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DauntedSuperior


I like to make people laugh, so I try to type out stories that are both funny and slightly serious... What else... Oh, I know a lot about and love Halo and my favorite pony is Pinkie Pie. That's all.

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That was not very good... It was AWSOME! Might wanna consider looking up the actuall names of the guns though e.g BR55 for the battle rifle
And I really like that hope you do moar soon :D

This story is of BAMF quality keep it up please:twilightsmile:

Wow this was actually pretty good. The whole thing with the slippery shields was new.

I wonder what would happen if the Flood came in Equestria :rainbowderp:
Twilight: Ok girls, let's use the elements of harmony against the flood!
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- Ten seconds later -
Mane 6 combat form :pinkiecrazy:

However, good job!

3407143 Nothing can really beat the flood. Unless u have a Halo.

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Ironic, considering that the Flood survives in the research facilities of the Halo rings

3412034 Yep. But still, pretty much wiped out by the Halos.

Wow, this chapter is pure adrenaline! The escape from the Flood, the sacrifice of Chase, the first contact with the Equestrians! :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:
I love the part of the last fight of the SPARTAN against the Flood and the reaction of those on the other side of the portal, the feelings are really well showed.
I have to say, nice work, simply nice work. Keep going this way, the story has much potential :moustache:

Would be badass if later in the story he opened the portal and walked through with bits of Flood flesh and blood on his armor being like:
Sup, bitches!

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It's a fucking magazine.

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...Once was enough, damn, but thanks for the heads up I'll fix that in later chapters. Clips are what pistols use right?

3419295 its a mag if I remember that a mag is for assault rifles and pistols while the clip is for revolvers, shotgun and the old rifles,

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Sorry this particular misconception really bothers me.
The springloaded box the holds bullets and feeds a gun is called a magazine.
Some guns actauly use clips. They are literally just clips that hold a certain number of bullets.
Revolvers have a "Cylinder"
Some Shotguns have a Magazine tube directly underneath the barrel. Others can be fed by box magazines.

Knowledge to the face.

I actually really enjoy the story though. Keep up the good work, I only wish to help you make your story better. :twilightsmile:

3423336 thanks for the info and I was thinking of the shotgun from metro and fallouts weaponry. but I honestly didn't know whether a revolver had a clip or not I knew for sure it wasn't a mag, but thanks for helping me with those and not insulting me :pinkiesmile:

I'd like to see a crossover with beyond 2 souls

Nice chapter! But I Have a question/suggestion, the suggestion is to please for the love of god not make the ponies OP. And my question is will they eventually get together and settle the misunderstanding that the castle crumbling wasn't their fault?:rainbowkiss:

Halo crossovers have always been my favorite.
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Though I don't mind if the spartan's destroy them. In my opinion there's not enough UNSC vs pony.

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I wish I could tell ya if the UNSC was going to show up. I wish I could tell you if Discord is going to take the side of the ponies or the spartans. I wish I could tell you that they will work out their problems over a cup of tea and some muffins. I wish I could share all the great things I think of to put in this story, but I can't. I can only give you misleading sentences.:trollestia:

Best chapter so far. What a great way to start the day

Meanwhile in the Griffin Kingdom in a forest.

"Wort, Wort, Wort."

What makes me stop reading an awesome story is if any of the mane six die.. I get so many bad feels and the entire mood of the story goes too sour and dark for me to read. --Answer to author's question.

I saw the secret message,

It says:
"The hero has arrived"

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Thank you, finally someone saw that, I will add those into some chapters every now and then.

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I prefer the older flood forms. They just looked... Cooler, I guess.

3928239 I agree, the new ones look crap :applejackunsure:. plus, 343 screwed up by removing MP elites and adding flood insted :ajbemused:

I will stop reading a fic if the human hero is attacked by the mane 6, than instantly forgives them seconds later and they become freinds because of it. I mean, when would anyone forgive someone who just tried to kill them, then become friends because of it!

10/10 would bitchslap Rainbow Dash and Blueballs.

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I could not agree more with your statement and I can tell you this will not happen in the future, in fact I might just make a joke on it.:pinkiehappy:

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I have a sort of talent for finding hidden things... no joke I always find stuff when I am not searching for them like my mom's jewelery...

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Jewelry, money, hidden messages, skulls in Halo, your friends wallet, all easy things to find really. A true test is trying to find your tv remote, now that's a bitch.

Shotgun for sure, nothing is better at kicking flood ass

SAW. Large ammo drum, don't need to reload as often.

The Halo CE Shotgun.
Or the Pistol....
WARNING: EXPLICIT LANGUAGE
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2000 words should never be the norm for a story. It's acceptable for the first few chapters, but after that chapters should be longer.

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... Your right, 2,500-3,000 should be the norm.

For the Flood, pretty much any human weapon.

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exept for the sniper rifle

4103476 No I think all stories after the first few chapters should be 3000+

any AOE weapon, preferably a shotgun (any halo) due to it's high damage capability. fully automatics work ok-ish but hold back in punch and the exchange of damage-range is unequal, leading to spending about 1/2 a mag on a single infected! other UNSC weapons I would use are the Magnum (M6D or M6H), DMR (M395), SAW (M739), or Railgun (ARC-920) :ajsmug:

as for covenant weaponry my preference is a Plasma Repeater, Plasma Rifle, Brute Mauler, Carbine, or, everyone's favourite, the Needler! :pinkiecrazy: or Needle Rifle when at long range :unsuresweetie:

My primary weapon against The Flood? A Covenant Supercarrier. Glass ALL of the things!

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Damn effective, I will give you that, but all the fun of a zombie apocalypse gets ruined. Unless your an evil bastard who would laugh mechanically as they glassed have a continent for one small out break. Then I guess it would still be fun.

4127442 Wait... There's a reaction other than laughing maniacally when using vast quantities of superior firepower against a drastically underpowered foe?

Battle rifle while running like hell screaming blood for the blood god.:pinkiecrazy:

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Good gun with a good plan, I like your style.

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