Spartan Red Team destroyed a Shield World out of UNSC controlled space, destroying the Forerunner fleet that was hidden inside. They leave behind a destroyed world and dieing Covenant fleet, stuck in cryo-sleep until they reach help. Unfortunately, anything but help finds them, and they are thrust into another battle, but a new pawn is thrown into the game, and Equestria is unsure which side will lead not to victory, but survival.
Follows the events of Halo Wars, some parts may seem confusing unless you've played the game. First fan-fic and experimental. Tell me what you really think, whether its a diamond of holy proportions or a piece of crap that should be shoved up a baboons ass.
Chapters (12)
1364907 I agree with the cover image thing, that would be nice and attractive. Also, I've read my share of halo fics. Believe me, i have different plans than the rest ;)
1365006 XD This is actually my third story. I looked at my others before and said "Now that i look at this, I wonder which dumpster I pulled this one from"
1367151 That would be much appreciated! The more views the better
1367278 Where did you come from. :0
:Ificouldfindaninjarainbowdashpicturewithacaptionsaying'feellikeaninja'iwouldtotallyputitherebecauseofyourname,buticouldnt.darn.:
Have fun reading that.
1367629 Obviously i did something right, i half expected this to crash and burn XD
Nice to see everybody is liking it though :D
1367671 If you really want to know, the next chapter is already done, but i don't want to put it out so quickly, for the main fact that i had the stupid idea of taking an Advanced Placement History class, and homework is kicking my ass to Jupiter. I plan on spacing it out a bit, hopefully every week or two weeks. Of course, this might not follow through all the time, but I will try and make a deadline for each chapter.
1367759 Well, if i post the chapter now, people will think im some kind of rapid fire posting machine gun, and a lot of the stories I've read take up to two months to post a chapter. And yes, its APUSH. So. Many. Notes.
1367809 Yes, I actually asked my teacher if i could bring my laptop to school. I'm gonna be sitting there tapping away all like 'you peeps be jelly up in here?' So hopefully it wont become to much of a problem. The MAIN Main problem of APUSH is SIX EXAMS A YEAR. My first is actually this Tuesday, So I'm attempting to write out the entire bloody book XD. Well, the first five chapters anyway.
1367844 O.o Ok then, next chapter coming up!
1367895 Probably gonna get a better chapter title, and didn't get to check through it as much as the first, but i hope you like it
And I'm callin it a night, see yall tomorrow!
This is relevant to my interestes. I will look forward to more.
I noticed that you sort of flip floped around when you described their weapon load out. For the sniper you said he took 6 rounds when I think you meant magazine. I belive you also did the same thing with the case-less sub machine gun by using clip instead of magazine.
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I really enjoyed the descriptive elements and the story so far but I am sorry that I need nerd out a bit on this.
I think that fight was more difficult then it should have been. Ponies are about 4 foot, spike is slightly shorter than that by a little bit. The dragons from 'Dragon Quest' (who I assume are being used in this story) are roughly double spikes height making them between 7 and 8 foot tall. Douglas is 7'4" and his armor would add more height. With the armor he would also weigh more than a ton and posses enough physical strength to flip a Scorpion main battle tank weighing 66 metric tons (3 ton Warthog with one hand). Spartans were also trained extensively in many forms of close combat. It should have been far easier for him to overpower the juvenile dragons in hand to hand combat and far more difficult for the dragons to shift his weight.
Overall have a like and fave. I look forward to seeing this progress. Keep up the good work.
1368819 I do slightly agree, but i would imagine that dragons are very strong, even at juvenile age. Obviously, I'm not an expert on them... probably because they don't really exist... Even though i might have added some extra power. Add the fact that these Spartans use the older MJOLNIR Mark IV (Two levels under the current armor) they are not as powerful as, say, John-117 from the current Halo series. The events of Halo Wars were at the very start of the war, 21 years before what takes place in Halo: Combat Evolved. Also, i didn't want to make him to overpowered.
As for the clips, I probably was looking for more of a variety and ended up putting that in there. Must've been derpin out.
I will fix it, thanks for the help!
1369096
There is no such power as an Overpower....
or is it overkill?
Mark 4 MJOLNIR Armour didn't have energy shields
1370177 I knew this, and it was slightly confusing whether or not to show it in the story. If you've played Halo Wars, then you will know the Spartans are shown as having a shield. Not only that, but the armor used in Halo: Reach is actually the Mark IV variant. I just decided to use the shielding for the heck of it.
Interesting.
Proceed.
The MJOLNIR armor did have shields... well chief got the first one followed by the other spartans.... based on the books at least....
spartans are so kick ass nothing in equestria can stop them not even dragons
Wondering whether anybody will like your story is one thing, but wondering if you'll accidentally fuck it up with one bad chapter is worse.
I feel like that right now, I think i could've done more...
In response to the ending, fighting the deities of the sun and moon!
1382031 trust me when i say that you didn't fuck up here. Good amount of pacing, and good tension between the two parties. Keep it up!
its pretty cool. I just never liked when they main characters of a story like this (atleast 120 humans on the ship_, with, due to protocols in place ever since that good ol' titanic incident, make sure there are enough lifeboats for everyone... Wish you atleast brought a few other people along
"What's the worst that could happen" ...you just HAD to say it didn't you...
Phew. Thats great to know everybody liked it. Its nice to come back from school with a shit-ton of homework and see everybody likes it. Takes away a lot of stress and warms me heart.
Anyway, I hope you guys hated the cliffhanger back in chapter one.
How about we see how Alice is doing in the next chapter?
1382480 Good point... i wonder how she is doing. *wonders*
we must know.
$50 says she's getting her clock cleaned by the Princess.
MOAR!!!
pls
Why do I get the felling that Alice is going to be jumping though a window and off the side of the mountain. Also should have said this in the last chaper:
FIRST STRIKE grifball.net/images/medals/firststrike.png
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With all the royal guards that will be after her, when shes done her top medals will be:
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Unfrigginbelievable images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100911143261/halo/images/4/47/Unfrigginbelievable!.png
and
Perfection! images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100911144743/halo/images/e/e1/Perfection!.png
That is if the author goes that way.
1384287 Well I think we would all be disappointed if the Spartans lost to technicolor ponies and your spree only ends when you die so perfection is well within their capabilities. I seriously hope that Alice can hold her own against Celestia. All she should need to do is get a hold of Celestia's horn and start bending it. I doubt Celestia could imagine something as small as a Spartan being able move several dozen tones... or that Alice can kneecap her from across the room.
Also why is it that when something falls from the sky the royal guard always seem to think its a good idea to poke it? And always at the worst possible time like when it just starts to wake up?
Killing spree
Awesome chapter, please keep it up
1384491
way to full of themselves.
Because there that stupid, unlucky, and just to cocky. I mean if something fell out of the sky near me I, personally, would run like hell and observe from a distance. Royal guards on the other hand apparently think they can take on what ever just fell through the atmosphere and survived...
1388482 and very entertaining.
"What's the worst that could happen?" Famous last words.
Alrighty then. This new chapter can be kinda... Well, not for the faint-of-heart. Please tell me if i should switch this to mature, cause I'm not really sure what would count as that.
1395013
Na. Teen is fine. Mature is for clop fics and gorefest massacres.
1395035 alright, thank you :)
nice chapter. and also, thanks for making the ponies not aware of what a human is. every freaking halo/MLP crossover have that so thank you once again.
and also, teen is fitting for this story.
1395056 Celestia looked like she might have had a clue.
1395150 fuck
Keeping a Spartan locked up in a prison?
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1395150 no, they do not know what a human is.
I laughed so hard when Alice ran into Luna!
That was an amazing chapter! I'm kind of disappointed that Celestia just put her to sleep though.
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hehe... yeah, saw those two having that conversation up there and said, 'ah, what the heck?'
1395345 you wanted her to kill Alice?!
if she did then they're gonna be knee deep in shit with the U.N.S.C
an you know what it means when they mess with them, they get pulled in the war
you wouldnt want that now would you?
1395932 No I didn't want her to kill Alice, I'm just saying it seemed a bit too easy.
Kinetic bombardment from orbit is always fun though.