Fluttershy meets a strange creature while running an errand in the Everfree Forest. It is nothing like she has ever seen, and it may be more than it seems.
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The Chronicler
An archiver of the Equestrian Multiverse - a silent observer and sometimes concerned third party. Welcome to my tower.
The Chronicler
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this is a damn good story it kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time
8181950 Thank you!
8181964 no problem i cant wait to see where the story goes
Wow, this is very nice, you just earned a favorite, keep it up!
Wow awesome first chapter please keep up the good work.
:twilightsmile good work.
I would definitely like to read more. Hope to see more of this soon!
damn pony is messing with natural selection again.
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Thank y'all for your support! I already have a pretty good idea of what I want to do with Chapter Two. Funny thing is I know most of what will happen in the last half of the story, but the build up to that point is the tricky part.
8183324 PETA pony is gonna PETA
8183368 nope peta don't interfere with nature, well at least last time i checked.
that badger is going to eat all of fluttershy's animals and her face while she sleeps.
8183495 if so she already ded
This is a great beginning, full of dark atmosphere and scenery. However, you need to give some plausible reason as to why Flutters didn't simply take wing. I know it's more dramatic that she didn't, but there needs to be a reason why she didn't.
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Hmm... I thought I mentioned it somewhere, but I guess not. I think it's mentioned in some episode that her wings lock up when she gets scared - maybe Dragonshy?
Hmm... It appears Fimfiction is having trouble formatting the first line of each section. Every paragraph is indented except for the first one and the one after ever line break. Does anyone have any suggestions for that or is it just one of those things?
oh im glad that its not been forgotten this is a really good story
I don't know. But I'm anxious to see more.
No way. It just takes me some time to make sure my horse words are good horse words!
I say...this might be better than mine XD
Let's see, is he a Brony?
Ahh this is great! Cannot wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
I didn't know this had updated until I checked my feed.
It didn't show with the rest of the unread chapters.
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Hmm... Well I only updated it an hour or two ago, and I did take it down for like half a second because I forgot to attach my author's note. So that might be it.
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yea that would do it
new favorite read
I really enjoyed it, good job Chronicler!
well this is going to be intresting
Yepyepyepyepyepyepyepfavotirelikeloveyepyepyepyepyepdoitnowyepyepyepyepyep.
So... I'm guessing a Ethan Sandlow crossover?
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Nope, not a crossover! I've never even heard of that author until I looked him up a second ago. This character is purely an OC.
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Yes, Lyall has quite an interesting backstory (imo) that will be revealed little by little.
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Yee!
Wow, Luna’s gonna get involved? Well this will end well...
Werewolf? I was waiting till someone would make one.
Guy needs to sell tickets to his dreamscape...
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lol I agree
Omg, I already had this added to my ‘read later’ list! Lol.
Please continue!
Why was this cancelled?
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Not cancelled. I've been steadily ticking away at the next chapter, but I've been very busy lately. I am currently working on a farm for the next several months and only have a couple hours of free time per day. My stories have not been abandoned, but I am only able to get a couple paragraphs down a night if I'm lucky =/
lyall later used that muffin for bait
I hear if you melt the brown ones in hot water it makes hot chocolate!
Wow, I almost forgot about this story; however, reading through it all again just reminded me of how great it was.
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Same
This was a good chapter. Not sure how it will play out being a werewolf and all entirely but we'll written nonetheless.
Wwweeelll..okay then that happens!
Good story keep the chappies a comein plz.
nice work and welcome to 2019.
So, I expected this to be the average HIE. Wasn’t really keeping my hopes to high. Then I read the first paragraph, and had to look up two of the words because I almost never see them used. O_O NICE Description.
Luna just proved she could speak in Modern Equish with only minor difficulty, which obviously helped her to connect with the ponies she talked to. It's pretty clear that speaking Ye Olde Royale Equishe isn't doing her any favors, so why is she still doing it?
........um. Come again?
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Translation: "Where do you think we should start?"
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That’s what I thought. Just wasn’t sure of the exact wording. Good work with this story!
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Habit, mostly