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Delta Blade


Just an average storyteller. Though quite busy in real life, when I do get time I do enjoy entertaining those who will listen...

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I'll just put this in my read later list.
Time to go to bed! :ajsleepy:

THREE WORDS.
TOO. MUCH. HALO.
Just too much ;-;...

Brilliant, I would LOVE to read more of this! Keep the chapters coming. :pinkiehappy:

Saw this story on fanfiction.net. In my option, I didn't quite like how you portrayed Celestia in the story. The part in where she ask why other species don't outlaw war to have harmony kinda made her quite naive in that part.

Ok now that I have had a chance to read this I can say I am enjoying this. But do you really need this to be a comedy? I noticed the comedy tag and I never enjoyed the idea of adding humor to something so dark.

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Terrific. Keep going on with the story.

You are on a roll today. I haven't seen anyone type this fast.

Your profile picture seems fimiliar. I think it's the background art for a story called Article 2

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Actually, Dartagnen, I had already made and posted these chapters beforehand (or "beforehoof") for another fanfiction website.

If u want 2 visit it, u can go to fanfiction.net

Also,
that`s it 4 all the chapters that I`ve already made.
The newest one is still in the making so I`m afraid that you`ll have 2 wait,
sorry 4 the dissapointment :fluttercry: (hehe, that`s the first time that I`ve done that!)

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It is actually,
I just thought it`d be fitting, since I like stories where humans come to Equestria (whether it be a crossover or not).

BTW
The first chapter of this story takes place in the Scorchedlands.

I understand that the map I provided you doesn`t have a label for this place.

If you want to know where the Scorchedlands are, they are that area in the southwest corner of the map (the place with all the volcanoes).

I know you added a comedy tag to this but, the calmness of Laskey about this is just getting to me.

You really have given us a lot exposition in a few minutes, a bit to much I think.

2852396 there can never be enough Halo...

wtf are we in the sixth movie of Harry Potter. not that there's anything wrong with that movie.....

You use a apostrophe (') for things like "That's" not tilde. :pinkiesick:

Decent. Still not sure if I like it or not. I guess i'll wait and see.

:rainbowlaugh:Celestia & Lasky sitting in a tree F.U.C.K.I.N.G first comes love then aaah fuck it you know the rest!:trollestia:

"I understand that you`ve come here looking for six forerunner artifacts, am I correct?"
"Yeah, how…how`d you know that?"
"Oh, just a lucky guess," said the princess sarcastically.

He just said he was only there for the artifacts on Chapter 4. Why is he acting so surprise?

The lasers incinerate on skin contact? Spartans are all good then.

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yeah, its not that different to plasma

Isn't it spelled "Lasky"?

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Yes...yes it is

thanks for the correction it seems that I started mispelling his name after chapter 4:twilightsheepish:

I`ll try 2 spell it right from now on

thanks again! :pinkiehappy:

This sounds cool. Faved and liked. :yay:

Well, hopefully the SPARTAN-IV fire teams are sufficient to keep the security at the palace intact. Also, I think it would be an interesting plot twist if, say, Prince Shining Armor had been replaced by a changeling spy. :trollestia:

A real master peace you've got their this is were the halo music would play lol

Kill the humans? Ha! Good one, ya write these down?

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Yeah, I want to see what the changeling's reaction to the SPARTAN-IVs will be. They'll probably be just as stunned as everyone else. And the other guards may end up doing their job as diligently as possible in an attempt to one up the Spartans. :trollestia:

3011386 The possibility of one upping a Spartan? Ha! Good one, ya write these down?

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Big MacIntosh: Eenope :eeyup:

Mac, let me talk. Anyway, no I did not write these down. Besides, I'll point out that Spartans are just modified humans in power armor. They have feelings, and they are fallible.

3011431 Be honest, do you think anyone --or pony - or ling-- could beat a Spartan? Plus the Changelings' lasers hafta touch bare skin to disintegrate a being. And even if the lasers can cut through Guard armor, Mjlnoir armor? No chance. Lets not even take into account how hilariously outgunned the Changelings are.

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Might I point out that to completely incinerate someone near instantaneously due to a grazing hit requires massive amounts of heat. Sure, Mjolnir armor is tough, but can it survive something that is several thousand degrees Farenheight, that never needs to reload or stop firing due to overheat, and is accurate to as far away as the user can see? I'll believe it when I can see it.

3011506 SRS99-S2 Sniper Rifle. Pack it up boys, wars over.

if you played all through spartan ops, then you should know that at the end, doc. halsey has one of her arms amputated. sort of a small plot hole, but saying she clapped her hands together kinda threw me off. if she got a prosthetic, say so. other than that, i like it so far.

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Exactly how do you intend to snipe something that could be anyone, anywhere?

3014328 Exactly! They can weaken the ponies 'on accident' and after they kill the Changelings, they can take over Equestria! I Win. This is no longer up for debate. :ajsmug:

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I think FLEETCOM would NOT be happy with that type of action.

3011506 But remember humanity not only put up with the covenant but also the flood and the forerunners. The changelings won't stand a chance.:twilightsmile:

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I'll point out that was with the help of John-117. Without him, the covenant would have won, and it would have been game set and match for humanity.

Anyone know what the Chat rules mean with the message about the Konami Code at the end? (If you are unsure what the Konami Code is, look it up). I'm curious, but I don't think it works if you aren't the person who wrote the story. :applejackunsure:

3015006 That may be true but remember humanity as a species are incredibly stubborn and do not go down without a fight. We should know that better than anyone sense we are humans, besides we have an entire army of spartins on board the Infinity. So I still think the changelings are screwed.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Let's note that the "army of SPARTANs" aboard UNSC Infinity are mostly undergoing training. And while humanity may have a technological advantage, the changelings have a numerical advantage. Superior tech does not work if you are being attacked by 15 enemies at once. :moustache:

3016639 Yes but those same spartans in training were out numbered by enemies that were once considered to be far more superior than any other race in the galaxy. Besides the crew of the Infinity are not the only humans out there, even know they are probly going aginst many UNSC regulations and protocol doing what they are doing.:twilightsmile:

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Care to explain? I don't believe the Infinity fought against any hostile forces during Halo 4.

3016939 During the campaign Infinitycrashed on Requiem. They had to not only fight off the covanant and their ships but also Didact and his prometheans. Then 6 months later when they go back to Requeium the prometheans got back on the Infinity. That is after Crimson team scored the first grab with the forerunner artifact. Oh I also forgot to put that Master Chief was not involved in the last part if you didn't know.

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Huh. That's interesting. Did they use the Infinity's weapon systems at all during either of those fights to provide fire support for their forces? If so, I say it doesn't count for as much as John-117 doing the same almost entirely without fire support of any kind. Also, the AI's may have had their tech damaged. In other words, it could have been a case of the trope known as Worf Had The Flu, where a normally powerful character/individual/faction is reduced in power by some outside circumstance, and a weaker character/individual/faction takes the victory through sheer luck. And the Covenant aren't all that powerful in comparison to humanity.

3017295 Um I do know that they used Infinities weapon system in campang. Also during Spartin Ops they used Infinity itself to ram straight though a particularly large covanant ship after they exited slipspace. Oh and the Foreruner AI's that commited the second attack on Infinity was just a hit and grab tatic now that I did some research on the matter. And with the covanant, they may not be all powerful compared to humanity but I still consider them a worthy foe. But all in all the enemy eventually alway looses, but not without casualties I suppose.:twilightsmile:

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