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Sometimes, it takes an alicorn to solve a murder. Long before the return of Nightmare Moon, Princess Celestia is the only such power, and the responsibility falls on her shoulders every time.
Her methods are more than a little unorthodox.
[Another of my dream-based short stories.]
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From the title, I thought this would be about her dildo collection. Oh well
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Oh you!
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I like this. Please do more. Thank you.
Oh wow, you were right. It CAN get stranger.
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There will be a second chapter to develop and finish the story.
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My subconscious should've come with a warning label.
Thank you!
... it's what happens when you turn dreams into stories.
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... I don't think that's quite what I was thinking of, Subconscious, but thank you for the example.
3687137 Your subconscious has a problem. Mine just says things like, "Kill."
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Are you sure about whose has the problem?
3687389 No.
what the hell.....?
Well, this tale tries way harder than a lot of stories to show me something that hasn't been done 180 times. I like this story so far, so it gets an upvote.
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Welcome to my subconscious, apparently.
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Although, already having suspicions about where my dreams get their sources, I'd have to say it's not entirely original... 
Well, thank you.
Um...this was certainly...interesting. Faved just to see where the hell you're gonna take this.
Huh. You're coming close to an idea on my to-do list with the setup and Celestia's reaction.
But my concept was just "what would drive Celestia to an absolute fury without breaking character?" This is not something I would have ever thought of.
And nice incantations, by the way.
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Thank you! Although, it's taking me a bit to write the rest of it.
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Thank you, on both counts! I'm glad you liked it (I think).
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I do like it. It's just somewhat stranger than I expected.
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Good!
Heh, easy. Reversals of the arcane, your enchantment is undone.
This story is weird, but interesting. I wonder of what use this spell is if somepony was killed with hooves or magical blast.
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The spells would be no use, in those cases.
You're the first person to mention figuring out the scramblegram thingy with that spell. (Alternatively, "You see what I did there.
")
I'm glad you liked the story!
... This story is thought provoking. Enough so to cause... Deep Thought.
In all seriousness you got me thinking about writing a story based off of this, with a few changes about exactly what she performed the spell on.
My idea is this. What happens when that spell is cast on an object that had a limited intelligence. Also what if that object was a healing device that failed it's job.
What I intend to do is make an incredibly cute character out of the results of when the spell wears off. Due to the limited intelligence the object remembers being a pony, and starts to act like one, except it is still small enough to hold in a hoof. Mainly for fun little random stories.
Thoughts?
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Thank you.
I'd probably read that, and I am rather flattered to have actually inspired someone.
I like your dreams.
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oh stories from dreams , that reminds me of one i wanted to make as well , maybe someday.....
That was beautiful.
The whole premise is very interesting and the back-story intriguing a well. I feel slightly depressed after reading this, which is good, as it is a dark tagged story.
Very, very nice.
I'm thinking of making a group of stories inspired by dreams would you follow that
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But feel free to start something regardless. You're probably not the only one interested. 
Probably not, I don't do much on groups here.
Still makes more sense than my dreams.
Great story! Very well done. I'm adding it to my liked stories shelf for sure!
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Oh hey, thanks for that. Glad you liked it.
5384715 You're welcome!
Zatanna?
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Not quite.
Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for?
and how bad does it get ?
this is why all murders should be committed with your own two fists.
they can't interrogate your hands.
and even if they could them hands will be doing only one thing, screaming.