An ODST ends up on an un-mapped sector of the universe. He discovers a world that is inhabited by humans while he was tracking down a damaged Covenant Corvette which was carrying a valuable object that belonged to the UNSC.
Equestria has been at war for three years against the Griffin Kingdom. When the alien ship crashes the Equestrians discovered that they are not alone. When the ODST encounters the natives he learns that no matter where he goes war is still the same.
ALL MLP characters Humanized. Equestria and the rest of the world have achieved certain inventions. Cars, Planes, Phones and stuff like that.
Sorry for the terrible description.
HALO belongs to bungie
MLP:FIM belong to hasbro
coverart image is by johnjoseco
Chapters (23)
....... ok?
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thank you
I can see this story picking up very, very soon
Sorry... but you really need an editor, this isn't bad but it needs some work to bring out the potential.
Lol
In the cover picture you have Shining, Celestia, and Luna all looking bad ass, and then Cadance looks like Princess Peach.
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She really does.
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i already have an editor. a prereader is something i need.
This looks intriguing? Maybe? Either way it should be a fun little read.
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thank you so much.
also hows it been have talked in a while.
FYI, Halo is owned by Microsoft, not Bungie.
3246070 well it was actually both but now it's
343 industries and Microsoft
Seems interesting, I want more.
Hey i think you need an editor. Not about grammar your grammar is fine but about the halo stuff, you put in that an elite attacked a human but you said this was all after the battle for earth which 9 days after the battle for Earth the Elites rebelled and made an alliance with the humans. I would be glad to help if you want
3245808 See what many people dont know is that the regular soldiers arnt marines they are wearing UNSC army outfits,
A few grammatical mistakes but it seems interesting enough
3247152 a few? u mean a shit ton and for most of the chapter i had no clue as to what was going on but like u said interesting idea.
That escalated quickly.
Alright u got my attention
3245491 nigga I got ur back.
when in doubt NUKE IT
but I like it so far just don't bring the covenant quite a few halo fim stories get ruined by them.
SPKon. Long time no read.
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Its been pretty good. I was almost diagnosed with gangrene :( but other than that it has been nice. Got some letter to play lax at the D1 schools like Denver University and UVA. But some d2 and d3 as well. Still no letter from Navy or Air Force though to get into their academy.
How about you though?
*reads title* another kind of humanity? Like dark souls? *reads description* eh whatever, good enough
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they are not. My story on has them appear in the first chapter and they are only mentioned
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Awesome. also cool user page
3250077 thanks story great by the way
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SO and so. I've been really busy with College and work that I'm feeling stressed out.
And to make things worse a douche-bag crashed into my car and he just left. WTF. He was filed as hit and run. i made a deal with him thou. he would pay for the parts and i would drop the charges. so he did and i had the parts to repair the car. Yes i know auto-mechanics thanks to my uncle. i felt like crap this last week but i'm pulling through. i have GTA V and my uncle let me borrow HALO 2 limited edition game. i actually found the Juggernaut Flood.
other than that i'm ok i think.
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back at ya
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My brother sold our halo: combat evolved original game the year edition and our halo 2/3 limited editions. But we have an emulator so its somewhat all good
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that would have been worth something in the future. ? did you found the Juggernaut Flood on HALO2
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Its been a while since I've played but I think so when we had the original xbox.... I don't remember
ok a little rough but its pretty interesting
this is good
I feel like reading this. But then there is that tragedy tag..... not that tragedies make bad stories but I have a tendency to not like the because of the feels.
.... More....
Looks interesting I just hope you planned this out
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No offense to your editor, but he's not doing a brilliant job.
3247086 yeah I know that I have read many of the books.
I would had though of changelings as eternal enemies of equestria...
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sorry you feel that way. :(
I'm sorry but your editor sucks. It's almost un-readable.
This is . . . ok, but not as good as it could be. You need to get yourself an editor, or if you already have one then get a new one because your current one is dragging the story down. Remember, ODSTs are the best of the best. Just a step below SPARTANS. They remain calm and collected no matter the situation, no matter who or what they may face.
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I've been getting alot about my editor and I'm really sorry for that. I'll look for a new editors.
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That is not necessarily true. I can think of a number of occasions where ODSTs were kind of panicking. But you're basically right.
So um... any ideas when a new chapter will come out
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already written I just need a new editor. To many complaints about my current onem
thanks
Sorry to tell you this, but this chapter was almost unreadable.
So awesome!
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sorry you feel like that. I'm having a really hard time to finding a good editor for this story. But thanks for reading