SPARTAN IV's, the best of the best of the best... Yeah, right. Fireteam Ghost is an... above average team of Spartans. Will the skills this team has be enough to survive on a completly alien world? They're Spartans so probably... hopefully.
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Best chapter so far. What a great way to start the day
Meanwhile in the Griffin Kingdom in a forest.
"Wort, Wort, Wort."
What makes me stop reading an awesome story is if any of the mane six die.. I get so many bad feels and the entire mood of the story goes too sour and dark for me to read. --Answer to author's question.
I saw the secret message,
It says:
"The hero has arrived"
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Thank you, finally someone saw that, I will add those into some chapters every now and then.
I will stop reading a fic if the human hero is attacked by the mane 6, than instantly forgives them seconds later and they become freinds because of it. I mean, when would anyone forgive someone who just tried to kill them, then become friends because of it!
Don't try to arrest a Spartan. Bad idea all round.
To the authors question,
When the main character suddenly pops out of nowhere into pony civilization and everyone is all like "hey! That new pony/human is totally trustworthy! Give them everything they will ever want without any background checks! Start a romantic relationship within days of character showing up! Pony is suddenly into humans? Great!" Yeah, those suck because it's completely irrational to think that the ponies trust goes to that kind of stupid level
This was a great chapter, but I was greatly disappointed when the secret message wasn't "The Flood has arrived". It would be funny to see the flood just swarm over the entire planet.
4630132 Yeah...But attack first ask question later isn't exactly better.
The hero has arrived? foreshaddowing!
My only problem here is that the princesses seemed to completely disregard Twilight confirming that the "monsters" did not actually attack anyone. In the heat of the moment? Believable. With Twilight & everything having calmed down to the point of thinking rationally? No way should neither of the two considered that maybe these "monsters" we're acting in self defense &/or that it may have been an accident. Essentially, it feels like they're following the trope that I've seen in so many other stories like this.
"If it's not a pony or trusted pony ally, then must always assume they are at fault up until the truth is handed to their face with the force of a major league players home run bat swing."