikes me as the kind of guy who won't do anything about it unless he's either completely mentally handicapped by something (Rum cake, anyone? .....You can get drunk on those, right? I don't eat cake, so I have no idea.....), or if Shining just totally screws the pooch so badly that Ares decides that he doesn't deserve Cadance.
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For the record you can get blitzed on rum cake, because it is essentially a very soft spongy fruit cake soaked in rum... that last part is important because in rum cake the cake is drenched in the booze rather than have it in the cake batter and having it burn off during cooking like what happens when preparing stove top sauces which is why you don't get buzzed off of white wine infused as an ingredient. Yeah, but back to rum cake depending on who makes it, the strength of the rum how much they use, it is a cake that can fuck you up something fierce.
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There you go then. My vote is on Rum Cake shenanigans.
I had always seen people getting drunk on that stuff show up in stories, but since I've never had one personally I never knew if it was a real thing or if it was like kids pretending to be drunk when they eat something with cooking wine in it (if you've never been around a kid who's done that, it's hilarious). The more you know, eh?
4201032 my money is on McCain. He's a crazy bastard.
4202036 peesh light weights one time i partied so hard woke up to states over wooooo
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It's true, I can't handle my cake. I try so hard to keep up with everyone around me, but it just never works out. One or two slices and I'm totally gone.
4204913 do worry man some people's body can't handle it as they'd like
Too many little errors for me to point them all out, but this one had me laughing.
Ares and Shining are planning to secede from the nation, that's always serious.
Why doesn't Ares simply tell Shining and Cadence that he is falling in love with here? It's not like he wants that!