One day the world took a turn for the insane. Earth and Equestria connected and now humans and ponies live together in harmony. Bronies are now a widespread culture and everyone is happy because of it. Everyone except me the only sane person alive. I know that this isn't right and I know that maybe one day humanity will wake up. They will see how stupid they've made the world and what they let into their hearts. One day I'll finally feel like I'm not an outsider. One day ponies and all pony sympathizers will perish in a violent spectacular marvel.
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If you need an editor, I could be one for you...
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This is interesting to me
It's not often we get the protagonist who is fighting against the "heroes"
For that I will follow this story to see where it goes.
Although it would be preferable if this didn't descend into mindless hate. Got to give the MC good reason to hate so we can be sympathetic to him.
Interesting. I will see where this goes
I am a brony and I would be very shocked too about the fact that our government is peaceful, since our current state of our government is basicily political suicideing itself. So the fact that the governments are peaceful seem very wrong. Also what happen to the terrorist cells in the east, I doubt they would want to be friendly with ponies.
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Thanks but I'm new at all this so I'm just going to see how this goes from here. Also I have some of the story already pre-typed so I'm reviewing it myself.
Oh, Specist Check, Plan to that just drown right evil check.
This guy is monster, not an human
he already hit
Moral Event Horizon
This should for protagonist theme song, why he may most seemly peaceful. but he quite evil
A good game, that is, oh yes yes.
Thank you for understanding the difference between rapping and raping. So many people humiliate themselves that way...
Do your homework kids, you'll get into trouble for misspelling rapping.
Keeps getting better and better!
I never got the "I watch it for the plot" joke until now lol
3311529 Anti-bronies hate because they're d*ck$.
Wow. Even back in my anti-brony days I wasn't that horrible.
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Oh it'll get worst. We are just starting out. Wait until he goes full psycho.
Killing humans that she was "helping" by stopping them?
Celestia's faithful student everyone.
"In the roar of an engine, he lost everything, and became a shell of a man. A burnt-out, desolate man. A man haunted by the demons of his past. A man who wandered out into the wasteland. And it was here, in this blighted place, that he learned to live again." - Mad Max 2
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Huh cool. Never seen that movie though
I always wanted to see a anti brony fanfic This is great!
Jim will win!!!!
This fic had never failed to amaze me. Keep it up angry!
My money is on Andy cause Jim's dead, Bones.
Not really
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If you're commenting on that line because you're sick of reading the same cliché in Hie fics than I'm with you. To tell the truth when I was writing it, I could feel how cliché it was but I promise it'll go along with the story eventually.
That is if you're implying cliché.
for vengeance its well paced but a bit slow, I feel he should have been able to take her down stroke her ego a bit and make her angry and rainbows no better than a blind kamikaze, fast but stupid. If he wants vengeance the best thing to do is sneak up on 1 of them and strike now they must Know pain.
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And nice reference. (I'm hoping that's from Naruto). Anyways I didn't feel it was right for him to get his "vengeance" just yet. Let's wait for the actual violent parts.
Thanks for the feedback.
3580103 lol it was from Naruto and I understand just keep up the good work love the way the story is and i can see where your coming from just kinda let it build up!
I pray he doesn't go Trevor on them or does I forget which.
LOL WTF! I enjoyed this chapter.
As a crazy person with anger issues, I can say this feels like Jim/Andy is pretty 3-D fleshed out. The minor and support characters are getting better and better. They started off ok(which is a win for me) and the exchange between Dash and Jim/Andy is your best so far. Everything else is a little rough but very enjoyable. The world building is a little weak but sets up the characters background ok. I'm not an English Lit teacher and I'm not a stuck up snob on language. Pacing is good and I'm not bored. This is a good point to think about end game for Jim/Andy's story. What could be the possible outcomes and such?
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And if you say that the characters are doing fine, then that's a weight taken off my back. As for the ending, I have it thought out. Glad you didn't find it boring I will work on the other details. Updates will be coming soon.
I thought for a moment that Andy got a bad ending, but nope, it's just the beggining.
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You are welcome.
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There is a guy who fights on a horse in that game, right?
3580428 Only in the manga. Also, why do I get the feeling that this is going to happen to one of the mane 6 in a future chapter?
I really hope the Mane 6 dies in this story. They just seem like dicks.
No Dark tag
No Tragedy tag
No Gore tag
Prepare to be dissapointed guys, he will make Andy a bony in the end.
I would seriously consider it.
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Well kind of spoilers here but he's not becoming a brony. Also should I put those tags in? The reason I didn't put tragedy and dark in is because the story really hasn't been too dramatic or really messed up. And I'm comparing this to other stories I've read with the tags. And the only scene with death didn't have enough detail so gore wouldn't be an appropriate tag I think. But seriously should I add tags if I find the story goes in a certain direction or just add them now and get rid of them later? This comment is open to multiple answers.
3617837 In that case don't, the tags are fine as they are.
Another chapter another cliffhanger XD
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Hey thanks and I personally make these stories (got some in the works) with the mindset that it is a movie and could be seen by large audiences. Glad to see the protagonist is likeable, that was one of my fears when writing this, and if there is any other way to gain notoriety other than by continuing to write then please inform me.
Can't wait to see how he screws that up.
3438755 No. We are not all bad. Well, I'm not technically an anti-brony, I have what I call "torn loyalties". Sometimes, I even confuse myself.
Ah yes, another chapter of the story of the paranoid, delusional, hateful anti-brony.
I might do a case study on him sometime. Good for my psychology course.
3615442 Seriously? That is THE STUPIDEST IDEA EVER!!!!
I can absolutely understand him barfing up what little he had in his stomach.
As I read this more, my loyalties are beginning to shift. I am also mocking the animators more as I watch My Little Bloopers: Mistakes are FOREVER!, which is a series of videos of animation mistakes, such as Applejack commonly forgetting her freckles, disjointed limbs, and initial sketches not erased.
Oh dear.
How do I somehow know hat something really, really bad will happen?
Go for rainbow dash!
Kill RD first.
He's gonna screw it up, I can tell.