Cadence's view of love changes
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Baby don't hurt me..no more!
You know, this is probably the longest a story about sex, has gone without sex.
Epilogue? aww okay. I'm hoping for a sequel because I seriously love this story
You know, I'm pretty happy that it didn't go past drunk snuggling and a mutual bath. Drunken sex right away would drive a wedge between Ares and Candy instead of being an icebreaker.
And don't you think you're wrapping this up a little early? The idea of you ending things next chapter is giving me a bad feeling that it's gonna be a rushed, "and then they fucked" ending. Ares' emotional situation doesn't seem like something that would be cured by a love confession and a creampie; Cadence should really have to work her way harder than this.
4343276 Heh, try "To Love A Pony" by Shachza. Pretty sure the wordcount for it is bigger than this here, and it isn't even halfway done. And there still hasn't been any sex, though the tensions are high.
EDIT: As of the date of this comment (5th of May, 2014), it is indeed bigger, by about 20K words.
4343349 I recall that story.
Although I must say that, that story never felt like a sex story.
wait the sex scene and the epilogue are in the next chapter or theres a sex scene next chapter and in the epilogue?
I think this didn't work out as planned for Cadance.
Does Twilight know about Cadance and Ares?
Its almost over? But i love this story!
Oh man it's ending? I want more of it after him and cadence get together,. The life and times of ares x cadence. Their adventures and trials and tribulations. Their Is so much content their to play with!
This story really needs a sequel after it is done. Luna is still searching for that immortality spell and can't wait to be 'grabbed' by his fingers. Celestia is starting to get day dreams about him. Let alone half the population in the Crystal Empire adores him. They said that the Crystal Hearth gets stronger with the amount of love the ponies have for their rulers. Our human receives all the love in tha world!
Honestly I'm just enjoying the story itself.
epilogue?! I hope that doesn't mean the stories ending soon?!
Omg what did that letter have written??
Tease.
That was a fuckin tear jerker. Beautiful.
4343648 Probably a follow up afterwards. Then there COULD be a continuation story for this... I hope.
But when this is all over, I'll have nothing to live for anymore!
NEEED MOOOORE!!!
Epilogue?! You're ending this so soon?! I felt very strongly that there was still much to develop.
Awesome chapter today but still, I'm not ready to see this story end yet!
Ouch, both of them have it rather rough now, they need to sort it out and have smexh!
4343904 You may run kids, but remember: NO-ONE HIDES FROM THE KOOL-AID MAN. NO-ONE.
So is the epilogue going to be included in the next chapter, or will there be an epilogue after the next chapter?
4343929 A sequel can always be written. I don't think the story will kick the bucket so soon even if this chapter comes to a close. And hey, a short series of Shinings travels can be written as well, so don't fet.
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I would mind a sequel and I'm really liking the idea of a side story of Shining's journey. Granted it will either be short and sweet or just like with Ares, he finds new love. Authors take note!
Please don't end the story, please!
It's so amazing!
Wait, only one more chapter? But, the story's only just not reached the end of the description (where Cadance realizes she has feelings for him), and it's already pretty much over?
That, well, that sounds very disappointing. I only hope it's not rushed.
Still, it was awesome while it lasted.
It's "Führer" and an awesome chapter all together again!
read poppin molly, was good. im gonna be sad when this ends thou
Man am I gonna be bummed out when this ends. This is seriously one of my favorite fic's ever. Can't wait to see how this ends, and I definitively cant wait to see whatever it is you cook up next.
4345122 Fine, but really? A random physiologist knows that?
My mental image of a drunk Cadence
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nuff said
George Washington is a wise man.
Wonder if that letter Cadance sent Shining went something like
CURSE YOU! My erection will not wane with the new moon or the one after that one, or the next. NO it shall only be satisfied when this story finally settles on the highway to Bang Town!
No but seriously awesome chapter can't wait for sexy timez!
Goddamnit...Goddamnit!!
It's too good, it's just too fuckin' good!
ALL HAIL FUHRER CADENCE!
4343336 Are you saying that the April-fools chapter was bad? Rushed? Flawed? HERESY!!
You.....are.....a.....GOD!
Okay I didn't expect that.
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4346982 As a canon chapter, yes, yes I do. But since it isn't, it's all enjoyment
I'm comping what others have said before.
Epilogue in the horizon already? ...But, but, the best bit is just about to come! This story has roasted so wonderfully slowly thusfar. Appetisers have been had and the main course is about to be served. You can't just hog it all down at once and be done with it!
There's yet the whole dance with "Is this really happening to us?" and "We can't tell others about this, what would they think? We must be sneaky.", to the occasional bumping uglies in random places and other romantic nonsense to be had. If you as a author feel like you're in a creative deadlock of sorts, or just want to be over with this and move on, there's no need to rush things. Just take a break. Do something else for a change, and then come back whenever. Keep writing this story at your own pace. Do the George R. R. Martin. We can wait...
Anyhow. What ever you'll end up doing, I still had absolute blast with this. Thanks.
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Yes a sequal.
Where they have actual sex.
So if she broke it off with Shining to sleep with the human, I'm assuming the earlier clop chapter with he princesses was non-cannon since it was the future and she was with Shining still. That is disappointing.
Also pretty low of Cadence to decide for shining that he would be happier with someone else. How he feels isnt really her decision.
I'm sorry but ending the story this early would be a mistake. This story really needs to go ten more chapters at least, its really in need of that.
4351590 I completely agree, this story needs another ten chapters, at least. Either that, or it deserves to see an end that is befitting a story of this magnitude... in like ten chapters
This story one of my top ten favorite stories on here. I will be sad to see it end but so very happy that I have read it.
I love that quote by george. Its one of my favorites.