SPARTAN IV's, the best of the best of the best... Yeah, right. Fireteam Ghost is an... above average team of Spartans. Will the skills this team has be enough to survive on a completly alien world? They're Spartans so probably... hopefully.
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3407143 Nothing can really beat the flood. Unless u have a Halo.
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Ironic, considering that the Flood survives in the research facilities of the Halo rings
3412034 Yep. But still, pretty much wiped out by the Halos.
Wow, this chapter is pure adrenaline! The escape from the Flood, the sacrifice of Chase, the first contact with the Equestrians!
I love the part of the last fight of the SPARTAN against the Flood and the reaction of those on the other side of the portal, the feelings are really well showed.
I have to say, nice work, simply nice work. Keep going this way, the story has much potential
Would be badass if later in the story he opened the portal and walked through with bits of Flood flesh and blood on his armor being like:
Sup, bitches!
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It's a fucking magazine.
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...Once was enough, damn, but thanks for the heads up I'll fix that in later chapters. Clips are what pistols use right?
3419295 its a mag if I remember that a mag is for assault rifles and pistols while the clip is for revolvers, shotgun and the old rifles,
3408916 division by zero?
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Sorry this particular misconception really bothers me.
The springloaded box the holds bullets and feeds a gun is called a magazine.
Some guns actauly use clips. They are literally just clips that hold a certain number of bullets.
Revolvers have a "Cylinder"
Some Shotguns have a Magazine tube directly underneath the barrel. Others can be fed by box magazines.
Knowledge to the face.
I actually really enjoy the story though. Keep up the good work, I only wish to help you make your story better.
3423336 thanks for the info and I was thinking of the shotgun from metro and fallouts weaponry. but I honestly didn't know whether a revolver had a clip or not I knew for sure it wasn't a mag, but thanks for helping me with those and not insulting me
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In theory not even a halo ring could stop the flood
You see a halo ring was built to kill the floods food supply... sentient beings once all sentient life is gone all the floods food is gone and they starve to death.
Okay, a lot more grammar errors than the first chapter. The quality of the writing has gone down quite a bit, but I'm still going to keep reading. I suggest going and getting an editor or just editing the chapters yourself before you upload more, as higher-quality writing WILL attract more readers, as well as keep them.
3419295 like i said, the only firearm i know of that uses a clip is the m1 garand.