SPARTAN IV's, the best of the best of the best... Yeah, right. Fireteam Ghost is an... above average team of Spartans. Will the skills this team has be enough to survive on a completly alien world? They're Spartans so probably... hopefully.
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That was not very good... It was AWSOME! Might wanna consider looking up the actuall names of the guns though e.g BR55 for the battle rifle
And I really like that hope you do moar soon :D
This story is of BAMF quality keep it up please
Wow this was actually pretty good. The whole thing with the slippery shields was new.
I wonder what would happen if the Flood came in Equestria
Twilight: Ok girls, let's use the elements of harmony against the flood!
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VS
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Mane 6 combat form
However, good job!
While they were looking at the portal I imagined the Halo theme playing in the background
There are minor errors here and there but they can be easily fixed when you find them.
This story is incredibly well written. Almost no grammar errors, you've got the Halo lore down near-perfectly, and all the characters are in-character. Just... Incredible.
Not clips! Magazines/mags!
The only gun i have that uses a clip instead of a mag is the m1 garand, which uses an en-bloc clip.
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Alright, should be fixed now. If you spot that mistake again, I'd really appreciate it if you pointed it out.
How have i not read this yet?
now this is forshadowing done right.