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Hunter Knight


Just someone whose creativity switches from On to Off, but it's actually unplugged right now too.

Comments ( 52 )

A lot of minor issues and in need of edits, but otherwise alright.

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Yeah the prologue I need to revise, thanks

A few spelling errors I can see, but still a very good story so far! Also to help grammar and spelling get grammarly for google drive

Other than your marrige the elipisis, its pretty good cant wait to read more!

Wait, aren't vanguard class titans only for militia pilots? Otherwise good work!

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Is grammarly now compatible with Google Docs?

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In my opinion, anyone partnered with the Militia like the 6-4 or the Angel City Elites have their own Vanguard Titans or got the pieces nessessary to make them.

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You copy/paste it onto grammarly, that's what I do when I'm writing a paper.

XAgentHunter- Yeah, that makes sense

8443623
Yeah its a add-on in the google web store which is free

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I've used it a bit for my essays and at some point I'll use it for my own fic I've got an idea for.

These Grunts’ aim is worse than a pack of Stormtroopers.

My exact thought when playing the campaign.

Interesting story, ill keep my eye on this. Keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

I Hope Thorax isn't among the casualties

In a land of many species, I can see them disregarding the 'strange creature' argument, but that acceptance was fairly fast. Take your fights slower too, we aren't racing here. I really should pick up TitanFall 2, sounds great.

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Trust me, in reality, all these ponies are too trusting that doesn't mean they'll have their suspicions eventually.

I believe this is the third Titanfall crossover I've read that happens during the canterlot wedding. XD
Otherwise it's good.

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Which one had the best fight? I would love to read it.

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I don't remember, they've all since gone inactive.

If the main OCs of this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Ok one thing the description confused me at one point the human is called Tyler later logan what is his name?

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When you realize that you forgot to replace the name with Tyler...fuck.

I edited that, thanks. His name is Tyler but when I was making the first chapter, his name was originally going to be Logan, XL was still XL.

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lol, XL would sound like BT or Ronin from Titanfall 2 tbh, and Tyler...I don't know...I'll need to think about it because I can't just say Matthew Mercer obviously.

holy shit man 10/10 would irrationaly rate high again!

I'm actually liking something made by you...What is wrong with me?
i.imgur.com/toFiY9l.jpg

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Lol, the world is about to fall into chaos xD

*sees new chapter*




HOLY *BEEP* IT'S FUCKING ALIVE!!


PRAISE BE TO FAN FICTION JESUS FOR HE HAS GIVEN US A SIGN THAT THIS FIC IS NOT DEAD!!

Reads the part where he's shooting at Chrysalis' feet laughing. Yeah great job conserving ammo there buddy.

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Lol, he was actually shooting at her hooves and legs to hurt her there but her dancing was kinda dodging them, so Tyler decided to be Tyler and be a cocky asshole

One correction. Vanguards are reserved for the SRS.

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I like to think that other factions partnered with the SRS and Militia would probably be given their own Vanguards like the 6-4 Elite Team (Gate's Team) which Tyler is apart of.

I might definitely be wrong on that but that's info I cannot get my hands on but it wouldn't seem illogical imo.

yea update I like were this story is going and I can't wait for more chapters to come out soon:twilightsmile:

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