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What is it with the fics im seeing nowadays and shining being a asshole?
Nice chapter! I'm really glad this story is updating, of course more frequent chapters would be nice, but we can't have everything.
3445276 Not really an asshole. Just so over protective that he seems like an asshole.
3445289 So,An asshole
3445294 Yep basically.
Oh, dear.
Let me guess: Cadence is going to be incredibly pissed that Shining broke her trust, made her look like a weak ruler, and Celestia and Luna are going to declare him foul-mouthed yet harmless, therefore embarrassing Shining.
Combine that with their fertility troubles, and you've got a recipe for a cluster-fuck surprise - especially when Twilight's mother thinks Cadence is committing adultery with the "alien".
Asshole Armor is best Shining Armor.
I'm just going to say this once.
From the deepest part of my heart, right down to the very core, filled with the shining sincerity of a millions supernovas, Fuck Shining Armor. It will be so sweet when shit goes down on him.
3445301 and that is why this fic is gonna be awesome
Awwww......and here I was looking forward to Cadance getting preggo, only to find out after she breaks the "good news" to Shiny that his test came back saying that he was sterile. Whoops......
God this is some of the funniest stuff I have read on here! Oh damn I would read this just for the laughs and not for the sex but I am human so sex is a plus with this story so meh.
haha dog-pony, thats simply adorable!
Dude, nice chapter and all but please, edit this asap!
You know, once you're feeling well and all.
Hmmm. Shining is impotent so he can't have kids. So Cadence loses entrust and falls in love with the human.
Shining armor is devastated by this and goes and has his ass raped by his boyfriend Flash Sentry.
Then shining armor dies David Caradean style.
shinning you ass hole why does no one listen to the alicorn
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BELLY RUB SOME MOAR!
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Amen!
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I know right?
This can't be good if Shining is writing a letter to Celestia.
I'm pretty sure that Shining will get his comeuppance in the next several chapters.
3445276 Because he is an asshole.
Shining...wat are you doin?
Shining...Stahp
3445301 This comment.....I like it.
All this comments deserve more likes
Love this fic!!! Turning out to be awesome, but I know for a fact excrement is about to hit the primary rotary cooling device for shining armor
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No idea. But if that's the strategy to make readers sympathetic to Ares, I don't like it. Never liked it when canon characters are sacrificed like that.
Now Ares himself has been improving, but please don't turn Shining Armor into an asshole just to make us like the human by default.
Dammit Shiney stop making me hate you!
But stuff like that happens all the time in fantasy/myths. A satyr/centaur wouldn't be far fetched. {Come on. They are adorable....Oddly enough, I've never seen a Cadance satyr offspring. Nor have I actually read a story involving a satyr child.}
And nice to see Ares is improving. {He seems like a nice guy. Good. And his potty mouth is pretty much gone. Good too. I've seen way too many characters swear a lot. Swearing all the time is definitely a stupid trope that shouldn't be used.}
And Shining Armor. Okay why? You know that he's not dangerous. Heck, he could very well die. Why send the royal sisters into a frenzy?
Ugh, I hate him anyways, so I don't care what happens. {Though I liked the comic adaptation of him. Gave him personality and depth....If only the show did so.}
After reading this chapter, Why do I feel like I want to kick Shining Armor in the nuts repeatedly while playing this song :
3446197 So would you rather compromise the character traits that the Author has shown. I mean Ares seems hardcore with a bit of humor. He doesn't take shit from nobody. So to have him suddenly become emotional kinda goes against everything the author has set up. I mean making Shinning an asshole probably isn't the best way to make the readers feel sympathetic towards Ares. But, it serves a double purpose. The point of the fanfic is to have Cadence to question her love for her husband, and her feelings for the human. So the author decide to make shinning an asshole so Cadence actually has reason to question her love for him. Just my take on the reading and why the author does this. I've also notice that Shinning possibly being infertile probably will help play in Cadences feelings.
Shining acts like he is the commanding royalty. He is forgetting his training as a gaurd and is slowly breaking Cadence because of that.
Cadence will start to question her own actions thinking she is doing stuff wrong.
And Ares is probably quiet now considering the painfull treatment he just underwent with the magic. Everyone would feel shit after that.
Stupid stupid Shining Armor, just because the man gets all the mares doesn't mean you have to call in the big guns! I'll bet that Ares will treat Celly like a big 'ol St. Bernard. It will be squeelicious!
an alien in it
I think you meant very
double negative
I could probably have almost
I dont even...
As long as
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Yes, that's the sense I'd gotten too. The problem is that being an asshole doesn't seem to mesh well with the Shining Armor we've seen on the show--the one Cadance fell in love with, remember? Are you fine with compromising his character traits?
Plus, if Ares kept up with his obnoxious and rude behaviour, do you honestly believe any love between Cadance and him would be possible, considering what her canon love interest Shining Armor is like?
Lastly: we can't truly tell yet whether Shining Armor will be characterised as an asshole. Going over Cadance's head doesn't make him look good right now; we'll have to wait and see what else happens. Personally, I hope the fic won't simply abandon all his good traits for the sake of making the new love interest look good in comparison, or at least give us a convincing explanation for why it happened. Breaking Cadance's trust because of a "gut feeling" isn't particularly convincing yet.
We'll have to wait and see.
Addendum: There are ways to explain his behaviour, actually. Like, for instance, his time as captain of the guard making him overly suspicious because Canterlot had a "tell Celestia every bit of information, even if it's trivial" policy. After all, Canterlot is attacked by mythic threats often enough for her to take even small things seriously...
Fuck you, Susan!!!
Fuck sickness you go man!
3446697well maybe his change of behavior stems from the head injury that Ares gave shining armor. it has been known that in some cases when a certain blow to the head could could change a persons personalitya. Also for Ares rude behavior it could be his own way of dealing with this . Even if he doesnt know it. If not you have to remember that he was transported to a place he doesn't know while walking through winter waste land frostbitten and hungry. Then when he finds a civilization he is then attacked, captured, called a monster. I think he has a little excuse to be a little rude.
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And now because of what you said, I will genuinely be pissed if that does NOT happen. Add insult to (Shinning's) injury (more like pride) is when Ares actually tries to play fetch with Tia. She won't fetch the stick but she still wholeheartedly laughs it off and enjoys his laid back but no-shit-from-anyone manner while every pony looks on with an epic D= look on their faces.
Eventually.
At first, however, I would expect that the Royal Sisters will be supremely suspicious off the bat; especially how Shinning may word his letter about the 'dangerous alien' in the castle. After an interesting encounter and an investigation about him and how he got here 'n such, he will break the ice and get the Sisters to warm up to him.
This is assuming they even show up at all though...
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That would be an interesting premise.
And yes, it might be a coping mechanism. He's clearly getting better, in health as in attitude, so it's likely that you are correct on that front.
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He has built-in asshole potential.
Loving husband to the Princess of Love, blood sister to the Princess of Magic, and all-around "Nice Guy". But what would happen if he perceives you as a threat to his lifestyle, or his family? Possible threat to the Crystal Empire? 1 MILLION YEEEEARS DUNGEON! Possible suitor for Twilight? Beat up the bastard!
Everyone seems to assume that Shiny's the one who's infertile. It's just as likely to be Cadence, and that would probably be more meaningful for the story. Plus, alicorns in general seem to have trouble getting pregnant. Otherwise Celestia would have a massive family. (Come on, a personal guard of hot, fit stallions at her beck and call for centuries?)
write faster, FASTER I tell you!
This is golden, and I find it funny, how he reacted to the mob.
Why is it in so many stories I read, Shining's always dumb as a doornail?
3447295 Because the Thunderbird bird bird,The bird is the word?
So shining Armor is just going to rat him up? Well lets see…Cadence, and the entire town plus the nurse and possible the doctor are on HIS side, no to mention that Twilight can be overboard and use magic without thinking hurting him…yeah the sparkle are going to get in HUGE problems.
hmmm…I wonder how Celestia and Luna will reach once they see him
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I'm cold today. Where is my silly doge-pone to cuddle?
Shining Armor you ass hole.....................great chapter as well
Funking cliffhanger!
Shining REALLY is a major flank hole in this fic.
thats the best way to wake up at a hospital.