Every pony dies - some perish as foals, some are practically immortal, but the Reaper will take his due. Not even an Alicorn is untouchable.
A collection of one-shot death scenes for various characters, accompanied by ratings and warnings.
Chapter 1: Fluttershy (Everyone: sad)
Chapter 2: Princess Luna (Everyone?: dark)
Chapter 3: Applejack (Teen: violence, some gore, grimdark)
Chapter 4: The Cutie Mark Crusaders (Everyone: touch of comedy)
Rated Teen for violence and mild gore in Apple Harvest.
Note: The stories are not part of a single continuity.
Chapters (4)
This experimental piece is open to constructive criticism.
You are invited to post something even if you dislike it!
Personally \I like it. Could have done with being more drawn out, but as far as things go, it wasn't half bad.
I'm a fan!
Your name suits you well.
so beautiful. kramer krame.
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Thank you!
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I don't know what this means, yet I fear it anyway...
ahh. That sweet. Don't see many FlutterJack shippings going on. Mostly FlutterDash or FlutterMac
that was one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. you are an amazing author, you have great word choice, and i love the plot line. i am definitely going to continue reading this one.
this story is brilliant. you are such a good writer!
however, i am crying my eyes out right now!!!
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Oh come on, you're making us blush over here...
Thank you, though. We don't get the opportunity very often.
That was different.
I don't know if I should say 'I love it', but I really did love it!
Any ideas when next chapter will be published?
I love it. More please?
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Well, um, thank you both!
This story remains "on hiatus" due mostly to my weird update plan for it, but I'm already working on the next installment. For this "story", that's usually a good sign.
I can't help but contemplate the numbers of fanfic that makes me want to call those three complete idiots.
Still, good chapter.
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Thank you! I think.
All of my sadness for Luna going out this way but you handled it well enough to where it made sense. I give you two hooves up for that.
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Thanks for that!
I wasn't sure I could pull it off in practice. (In retrospect, it reminds me a bit of Faust.)
I'm not a fan of FlutterJack, but this was pretty good.
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Hi! Thanks for that.
I do my best. Usually.
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That is a bit harsh, if you are going to insult someone at least use an accurate insult not a bullshit one.
What a painful way to die.
Will you right any more of this fanfic?
write, not right. Stupid typo.
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Whenever the mood strikes me. That's why it's "on hiatus."
That said, more ponies are likely to die.
Your story has been reviewed by the PCaRG!
La link for your pleasure!
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Graci.
BUT THE FEELS
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You're welcome?
Ha! I can't believe you went there.
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Nopony is sacred!
Well, that's something I haven't seen coming...
Well, at least they died in peace... And pieces, but that's another thing.
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